Akdha ff:Dastaan-E-Mohabbat...THREAD CLOSED-Thread 2 link page no.154 - Page 3

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

omg!!! Anushka... what a great surprise... I just saw your pm... Vow... I can't wait to read ... Actually I am at work... in my lunch time I will read and comment on it... Thread looks colorful and beautiful...

Originally posted by: mdeshpande

Good start ! Loved how u portrayed the scenes, in DEK and Jalal's chamber !

Updt soon.

Yaar.. Aaj bahut tiring day tha.. bahut mehnat ki hai.. hope I'll not dissapoint you..

Recap: " Himmat rakho jalal. Sab theek ho jaayega."

" Kuch theek nahi hoga Ammijaan. " He broke the hug and looked at Hamida with raging eyes. She was fearful of this look of Jalal.

" Hum.. Hum Jodha ko talak denge.." Jalal said in a firm yet broken tone.

Part:2

Hamida was shocked to the core after listening to these harsh words of Jalal, it seemed as her throat choked. She gathered some strength and shook him .

"Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Jalal? Tumhe pata bhi hai iska kya anjaam hoga! Hum tumhe apni zindagi barbaad nahi karne denge. Tum Jodha se mohabbat karte ho Jalal..."

" Mohabbat karte THE ammijaan." Jalal interrupted her in between. "Mohabbat karte THE." Emphasizing on the word THE'.

"BAS Jalal! Bahut keh liya tumne aur bahut sun liya humne.. tum Jodha ko talaq nahi doge.. ye humara, tumhari ammijaan ka aur iss saltanat ki maryam-makani ka hukm hai.. "

"Hum muaffi chahenge ammijaan lekin hum aapse ittefaq(agree) nahi rakhte. Kal hi hum Raja Bharmal ko paigam bhejenge ki vo Jodha.. Jodha begum ko talaq ke liye yahaan bheje.. Shabbakhair." Jalal said and quickly walked out of her hojra (room).

AMER- JODHA'S ROOM

Jodha was standing by the jharokha in her room. Her tears shedding eyes were reflecting the state of her heart. " Hum to unhe bataane hi waale the ki hum unse prem karte hain.. lekin unhone hi humare charitr per laanchan laga diya... Jinhe humaare samman ki raksha karni chahiye thi unhone hi humara maan bhang kar diya... Jinhe humaara saath dena chahiye tha unhone hi hume swayam se prathak kar diya..?? Hum unhe kabhi kshama nahi karenge.." Jodha cried. How badly she wanted to tell him that she's not betraying him... she loves him but all in vain. "Unhone humare aur humare bhaisaa ke sambandh par laanchan lagaya hai kanha... Ek bhai behen ke rishte pe ungli utthai hai. Vo aisa kaise kar sakte hain??" She said.. looking towards the temple of kanha in her chambers.

She lost even the remaining bit of control she had after remembering the night when he had come to her chambers, the day on which he insulted her in DWK.

FLASHBACK

Jalal entered and saw her highly messed up room . He looked around but couldn't find Jodha. Finally he spotted her sitting beside the temple of Kanha, motionless.

"Wah Jodha begum wah!!!" Exclaimed Jalal as he moved towards her but no response from her. Jalal was socked to the core seeing her condition. Her chaniya choli was dirty, her cheeks had dried off marks of tears, her chunni out of place and her eyes constantly staring at something, not even blinking.

For a moment he forgot all the bitter events of the day, as he saw the terrible condition of his beloved. His hands automatically reached her shoulders and supported her in getting up.

Jodha immediately realized his presence and tried to free herself from his grip. But before she could do anything it was too late. Jalal immediately hugged her and carressed her back . Jodha was shocked but she found support in his arms. She sobbed terribly in his manly arms. Jalal embraced her tightly. Soon Jalal realized what he was doing and pushed Jodha so hard that she fell on the ground.

"AAAH" Jodha cried as she tried to get up but before she could Jalal grabbed her by her hair and pinned her to the wall.

"Chodiye hume.. SH..Shahenshah hume peeda ho rahi hain.."

"Accha Jodha begum.. Aapko apna dard dikh raha hai lekin humara nahin?"

Jodha was shocked listening to these harsh words..

"Shahenshah hum to. Hum to Su.."

"BAS!!! Ab koi safaai nahi Jodha BEGUM!" Jalal shouted at his best. " Aapko kya lagta hai ki ab aap jo kahengi hum us per yakin kar lenge?? Nahi Jodha begum, aapne humara yakin toda hai humari saltanat ko dhoka diya hai hum aap ki shakl bhi nahi dekhenge..."

Jodha's eyes widened in shock. "Jodha begum, aapne humara yakin toda hai humari saltanat ko dhoka diya hai hum aap ki shakl bhi nahi dekhenge..."

"Shahenshah humara vishwaas kijiye.. Hum to Su.." but before she could complete her sentence Jalal pushed her hard and she fell on the ground.

" Nafrat hai hume aapse!! Ghin aati hai yeh sochkar ki humne aap jaisi napaak aurat se mohabbat ki..." Jalal said as he made his way to his room.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Next day...

Soothing sunrays fell on Jodha's face as she slowly opened her doe-like eyes. She immediately dressed up after getting informed by Moti that Bharmal has called her in his chambers.

Jodha smiled as she greeted Raja Bharmal, Mainavati, Bhagwant Das and others. She wore a simple green chaniya choli with very light work and minimum jewellery, yet she looked elegant.

"Jodha Beta.. Shahenhah ne tumhare liye sandesh bhijwaya hai ki vo.. ki vo tumse.." But he could never complete his sentence. How could a father tell her lovely daughter that her husband wants to divorce her?

Jodha's smile vanished as soon as she heard Shehenshah'. Her expression was that mixed of guilt, fear, betrayal, anger and something... something else. Which only her heart knew...

Jodha's hand shaked slightly as she took the letter from Mainavati's hand.

As soon as she opened the letter, she could tell that it was an official farman, not a personal letter. She looked at Bharmal, trying to assure him.

Jodha's eyes widened in shock as she read the letter. Her hands trembled. The letter fell from her hands and immediately tears started coming from her eyes. She immediately ran fromthere, trying to hide her emotions...

Precap: Jodha in Agra... A big twist in this tale!!

Guys I am really really sorry if I disappointed you.. I wanted to show her in Agra but there's something else which I've planned so I decided to post it in next part.. Well there's a hint: Jalal and Jodha ka talaq nahi hoga.. ab kaise, kyun, kya ke liye ek hi answer hai: PART:3!!

Stay Tuned.!!

Regards,

Anushka