AkDha SS: Yeh Laal Ishq /Last Chapter 12b page 45/ - Page 16

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Haha no no buddy it means i am updating 😆
will update in an hour or so 😊

very nice update continue soon & do pm...

Chapter: 8

Surbhi yaar superb!!! Awesome!!! Mind Blowing chapter... You have shown what a beautifully their pain... their helplessness... and Love... I love how Jodha was confuse about her own emotion...

Very first line... Kya hamara koi wajood nahi hai... This line shows her pain immensely ... and at the same time Jalal thinking ... does she any idea what importance she holds in my life? Vow... Really touched my heart... Then the way you have written they eye lock... They both are so much in love... I love how Jalal bend down on his knees... and caress on her cheeks... vow amazing.. "Hum aapke radha krishna ko wapas unke ghar le jaane aaye hai jodha begum" I love so many lines in this update but I love this line particularly... This one line shows many things... Jalal's love for Jodha... Jodha's love for krishna and Jalal's respect for other religion... and then Jodha's answer vow superb!!!

Jalal realization and inner turmoil... I loved each and every line of this update...

Jodha's anger vanished with tears... her inner war is really painful... but she is so wounded inside her heart is not ready to forgive him this easily... When she heard Abul mali is nearby... she forgot everything... She knew it is not safe for him to stay their or going back agra at this was not safe either... She went back to him ... I loved that dialouge...(bagin) vow... Jalal get excited at first, you have forgive me Jodha begum... Jodha bhi cum nahi hai... then she said I want to go back to Amer... Poor Jallu yeh kitna tadpati hai... but I love at the end at least she has realized Jalal became her habit... Just being together was giving her heart peace...

Surbhi I love love love your writing...👏👏👏 Your writing is so deep and emotional... Superb yaar

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Okay firstly I would wish u belated happy birthday to u darling ...🤗 god bless u with all the happiness & love ... 😃 ...

next thing is Chapter 6 se chapter 8 😕 ... surbhi 😡 ... How the hell u forgot to PM chapter 7 😡 ... I went back read chapter 7 & then came back & read chapter 8 ... 😭 ... mujhe gussa aaya hai 😡 ... mein maun vrat le rahi hoon ab ...

Originally posted by: SARA4444

maun vrat ??????!!!!!!!!!!

again!!??? 😲

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Haan ... Surbhi forgot to PM me chapter 7 ... isiliye

Originally posted by: SARA4444

me also maun vrat for you coz you are not writing your ff 😆