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Gosh after reading all the 35 chapters i am so intrigued about the story that i don't know what else to write here. Bhavini di i am awestruck at two things, first the concept of your FF and story is just mind blowing! The way it began and is still continuing is just so interesting that it has hooked the readers towards it. Secondly your writing capacity 😆 itni badi updates kaise likh lete ho 😲 but i have no complaints lol i was thoroughly enjoying my reading time 😆
Jodha and jalal's journey was very beautifully explained by you since the start...whether it be jodha loathing him in the start then jalal giving her a piece of mind by harassing her mentally as well as physically...but i am glad jalal stopped suddenly when he was trying to shove himself on her...jodha stopped doing krishna's puja affected jalal so much! That was amazingly penned btw.
Then that tree scene was soo romantic...loved it absolutely! First intimate scene amongst AkDha was brilliantly written. Then all the misunderstandings and then the realizations were very nicely portrayed. Their first SR was beautifully descripted, it was magical and passionate! The camp scene and the views wow! Plus abdul is very sweet here, i so like his characterization. Then i loved the tracks after that...jodha being declared mallika...they both teasing each other, their love their glances everything was so cute and sweet! The epic heartbreak track which just got finished was truly amazing, the way it started and then finished, woah so amazing! Their pain of separation and their feelings were aptly emoted by you. Jodha being hira and jalal sensing jodha's touch was superrr...then their fight and jalal winning...then the rain sequence and after that the hut scene was amazing. Now its marriage time! That kanika is so disgusting huh...i loved that jalal ka "inaam" scene ;) jodha manaofying him was amazing. Now i am waiting for the next! Update soon! Superr FF di! Keep it up_/\_
Gosh after reading all the 35 chapters i am so intrigued about the story that i don't know what else to write here. Bhavini di i am awestruck at two things, first the concept of your FF and story is just mind blowing! The way it began and is still continuing is just so interesting that it has hooked the readers towards it. Secondly your writing capacity 😆 itni badi updates kaise likh lete ho 😲 but i have no complaints lol i was thoroughly enjoying my reading time 😆
Jodha and jalal's journey was very beautifully explained by you since the start...whether it be jodha loathing him in the start then jalal giving her a piece of mind by harassing her mentally as well as physically...but i am glad jalal stopped suddenly when he was trying to shove himself on her...jodha stopped doing krishna's puja affected jalal so much! That was amazingly penned btw.
Then that tree scene was soo romantic...loved it absolutely! First intimate scene amongst AkDha was brilliantly written. Then all the misunderstandings and then the realizations were very nicely portrayed. Their first SR was beautifully descripted, it was magical and passionate! The camp scene and the views wow! Plus abdul is very sweet here, i so like his characterization. Then i loved the tracks after that...jodha being declared mallika...they both teasing each other, their love their glances everything was so cute and sweet! The epic heartbreak track which just got finished was truly amazing, the way it started and then finished, woah so amazing! Their pain of separation and their feelings were aptly emoted by you. Jodha being hira and jalal sensing jodha's touch was superrr...then their fight and jalal winning...then the rain sequence and after that the hut scene was amazing. Now its marriage time! That kanika is so disgusting huh...i loved that jalal ka "inaam" scene ;) jodha manaofying him was amazing. Now i am waiting for the next! Update soon! Superr FF di! Keep it up_/\_
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