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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Yaar ek choti si problem hai
Main aaj update nahi kar paayungi kyunki kyunki kyunki
Mera maths ka kaam bacha hai, Worksheets bachi hai aur bhi bahut.
But pakka tomorrow I'll update
IF Ki kasam
please forgive me for breaking my promise.
sholly!!
But isse aap ek shocking twist ( 😭 ) ke liye khud ko prepare kar sakte ho!! 😃

aur ek din intezaar karna padega!! And.. What shocking twist will dat be.. Am afraid!! So.. High voltage drama ahead!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Yaar ek choti si problem hai
Main aaj update nahi kar paayungi kyunki kyunki kyunki
Mera maths ka kaam bacha hai, Worksheets bachi hai aur bhi bahut.
But pakka tomorrow I'll update
IF Ki kasam
please forgive me for breaking my promise.
sholly!!
But isse aap ek shocking twist ( 😭 ) ke liye khud ko prepare kar sakte ho!! 😃



Its okay, finish ur schl work first...thats more important!!
Will wait fir the update tomoro!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Update type karne jaa rahi hun!!
Stay Tuned, and stay excited!
😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Hii Guys!
Sorry for late update nd breaking my promise too! I'm guilty! Nd this update is for all those who waited for this update.. Jaskaran, hely, Rishbala di nd many many many more!!!Sorry!
P:S- Guys I am writing this update nd side by side doing my assignment.. SO its bound to be short.. Nd I guess its needed to be that for next chappy 2.. Forgive me nd please bash me if you want.. I'm more than happy to get that.. Nd I think I deserve that so.. you can beat me, throw tomatoes joota chappals whatever you want! NO Complaints.. I promise!😃
Chapter 4
"Jalal let me go!" Jodha said, struggling in his arms.
Jalal just smirked in reply. Jodha got irritated. " Now take this!" She muttered. Jalal heard it and was a little surprised. He had already been a witness of Jodha's anger( their first meet! Bhul gaye kya??😆). And trust me, his anger isn't any less than that!
If only he could have sensed the gleam of mischief in her doe like eyes...
Jodha started by ticking him. She tickled him to no end. He giggled and giggled. " Jo.. Jodha.. Jodha stop it!! Stop it... I said!" But Jodha herself was enjoying this to no end. Somewhere, the sight of him giggling soothed her. And, on top of it, he was getting irritated because of her. Aww, how she loved it!
"Now you'll not dare to lock any girl in your arms again, Mr Attitude urf Jalal!" She smirked as her hands advanced towards his pants.
Jalal slightly sensed her intentions and said," No.. Jodha.. No.. No Main tume chod raha hun!"
Jodha giggled at her victory. Still she wanted to tease him," Kyon Jalal, tumhe to apni pant ki mujhse zyada chinta hai? pant ke liye mujhe chod diya?? Aisa kya hai pant mein? Main bhi to dekhu!" She pretended to pull his pant again, only to stopped by Jalal.
He grabbed her hand and quickly pinned her against the wall.
"Dont you dare.. You'll pay for this" He said, as Jodha smirked at him.
He leaned closer to her, their faces inches apart. He came more close and was about to kiss her ( 😆😆) when Jodha ducked and ran away at the right moment.
WHat Jalal didn't knew was that all the time when he was coming closer to her Jodha was stealing his wallet from the pocket of his pant. And she was successful in that one.
" I'll surely pay for it Jalal!! ( She said, giggling and and still running).. Lekin tumhare wallet se!" she was still running, but a little tired. So she stopped at the other end of the gym. She was surely out of breath. Her breathing was irregular as she touched her knees with her hands. That was her mistake. Jalal smirked as he ran towards Jodha. Seeing Jodha bent, he decided to trouble her. He rested his head on her shoulder and said," Mujhse kaise bhagogi?? I'll not leave you?" Jodha smiled and went red at his reply. But she had a jawaab for every single question!! Logical and Illogical can't prevent her from answering!!😆
She replied," ABhi jab gudgudi( tickle) ki thi tab you said ki you'll leave me.. And now you're saying you'll not leave me. You yourself are confused." She said, giving a witty smirk.
Jalal inhaled the flowery smell of her hair and said, " Tab maine jhooth bola tha.. But I'll never leave you Jodha.. never.. I'll always be with you" Unknown to him, he had confessed to her in the most innocent and cutest way ever possible.
They were enjoying their time to the core, unaware of a person spying them.
Jodha pushed him and looked away,blushing furiously.
" Ab mujhe jaana hai.. I'm sooo late for the class! All thanks to you Mr Attitude!" Jodha hit her forehead and gave an angry cum sad look to Jalal.
"She looks so cute when she's angry.. But I have to do something about it, soon" If only he could share his past with Jodha, things would have been better.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
CORRIDORS- NEAR JO'S CLASS
( So here the bad part starts... Guys let me remind you you guys can bash me for this..)
Jodha is running towards her class when suddenly she heard some sounds from the storeroom.She decided to check once, just like that.
She stepped backward and saw a student talking on phone.
"Why the hell is he talking here? I mean he can talk outside also.. Maybe he's bunking classes." She turned to go when the student said,
" Haan Jalal... Tumne Sonia ke saath kal rat jo kuch bhi kiya uss ka MMS taiyaar ho gaya hai..Haan, ab to bas yeh MMS Sonia ko dikhana hai, phir jo tum chahte ho vahi hoga!" He started laughing wickedly.
Jodha was hell shocked. How could this happen? She joined pieces together and came to one conclusion: Jalal touched Sonia against her consent.
Tears started coming out of her eyes. She couldn't believe the reality, the harsh one. All her trust, all her faith on Jalal broke into a second.
She immediately came on her knees. She was crying badly. But this was not the time to go weak, this was the time to get justice. She decided to confront Jalal about his SIN.
As soon as she went,the student turned back and there he was! None another than RAKESH!!!

