AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 102

Originally posted by: Tehzeeb89

Awesome updates... U written it perfectly their inner thought, their feelings towards each other n most importantly jodha's pain n her feeling towards jalal act... I cried for jodha... Hats off to u sweetly... Very well written... U made it clear to us the readers about their feelings

thanks tehzeeb for such wonderful words...😳

n I can understand jalal's insecure ness by jodha's no but he took wrong shortcut which make he the villain in the eyes of jodha but I am very sure soon u'll make jodha fall for him hope so soon... Rico yup finally they found him he is the one who will make our lead be together... N Abdul he is nice buddy... Again u nail it by ur awesome choppy as usual n pls update soon... Y no precap???? Eagerly waiting for ur next update...

Rico akela toh sab kar nehi payega...i thnk mujhe bhi haath lagana parega...😆

Originally posted by: vinitaj27

Loved it loved it loved it! Pls do update soon. Can't wait to read further.

Originally posted by: ashwini.bhr

Wow,You can write a novel dear.

You are an amazing writter

tum log bhi na...kitni tariff karti ho😆

Originally posted by: justlovetv

PP, that was a really awesome update! So we finally come to know what transpired in that guest house!😲 And I must say that it was terrible that Jodha had to go through all this! Jalal cannot be excused for this at all! Firstly he called her to that place by tricking her and then he violated her!😡

Poor Jodha went through so much torment; pleading him to leave her alone and stop what he was doing. But everything fell on deaf ears as Jalal was just not in his senses. He was consumed by an unending desire for her! He was afraid that his life would become hell if she went away from him! But that was no way to handle the situation!

At first I thought that he only desired and lusted for Jodha. But it did seem like he regretted harming her like that. You showed two contrasting situations so well. For Jalal it was something so beautiful that happened between them but for Jodha it was worse than death! He kept touching and caressing her but his touch was like fire engulfing her body!

they both have their own logics...but nothing justifies what jalal has done...its up to jodha how she handle the future...

But PP I applaud you for writing such a scene with so much sensitivity!👏👏👏 It must be really a task to describe such torment in words!

haan yaar...dimag kharab ho gaya tha mera...yeh chappy likhne ke chakkar me🥱

The last scene seemed like a ray of hope, a new beginning! I hope it is so! Please update soon!

update to abhi bohot door hai 😆

Originally posted by: gauriS

omg awesome update. i dont know from where to start.the way you have written jodha's physical as well as mental struggle to save her world her dignity is really heart touching had tears in my eyes😭

on the other hand jalal's inner battle between the devil n morality is also written amazingly👏

thanku thanku thanku thanku thanku😳😳

all cleared now. why she didnt want to see him,didnt want to let him know about the child n hiding her small world. this guy is disgusting. poor girl.

it will be really interesting to read how you change this character from selfish possessor to a selfless lover n how they reunite.

yap...dats a journey from selfish to selfless😳

thank god rico mil gaya finally.😃

continue soon😊.

RICo...my darling😆

Originally posted by: khushiparmar

Intersting chap...
U hv writen it very well

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

wow!!!!
fantastic update...
jalal is obssessed about jodha and veryuch possesive...
i hope jodha will see the brighter side of him...
continue soon...
cant wait to read abt rico...

Originally posted by: Brishti22

Awesome PP.Just awesome...Mindblowing!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

You have penned Jalal & Jodha both's situation beautifully...It.it was just superb...U made my day...Please please try to update the next part soon...Aww...Rico is back...😳 😳...I am damn happy...🥳

Originally posted by: chandgothia

Awsome update...i actually had goosebumps...plz update soon..i am always super excited to read ur updates...

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

awww...itni tariff!!!!

🤗

next update me time lagega