Okay, so I am replying to all comments after Part 2 here. Thanks a lot for your lovely comments. I once again apologise for not replying to the earlier ones.😳
And, I have decided that after each chapter, I will make a single post replying to all comments. So, even if you comment later, you will find a reply here. I will be editing this as and when I am free. I am sorry couldn't do it for Part 1. Once again, loved all your comments and likes. Please keep it coming.😛
RaniShanthappa
Nice update continue soon & do PM.
Thanks a lot. I will surely PM you.
Pals2411
Wonderful update Najma😊...Beautifully written...The broken vase reminded Jodha about the deteriorating friendship between Jodha and Jalal it seems...Plus the fact that it was Zakira (Ben's maid) who broke it added more mirchi to her wounds😆...I understand Jodha's anger but she was acting all cruel here😭😭...And Shahenshah protected Zakira from getting beaten at the end😭...Hope in the next chapter he doesn't put Jodha down but
actually questions her behaviour tauntingly😉...Continue soon and do PM😛
Thanks a lot, dear for reading and commenting. ya, thats the reason i chose Zakira. we will see what happens next.😉
shahbhavini
Unres: U R writing really amaze me... I love the way you write and describe beautifully... poor vase... poor zakira... Jodha's anger is vow... I love Jo and Ja... convo... amazing update... can't wait for more...
i love you too, for reading and commenting😛
varshaakulkarni
mashallah ... this chapter was just amazing👏 ... so exceptionally written !!! najma dear desperately waiting for the next part ... n kindly continue with this story ... itz really interesting !!!
N thank u very much for the PM😃
of course i will. i am working on the next part.😊
J2lover
loved it dea...😃😃 especially the last part...jodha's anger is gonna be on SAATVE AASMAN!!!!😆😆 do continue...😆😉
thanks awefully!!!! sweetie...😃.
jaskaran.kaur08
very good yaar!!! 😛😛 continue soon
sure!!!!! thanks for reading...😛
AkDha_Fan
Amazing Update!!!
Thanks dear!!!!😳
ashpat
really liked the jodha-jalal's scenes and their dialogues but cannot imagine Jodha being this cruel. I know vase was gifted by Jalal but still- does not make sense to me that she would punish zakira harshly. thx for pm. update soon.
Jodha isnt that cruel. but it had to go with the plot... thanks😊
spvd
part 2
awesome...
poor Jodha...
oh shes so angry coz she had broken the vase Jalal had given her...
and Jalal has stopped the punishment from happening...
cont soon dear...
thanks a lot dear. will update soon.😛
lashy
Very different take on Jodha and her feelings... made for very nice reading...keep updating and your command of the language is amazing.. 👍🏼
thanks a lot lashy!!!!!!!!!! love you...❤️
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The writing in bold and italic is my reply.😎 Please keep them coming...😛
Edited by najma123 - 11 years ago