GYM
Jodha entered in the gym. As she thought, Jalal was still there, only difference was that he had wore his shirt.
" Kyun, nahi reh payi mere bina?" He asked teasingly, smirking. Much to his surprise Jodha's eyes were full of tears.
That's when he noticed that she was raging with anger. The look in her eyes told him. Her milky cheeks were tear strained. Jalal was shocked to see her condition. He knew immediately something is seriously wrong.
He went near Jodha and shook her gently and asked, " Is everything fine Jodha? What happened? Tell me" He forwarded his hand to wipe her tears but Jodha rudely brushed off his hand and pushed him away.
She grabbed his collar and asked, " HOW COULD YOU JALAL? HOW COULD YOU?? EK BAAR BHI USS LADKI KE BARE ME NAHI SOCHA!!?"
Jalal was hell shocked on hearing her words. He replied immediately," KON LADKI? KISKI BAAT KAR RAHI HO TUM?"
"SONIA KI!!!" She shouted in a teary voice as she left his collar with a jerk.
"Tum.. tum Sonia ko kaise jaante ho?" He asked, unknown to what she had heard.
Jodha was shocked, her heart had a tiny hope that Jalal hadn't done all that. But he crushed that hope also.
"TUMNE SONIA KA MMS BANAYA JALAL?? HOW COULD YOU?? SHARM NAHI AAYI TUMHE?HUN? ANSWER ME DAMMIT!"She shouted.
Jalal's eyes widen in shock. He never thought that Jodha would say something like that. She thinks so low of him!
"WHAT?? YOU THINK I COULD DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT?/ CHII JODHA! CAN'T BELIEVE THIS!" He stormed out of the gym, leaving a devastated Jodha behind...
PRECAP: JODHA JALAL KI DURIYAN BADHTI HAI... TRAGEDY FOR JODHA!😭
Dont kill me for this update.. I know I'm at fault.. aur 5th chapter ke baad to I don't know kahi aap vakayi mujhse bahut naraaz na ho jaao!
Please like the chapter and encourage me with your lovely and encouraging comments and suggestions!
Aur Haan-
Adham is Jalal's cousin brother though they both hate each other but don't show it on face. Rakesh is his chamcha
Sonia's character would be revealed in the story only
Regards,
Anushka

Edited by Anushka8722 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Hawww!!
😭😭
I told you beforehand ki chapter sad hoga... tab to update update update.. ab lo!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Dear that was fab!
You storytelling is unique and it is surprising you write so well when you're only 11! I couldn't even write an essay at that age!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Dear that was fab!

You storytelling is unique and it is surprising you write so well when you're only 11! I couldn't even write an essay at that age!
Continue soon!

Thank you Sammy di!!!!! Such a big compliment!!
I wrote essays when I was in 4th grade that means wen I was 9 years old.. Wrote a lot of essays😳.. I mailed it to dad and he got it printed.. Aww his colleagues loved my essays!☺️
Love you for this update... it refreshed my memories!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
anushkaa
amazing update
loved it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
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Ok!
Here is what i think...
I enjoyed the initial gym tickling part a lot 😆
Rest all i see is a big MU between JaJo, i m sure Ja didnt do what Jo is thinking! May b he is helping the girl or something...
One more update and then please finish the MU!
Waiting for next update, update soon and clear the MU soon!
Love
Preet
Edited by rishbala3018 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444

anushkaa

amazing update
loved it 😃

Thank you di!!!🤗
Both for loving this update nd forgiving me for creating M/U between AKDHA!😊

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