TS : Everlasting Love *Completed*

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Mahadevi

@Morana

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Amazing. 👏

Waiting for your update on other stories as well.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Hi sweetu I have update comment on page 11

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

i ran out of words to tell u how wonderful this story was...before even reading it i knew ki this will be an amazing story as u hv written it...i dont know u but still every time i talk to someone about some noval or story or writer i never forget to mention u...n now on wont forget to mention this tragic story too...i loved it to core of my heart ..n trust me i mean every word of this n not just saying becoz i m ur fan☺️😆... n the best feeling was when U for heaven sake U liked My ss:betrayed that was best thing that can happen to me ...i mean thank u so much for that...n i think u , lashy, tahniat n shahbhavini should seriously look forward to write a noval or something ...k i should just stop now otherwise i will just keep on going forever😆😆...i hope one day i'll be able to meet or at least see u..

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Aww.. Namy! Another beautiful update!🤗🤗🤗 The entire scenario in the maternity ward was a tear jerker!😭. I must admit that I cried a little😭

Jalal and Jodha were totally in love! The night, which Jalal considered a mistake, was a very serious thing for Jodha. She was crushed when he walked out on her like that! Poor girl. Jalal realized her importance in his life when she was not in his life anymore!

I loved the fact that you gave them a daughter!😳

The end part was really sad😭. Jodha dies and Jalal takes his daughter in his arms. when he looked at her, her eyes reminded her of his beloved Jodha who was not with him anymore😭

It was a beautiful TS even though it was sad. Loved the way you wrote it and it was really a tear-jerker!😭

Another beautiful story by you, Namy🤗🤗🤗

Love you loads!!🤗🤗🤗🤗

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kabhiasya4ever

@kabhiasya4ever

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

the best the best the best ever...have u read the novel by nikita singh the promise

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Omg omg omg omg omg!! SO many comments... I haven't even replied😲 Ayoo!! Will reply to all in detail... Thanks Preeti di... Bhavu di... Alina di... Neha... Swati.. Gargi... Oshin.. onaisa... pallu... Samy... Renuka and everyone else who has commented... thanks a ton!!! Will reply to ur comments in detail tmrw...

@Kabhiasya4ever : THANKS A TON MY LOVE! I miss you sooo much!!! Last time I saw you on JA forum was when you came to comment on my Ben time wala OS... Now this one brought you here... Omg yaayy... Thanks re... No .. I hvnt read her Novel... But I'll read if you say!😳

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

part 1
nice part...
poor them...
so Jodha has given birth to a baby...
and Jalal has reached her too...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

part 2
last part
nice...
damn i wasnt looking for such an ending...
i hate such endings...
but nicely written dear...

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Hiee Nams...bohot jaldi padh rahi hu mei TS, I know...😆😆 Sorry for that!😆

Anyway..written beautifully Nams...🤗

I can't say I loved the ending obvio...cos for one, it's tragic and I don't have to tell you how much I hate tragic endings...AZ and I have debated over it more than once na..😭🥺

But yes, that doesn't at all mean that I didn't like the TS..like I said you've written it beautifully and I really mean it..loved the emotions in it..😳

Love you Nathu!!!🤗🤗

DL update kar maate...tujhe time de deke na tu popat karing mera, ab seedha 30th bol diya..tu rukh!😡😡

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

am always super late.. sorry for that!

gosh tragedy 😭 i hate tragadies 😡

but koi baat nai.. u hav written it so beautifully that i loved it.. ❤️ its sad but beautiful... now Jalal will live for Pari .. there is postivity even in tragedy 😳

love;y piece of writing! keep writing more!