AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Originally posted by: PupCat
Chap 12 part 3
Awesome update!

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thanks pape...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

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Wonderful updates

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Amazing chapter
jalal is so bad
how can he do this to jodha
psycho lover😆

my poor jodha
finally richo mil gaya
yap...my darling Rico😳

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ---Mehak---
wao P 🤗
Wat a fantastic update ...
really .. i luvd it to the core
really tat was such a fantastic update .. brilliant !

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rachana999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Hi,

u r one of my favourite⭐️. Again u rocked. I liked both jalal and jodha's feelings. For the first time , I pity a guy who raped a girl😭. It is becoz of u. The way u portrait jalal's feelings is superb👏. But it is very hard for jodha to accept him. At the end of chap., it took me few mins that it is just a fictional story. Great.👏👏👏 I WANT TO KNOW WHO KIDNAPPED RICO.I have few names.

PLEASE UPDATE AT THE EARLIEST .PLS.

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abhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

PP another wonderful chapter 3...You are a excellent wonderful writer, showing both JJ feelings..

You perfectly put down, both Jalaal and Jodha feelings on that day which changed their lives..I can understand Jalaal desire, lust & love WANT HER POSSES HER...

I feel very bad the way he forced her, especially that bitting her and forcing himself on her.. Poor Jodha she had to bear this, neither she has the power nor energy, at the end she was a prey to the DEVIL Jalaal..That day Jodha lost everything..

Jalaal wanted to marry her and give her everything she deserves but still even now he didn't see or understand Jo doesn't want HIM, especially after this force he killed her soul and Jalaal knew that what he did was wrong, still wanted her to marry him ? How can she even she him ?...

I surely want to know how Jodha gone through the tough times of her life after this RAPE.. She is literally dieing every day still now she could feel the pain when Jalaal comes near her..

I think he unable to return, as he had accident and he lost to be able to become father again...

Finally Rico was found, now JO will surely wants to leave.. Waiting to what Jalaal will do to stop her especially now he wants Jo & his kid..Waiting to see who is the kidnaper..

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey PP 🤗

How are you ...??? & thanks a lottt ... finally our long wait is over & u updated part 3 ... !!

I want to literally hug you for giving such a beautiful chapter PP ... oh the way u have handled such a sensitive topic so beautiful ...though it was dreadful to read & imagine the plight of jodha 😭... but u have equally balanced both jodha's & jalal's thoughts & only a talented writer like you can do this perfect job👏!!! I take bow my dear !!! I think this chapter was a masterpiece writing from your end 👏 !!!

(statutory warning - dont get me wrong , I do not wish to hurt anybody's sentiments here 😳.& my friends to not bash me for the statement's I am going to make as well , as i am just pouring my thoughts😳) ...

Okay getting back to the topic , I felt enraged & sad for jodha & jalal !!! as you know I am a diehard jallu fan ... a part of me is happy that jodha became jalal's & a part of me is enraged on jalal😡 for taking such a drastic step ... but I also could feel his helplessness & the need to make jodha HIS (Pyaar mein pagal insaan kya kya gunah kar deta hai ) .. though the path was wrong against his rules , ethics ... but it felt right for him at that moment ...if jodha was fighting , then even jalal was fighting with his inner self 😭 , my heart is torn between jalal & jodha equally 😭 ...

I would say here situation & fate was cruel on both ...I know what u might be feeling, me giving such statements being a women ...but I can sense the pain for jalal & jodha equally ... I dont knw how to putforth my thoughts more on this, as currently I am left speechless with this update ... 👏

But even after what jalal has done to jodha ... he did feel the sting of jodha's pain of what she has gone through ... at the end of the day , he was not just any man .. who would walk off after lusting a girl & moved ahead forgetting her ... he did intend to marry her , give her all the happiness, ... now that is what I appreciate jalal ...though I would say the path was wrong but did he had any choice ??? No !! he loves her truly , madly & this madness , desire, does not have any name ... or you can say .. jalal does not know what to name it ...

And as the title suggests "No name to my desire" surely jalal's deep , rooted love, madness , DESIRE does not have a name YET... but I am sure , given a chance jalal will sure give a name to this desire for his jodha & that will be pure love , care & regret for his actions 👍🏼

I dont know what to say more 😒... i hope u are trying to understand what I want to say😳 ... btw rico is found !!! yippiieee 🥳 eager to know who is the kidnapper 😡 ... I hope jalal thrashes him for touching HIS & JODHA's ONLY baby & HIS ONLY HOPE of happiness !!!

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

Varsha dear.. In all your reply.. just let's interchange the hero character.. if someone else had done the same to Jodha with a genuine intention of marriage, sincere love or what so ever.. would you approve of it?

Why should she pay for his love/desire? It's his problem that he loved her without knowing her background. Here the problem is his and pain is Jodha's.

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Varsha dear.. In all your reply.. just let's interchange the hero character.. if someone else had done the same to Jodha with a genuine intention of marriage, sincere love or what so ever.. would you approve of it?

Why should she pay for his love/desire? It's his problem that he loved her without knowing her background. Here the problem is his and pain is Jodha's.

Yes I agree to ur point jahnu ...& if u read my comment clearly I mentioned one part i am enraged on jalal & other is sad for jodha ... thatz why I said I am torn in betw jodha & jalal ... !! also what he has done is wrong ... but then at that time he felt it right , which was wrong no doubt about it ... but he too was fighting with his self ... as said by PP irrevocably mad in love ... that is wat has forced jalal to do this grave mistake , he could have taken some other step of marrying jodha ...any ways end of the story its fiction of jalal& jodha ... so me being jalal fan cannot see jodha with anybody else 😆 as said by jalal whatever it takes 😆😉

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Yes I agree to ur point jahnu ...& if u read my comment clearly I mentioned one part i am enraged on jalal & other is sad for jodha ... thatz why I said I am torn in betw jodha & jalal ... !! also what he has done is wrong ... but then at that time he felt it right , which was wrong no doubt about it ... but he too was fighting with his self ... as said by PP irrevocably mad in love ... that is wat has forced jalal to do this grave mistake , he could have taken some other step of marrying jodha ...any ways end of the story its fiction of jalal& jodha ... so me being jalal fan cannot see jodha with anybody else 😆 as said by jalal whatever it takes 😆😉

Let me accept it was an impromptu decision just not to lose her.. but why can't he stop with one such devilish attempt.. claiming a lifeless soul again and again is like ____ with a corpse.. I may sound harsh, but that's what I felt.. and thank god PP aptly named it "DESIRE", not LOVE...