AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Loved the update as usual.. excellent excellent... truly... so Rico's kidnap is finally what's led Jodha to Jalal...

I've highlighted the lines that I really loved.. 😳

...Jalal abhi bhi Kolkata me hi hai. So be very careful.

She kept staring at the black screen of mobile...trying to locate some marks of the person she just talked to. Jodha wanted to tell her Ammijan something she never told anyone...rather...she never got chance to tell anyone...something she was feeling like saying today...'will miss you ma'.

😳

'Kya kare Mom Rico ki tarah smart nehi hai na...isiliye' uttered Jodha faking a sad face. Now that made lil master all red. 'Mom!!!' a shy Rico hid his face in Jodha's belly. A broad smile appeared on her face.

😆 Awww...this mama-rico scene was amazing...

Forgoing her Ammijan's warning Jodha stepped out of the hotel that too with her son. A decision she was going regret very soon.

😭

MUMBAI

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'Jalal and women...is topic pe toh ab wiki me page bhi ban chuka hai Maham. I know him since childhood. Women are like nights in his life...keep changing with every new day. I am hardly bothered about them. And Maham...Jalal type ke mard na kabhie kisi ek ke nehi ho sakte. They are just...' here Maham cuts into.

Ruqaiyya still wants to get married to Jalal 😕

'Are you looking for Jalaluddin Mohammad's son?'

😲

'Tell Jalal!!! how can I?...how can I talk to him...how can I return to the cauldron, I escaped years ago...getting back to him means offering myself to his lust...no way to escape...nowhere to go...'

'Love for my life...love for my freedom...love for my modesty OR love for my SON??? ' This was 10^th time Jodha asked this question to her mind. Every time there was the same reply...'my SON...my SON...my SON.' Nothing could stand with when it comes to a mother's love for her child. Hence Jodha was decided. Nothing else to think about...nothing else to care for.

😭

What can be a more appropriate example of fortune's favorite sport!!!

Beautiful statement...👏

PRECAP:

'Leave us alone...make sure nobody interrupts till I ask'. Jalal ordered his security person without even turning back. He waited till he heard the sound of door getting locked.

Can't wait... 🥳

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#802

First tell me where were you😕...Yesterday you were gayab till now ...Am I right...😡

Thank you for updating now and a wonderful chapter it was😃...It was a long update...Thank you again...😳

First part showed us another glimpse of Jodha and HB's relationship...The love/care/trust/understanding/affection both of them have for each other. ...I loved when Jodha was still clutching the mobile and said the unspoken words...😳

Ruku-MA talk se pata chala both no nothing about Jodha😉...Hope I am right😕...Their relationship is as plastic as vegetable ka thaili🥱...

Jodha and Rico's relationship has always been beautiful...I can sympathize with Jodha's helpness a lot when it comes to buying material things for Rico or for that matter providing a good overall life (that every parent/s wishes for their child)...😳...And Rico😃...He is actually not a baby but a matured boy who understands his mother's feelings and her un-ability to turn his wishes into reality...Baccha naughty hai Jallu ki narah but samajdar hai apni Maa ke narah😉

Ok ...Finally Rico lost.😭...And Jodha gets the call...As rightly put, who can know about this apart from HB and Jodha (And for us readers - Jalal and Abdul)...😉...Also the caller could have called Jalal directly but instead he wants Jodha to meet Jalal and arrange money😉😆...Smart idea😆...

Atga Khan idhar bhi😆...When Jodha said she will go alone to meet Jalal...I was looking for this line 'Hukkum ki tamil hogi'😆...But honestly my heart went to Jodha's condition...She is in such a predicament...Its as if she had to choose between her self-respect/modesty/her existence and her SON...But beta se badkar kya hai🥱...

The PRECAP was mindblowing😃...Jalal is alone with Jodha and wants no one to disturb...I am very thrilled with the precap and also nervous/afraid about their meeting...FINALLY THEY MEET AND BOTH HAVING OPPOSITE FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER...Now PP late nahin please, late nahin please...I want the next update soon...Itna accha tha...

SORRY FOR THE LONG FALTU POST🥱

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

yeh tomorrow kya meri SASU ma likhne wali hai 😡

Sandy ko aage ka story bol...Aur pass karne ko bol...Kal humko mil jayega update😉

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Chapter 10 was just super se bhi upper...n after reading it i just want to ask only one thing when is the next update???..
N wat abt the other ff of ur hv u stopped it??

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Radhika Arora

@radhika7

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Wow PP...it was awesome chappy..😊😊..loved it ...The phrase i loved the most in this update

What can be a more appropriate example of fortune's favorite sport!!!

Now its on it way to coming out of a dark story it was( i loved each and every update)

Cant wait...Finally after so many months of wait...Jalal Jodha will be confronting each other...

Update soon...pls really soon😊

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INDU

@GOTforever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Omg pp...dis update was just mind blowing. ...after so long m commenting in ur FF. ...although m a silent reader and waits for d update ...coz tum busy hti ho toh wait karna is better...Rico kidnaap but precap is something dat is attracting more ki hw will she gonna face him...m waiting waiting waiting...

Pp thanx for bringing this story🤗

M so much addicted lyk humare show...

Thanx for d update pp aka gm queen😎

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Hey PP! That was an awesome update!😃 Not much of Jalal in this update but lots of Jodha and Rico! Maham aur Ruqs as usual thinking evil!😆 I am sure Jodha has no other family other Ammijaan!😳 She was so worried for her health! It is so nice to see Ammijaan care for Jodha just like her own daughter!😳 And even made the hotel arrangements for her and Rico!😃

Rico, being naughty as he is, damaged the football and wanted a new one. They went out to get it but Rico gets kidnapped!😲 And he wants 500 Crores!😲 I bet it is some person who is close to Jalal and has an idea that Rico is his son only!

Poor Jodha, she will have to face her tormenter again after all these years! She tried staying away from him and made a life for her son and herself but her past is coming back to haunt her! But the precap seemed to scare me a bit. I hope Jalal does not lose his mind on seeing her and do something to her!

Nice update and please update soon!😃

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

waise precap mast kaise 😲

We readers are all eager but also nervous (like you) about their meeting dear😃...Jalal is the last person she would like to meet and look she is meeting him now ... Her despise for him is natural, I can understand her emotional journey after she met Jallu for the first time 😭...Now compare it with Jalal's possessive and obsessive streak for her...His desire and everything...And she is the only person he would want now.😃...When such conflicting and extreme feelings meet after a long time I expect FIRE to ignite...Hope what I say makes sense...