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Hello everyone! This is my first attempt at an OS in this forum. Please do share your views.

This OS is based on the current scenario, jalal and Jodha are madly in love with each other and they're extremely excited about Rukayia's pregnancy, and they have no idea of it being fake.

It is an early morning in Agra, Jodha is praying infront of the Tulsi plant, while Moti is standing next to her.Jalal comes, He looks at Moti, she greets him and leaves from there jodha is still doing her prayers. Jalal is watching her with utmost attention, he's looking at her and admiring her beauty and simplicity, he's thinking to himself how can some one possibly look so gorgeous in the morning, for the first time he felt lucky not because he was Shenshah, though he always took pride in that as well but first time he felt truly content and happy because he was her husband,he couldn't help but co-relate the two. Had he not been Shehanshah would he be Jodha's husband, for the very first time he was escalating with joy, that he had made the decision of marrying her, though it was merely a deal for him that time to retain few parts of his kingdom, but now those things meant nothing to him, infront of her.
She finished her puja and found him staring at her in admiration and she said " pranam Shenshah" and he said " adab Jodha Begum ". Then she gave him prasad. Then Jalal complimented her on how beautiful she looked with open hair., and he started to touch them and she immediately moved from there and said there must be guards watching us Shehanshah, to which he replied oh no! That's not an issue anymore, I've told all the guards to not be near me when I'm with my Jodha Begum. She was stunned and said " kyun Shehanshah "? With. Slight mischievous tone and he replied there are 2 reasons for that Jodha begum, firstly you're no less than a tigress yourself , you' have full knowledge about Swords and plus you've even fought with a Zehreeli Dosheeza, if I may add . So I personally feel more protected with you compared to those 100 guards. She was blushing with joy, she knew he was haseemo Shan Shehanshah he didn't need anyone to protect him, he was alone enough for any goddam person on this earth but the way he gave her the respect and praised her, exited her to no extent and she said " and Dusri Vajah" and he said " voh kya hain na jodha begum, ab aap ko uss din ki tarah phir Hume taufa dene ka Mann ho uthe, toh hum Pehredaro ke Karan gavana nahi chahite" now she felt embarrassed but nonetheless hugged him.
Jodha and Rukaiya are in Rukayia's Hojra and jodha is making her drink the famous "kadha" A bandhi announced Jalal's arrival. Both women get a smile on their faces and standup to greet him. He greets both of them and inquires about Rukayia's health she says she's feeling better now because he's here. He smiles at her. Ruk comes closer to Jalal and holds his hand, she notices Jodha watching this and prides, what she couldn't notice was Jalal watching jodha.jalal felt the touch of Ruk's hand and felt a sheer of discomfort he made her sit on the bed and cleverly removed his hand. She, however held him tightly and pushed him closer to herself. Now, all Jalal could see was the pain in Jodha's eyes, she did have a smile but her eyes said it all. He knew what she felt and her look said it all, had it been any other begum he would have jerked her away within a fraction of second, but it was Ruk and that too she was pregnant. Jodha couldn't tolerate it, though she was maintaing a brave front, but hello it was her husband whom she loved more than anything, she had sufficed her heart and got on terms with polygamy, but she was deeply hurt. She said " Hume aGaya dejiye" and started to leave that's when Ruk said " rukiye jodha begum she turned and Ruk asked her to massage her head as it was paining.. She being jodha obliged, Jalal was on the right side of the bed, and jodha started to walk towards Ruk from the left side when Jalal" asked her jodha begum iss taraf se aayi na dabane mein asani hogi" she agreed and when she reached he held her hand and made her sit next to her with hardly an inch gap between them, he kept his head on Jodha's shoulder and smiled at Ruk and Said " jodha begum ka sar dabane ka hunar bhi kamaal ka hain" this irked Ruk to no extent, she couldn't tolerate both of them sitting so close. She told jodha she was feeling better now so she could go. After jodha left, Jalal warned her and told her not to take extra advantage of Jodha else he wouldn't tolerate it.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice 👏
plzz update soon
and pm me plz😊
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woow ... awesome OS tanya ...👏 ... i loved few things here ...
1) the word "Famous kadha " made me go 🤣 ...

2) the way jalal asked ruku not to take advantage of jodha ... very nice ...

if possible continue further ... till the unveiling of ruks fake pregnancy 😃 & if u continue ... kindly PM me 😳
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my like button is not working bit really good os
i loved Akdha scene especially:

That's not an issue anymore, I've told all the guards to not be near me when I'm with my Jodha Begum. She was stunned and said " kyun Shehanshah "? With. Slight mischievous tone and he replied there are 2 reasons for that Jodha begum, firstly you're no less than a tigress yourself , you' have full knowledge about Swords and plus you've even fought with a Zehreeli Dosheeza, if I may add . So I personally feel more protected with you compared to those 100 guards. She was blushing with joy, she knew he was haseemo Shan Shehanshah he didn't need anyone to protect him, he was alone enough for any goddam person on this earth but the way he gave her the respect and praised her, exited her to no extent and she said " and Dusri Vajah" and he said " voh kya hain na jodha begum, ab aap ko uss din ki tarah phir Hume taufa dene ka Mann ho uthe, toh hum Pehredaro ke Karan gavana nahi chahite" now she felt embarrassed but nonetheless hugged him.

