AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 82

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PP, congrats on becoming Sizzlerz! 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch


SANDY ki mom yeh story padegi toh apne bete ko dur kar degi...😆

😆😆...Maine likhne ke baad yehi socha😆😆.
Thoda khush karne ke liye bol ki Hamida ka character is based on her😆 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Itna wait karake itna chota update .
Rico is such a dramebazz just like u pri 😆
I m sure its Jalal who kiddnapped Rico.
Cause other than him and Abdul no one knows about this truth. So its Jalal.
Poor Jo she fall in Jalal's trap just like she fall in Rico's.
I almost forgot Rukku and MA existed in this story. U have to remind me of them 🥱
Itna detailed precap. Looks like u have already written most of the parts of the next chap. Pls Pri don't torture us anymore. Update the next one quickly. Pls. 2 weeks wait mat karana iske liye. Pls pri.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

oh no yaar your story is too slow... ten chapters ended and still no akdha meet...

kya re...maine toh SALIM bhi de diya...😆

yaar pls udpate jaldi diya karo or haan im so exited for the next update and plss request hai dont show lustful jalal infront of jodha... she should see a changed devil infront of her.. then only she can fall in love with him... otherwise she will hardly fall... i want jalal and jodha back together soon.
hmm...good point...waise I will only ask you to read ahead 😳

plsss😭😭 update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Loved the update as usual.. excellent excellent... truly... so Rico's kidnap is finally what's led Jodha to Jalal...

I've highlighted the lines that I really loved.. 😳

...Jalal abhi bhi Kolkata me hi hai. So be very careful.

She kept staring at the black screen of mobile...trying to locate some marks of the person she just talked to. Jodha wanted to tell her Ammijan something she never told anyone...rather...she never got chance to tell anyone...something she was feeling like saying today...'will miss you ma'.

😳

'Kya kare Mom Rico ki tarah smart nehi hai na...isiliye' uttered Jodha faking a sad face. Now that made lil master all red. 'Mom!!!' a shy Rico hid his face in Jodha's belly. A broad smile appeared on her face.

😆 Awww...this mama-rico scene was amazing...

Forgoing her Ammijan's warning Jodha stepped out of the hotel that too with her son. A decision she was going regret very soon.

😭

MUMBAI

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'Jalal and women...is topic pe toh ab wiki me page bhi ban chuka hai Maham. I know him since childhood. Women are like nights in his life...keep changing with every new day. I am hardly bothered about them. And Maham...Jalal type ke mard na kabhie kisi ek ke nehi ho sakte. They are just...' here Maham cuts into.


Ruqaiyya still wants to get married to Jalal 😕


'Are you looking for Jalaluddin Mohammad's son?'

😲


'Tell Jalal!!! how can I?...how can I talk to him...how can I return to the cauldron, I escaped years ago...getting back to him means offering myself to his lust...no way to escape...nowhere to go...'

'Love for my life...love for my freedom...love for my modesty OR love for my SON??? ' This was 10th time Jodha asked this question to her mind. Every time there was the same reply...'my SON...my SON...my SON.' Nothing could stand with when it comes to a mother's love for her child. Hence Jodha was decided. Nothing else to think about...nothing else to care for.

😭

What can be a more appropriate example of fortune's favorite sport!!!

Beautiful statement...👏


PRECAP:

'Leave us alone...make sure nobody interrupts till I ask'. Jalal ordered his security person without even turning back. He waited till he heard the sound of door getting locked.

Can't wait... 🥳


thanks lashy for your sweet comment...
waise Ruk hai hi itni faltu...what else can u expect from her
wait toh karna parega
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

First tell me where were you😕...Yesterday you were gayab till now ...Am I right...😡

yap...kal chutti tha mera 😆😆...you are such a stalker 😆

Thank you for updating now and a wonderful chapter it was😃...It was a long update...Thank you again...😳
thank you love...🤗
First part showed us another glimpse of Jodha and HB's relationship...The love/care/trust/understanding/affection both of them have for each other. ...I loved when Jodha was still clutching the mobile and said the unspoken words...😳
yap...i also like their relationship in JA as well...its very touchy😳
Ruku-MA talk se pata chala both no nothing about Jodha😉...Hope I am right😕...Their relationship is as plastic as vegetable ka thaili🥱...
ya ya...and that too sara hua 😡
Jodha and Rico's relationship has always been beautiful...I can sympathize with Jodha's helpness a lot when it comes to buying material things for Rico or for that matter providing a good overall life (that every parent/s wishes for their child)...😳...And Rico😃...He is actually not a baby but a matured boy who understands his mother's feelings and her un-ability to turn his wishes into reality...Baccha naughty hai Jallu ki narah but samajdar hai apni Maa ke narah😉
yap...Rico is a perfect combination of Ja and Jo. 😆
thora khatta thora meetha...
waise na let me tell you one thing...am contemplating about thora bigarofying him in future 😆😉
Ok ...Finally Rico lost.😭...And Jodha gets the call...As rightly put, who can know about this apart from HB and Jodha (And for us readers - Jalal and Abdul)...😉...Also the caller could have called Jalal directly but instead he wants Jodha to meet Jalal and arrange money😉😆...Smart idea😆...
you think so!!! 😲
Atga Khan idhar bhi😆...
I love HIM...

When Jodha said she will go alone to meet Jalal...I was looking for this line 'Hukkum ki tamil hogi'😆...But honestly my heart went to Jodha's condition...She is in such a predicament...Its as if she had to choose between her self-respect/modesty/her existence and her SON...But beta se badkar kya hai🥱...
i felt bad for her to...but mujhe karna pada...for her own good...
The PRECAP was mindblowing😃...Jalal is alone with Jodha and wants no one to disturb...I am very thrilled with the precap and also nervous/afraid about their meeting...FINALLY THEY MEET AND BOTH HAVING OPPOSITE FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER...
am also very excited about the precap...so much so ke meri neend uri huyee hai...😆

Now PP late nahin please, late nahin please...I want the next update soon...Itna accha tha...
isbar toh pakka hoga...world cup start ho raha hai 🥱
SORRY FOR THE LONG FALTU POST🥱
darling its always a treat reading your posts...
waise have u thought about my proposal...😆

Edited by ppluvkuch - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10 was just super se bhi upper
@ bold...😆😆🤗

...n after reading it i just want to ask only one thing when is the next update???..
pagal update to likhna parega

N wat abt the other ff of ur hv u stopped it??
writing ... 😆[/QUOTE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10
Di, bahut accha chapter tha!! Nice.
Loved Jodha and Hamida's bonding.. Aww she loves her ammijaan so much!
Di!!!😡
I'm angry with you... Humari Jo ko kitna rulaya.. Kya di!😭
Update soon, nd thanks for pm!!!😃😃
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Originally posted by: radhika7

Wow PP...it was awesome chappy..😊😊..loved it ...
thank you dear...😃

The phrase i loved the most in this update

What can be a more appropriate example of fortune's favorite sport!!!

thats my fav too😳

Now its on it way to coming out of a dark story it was( i loved each and every update)

well...sort of...but it will take time to fully get over

Cant wait...Finally after so many months of wait...Jalal Jodha will be confronting each other...

yap...am eagerly waiting for this

Update soon...pls really soon😊

now thats very uncertain

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wooow! What an update PP... really thrilling... You know..I feel ye Jalal ne hi karwaaya hai... Taaki Jodha paas aa sake...
Amazingly written... But itna chota update! 😡
I loved how you described Jodha's helplessness upon losing her very child... my heart went out to her...
I hope RIco's fine with Jalal 😛
Waiting for next update... beautiful writing 🤗 Love ya

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