I am also glad Jalal warned ruqaiyya at the end.

I hope u write mor os or make this into ss. if u do, plz pm me. thx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OOO
IT WAS COOL AND ROMANTIC AS WELL..😃

LOVED IT DEAR/...😊
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nice start

continue soon😊
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Nice os pm me when u update plz update fast very eager to read more a pleasure to read ur writtings bye and plz do continue love akdha and hate ruks .u are a true star writer ⭐️
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Thankyou so much for an amazing response. Here's the next part, please share your views.

Part 2

Jodha and Jalal are keeping good care of Rukayia while, she is enjoying the extra attention she is getting and is feeling victorious since, she believes she has been able to seperate Jalal and jodha, by not allowing them to spend time with each other.Little did she know, that now the royal couple was inseparable. Their hearts synced in unison. the kind of love Jalal and Jodha shared even at that time was beyond imagination.
Now, Adham khan gets very agitated at Atgah because he gets to know that Atgah has told Jalal about his misdeeds. He goes to talk to him about it and that is when an altercation happens between the two, Atgah is infuriated and shouts at Adham and warns him, which further instigates Adham, he's agitated that how can Atgah question him like that. One thing leads to another and in a moment of rage, Adham takes out his sword and kills Atgah. All the bandis and sipahi's shout. Utter chaos in the mahal. Adham starts to run, Jalal gets to know and he immediately takes out his sword and they have a fight, and Jalal kills Adham.
Everyone in diwane Khas by jalal's orders. He's extremely upset since he has lost his father figure like " Atgah" he is almost in tears and so is Jejianga, jodha, Hamada, Salima and even Rukayia. They're all seated behind the curtains while Jalal is speaking profoundly of adhka and how great a man he was and how much Jalal is going to miss him, he even announced that Jejianga will forever remain in the royal palace and be given all the support and respect that she deserves. That is when Maham Anga enters and she starts shouting at Jalal, how date you kill my son? What right you have to do this? She was stopped by various guards. But Jalal ordered them to stop and let her talk. She cursed him in the rudest way possible and asked him for an explanation as to why his son was killed. He told her that she knew why it happened. Adham had it coming with all his past deeds. Several warnings were given to him, but what he did now was too much to bear. Now, Maham was agitated and spoke out loud " YOU killed my son, now I'm going to tell you that you toh don't have a child only. Rukayia has been faking the pregnancy all this while to separate you and jodha" hahahahahahahaha!
Everyone is shocked jalal shouts " tumhari yeh Himalkat" badtamee" she stops him in between and says you don't believe me here, she gets the hakim sahiba and she blurts out the truth. All eyes on Ruk. Everyone is shattered disgusted. Jalal says Ruk what's is all this? She comes out and falls onto his feet and requests for mercy. Says" Hume maaf kar dediya humse Galti hogayi, maham sach keh rahi hain. I was never pregnant. Jalal is speechless, it's like he's not able to incorporate what just happened he lost his father and son at the same time. And top it all his Ruk, his best friend did this to him. He didn't know how to respond. He was broken. He didn't know how to react, his tears rolled up in his eyes. He was about to fall from his chair when he realized he was in Deewane Khas hence he blurted Takliya. Ruk said something and Jalal again shouted Takliya. Everyone was scared he was so angry,everyone rushed out. Salima. Hamida and jodha stayed on. They came out when everyone left. All the three women had tears in their eyes, this shock was actually unbearable, none of them could believe that Ruk would go to such an extent. Hamada kept his hand on Jalal and he broke down, he feel, he started crying. She held him. Jodha and Salima were also crying. Hamida tried to console him but she herself was too heart broken. Salima told Hamida that she shouldn't cry like this especially infront of Jalal, she took Hamida out. Now, only Jalal and jodha were there. Jodha touched Jalal who looked at her and said " kyun jodha begum " hamare saath hi kyun yeh Sab? Hum Shehanshah hain isiliye " Humne toh kisi ka kuch nahi begada " why me and saying that he fell into Jodha's arms, the only place he felt he could cry and weep and share all his sorrows. She wanted to console him, but she didn't know what to say. She kept her hand on his head and said" hum nahi jante, hum sirf itna jante hain ki hamare pati, duniya ke Sab se ache Insaan hain and Ishwar unke saath kabhi kuch galat nahi karenge. And after she said this she fell.Jalal held her before she touched the ground. And shouted "Jodhaaa" she was rushed to the Hakim. Jalal was paranoid and scared and he couldn't leave jodha for a second and hakim touched her nerves and said " mubarak ho Shehanshah, jodha begum maa bane wali hain"
Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago
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Waaaooow ... loved it absolutely amazing ... plz continue ... I want to knw what will be the reaction of jodha's pregnancy 😳
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loved it.. do pm wenever u update next chapi...

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