~AkDha OS-'Tujh Sang Bair Lagaya Aisa'~Part 3 Updtd-Pg8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

awesome story👍🏼

u have written their POV so well👏

thanks 4 d pm... (i logged in after 2 days nd such a pleasant story waiting dere in my inbox... so thanku again😃)...

plz do make our poor akdha meet soon... (show mein to pta nahi but aap hi unki wali meeting jaldi kara do😉)

plzzz make one lamba 😳wala update soonish😉

p.s- vaise just curious- but is dat mystery girl shehnaz going 2 be dere in ur story also or wat😲 😆

Edited by dodoneha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

part 2
nice part...
Jodha is so hurt...
cont soon dear...

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: dodoneha
awesome story👍🏼
u have written their POV so well👏
thanks 4 d pm... (i logged in after 2 days nd such a pleasant story waiting dere in my inbox... so thanku again😃)...
plz do make our poor akdha meet soon... (show mein to pta nahi but aap hi unki wali meeting jaldi kara do😉)

plzzz make one lamba 😳wala update soonish😉

p.s- vaise just curious- but is dat mystery girl shehnaz going 2 be dere in ur story also or wat😲 😆

Thanks. 🤗

Nope. 😆

There's no Shehnaz in this story.

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: daisydee425
nice

-Thanks. 🤗

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: spvd
part 2
nice part...
Jodha is so hurt...
cont soon dear...

-Thanks. 🤗

Will continue soon. 😃

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
very nice update soon

Thanks. 🤗

Sure.

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@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Lovely update, but too small 😒
Please update soon!!

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

I loved both the part... I have to say U R amazing talented writer... Vow... You have written their emotion so beautifully... I am touched... I can't see Jodha's pain... Please update soon... but with longer update... Superb!!!

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Lovely update, but too small 😒
Please update soon!!

Thanks. 😃

The next update would be a comparatively long one. 😊

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904903

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
I loved both the part... I have to say U R amazing talented writer... Vow... You have written their emotion so beautifully... I am touched... I can't see Jodha's pain... Please update soon... but with longer update... Superb!!!

Thanks. 🤗

Sure. This time I'm going to write a long one. 😊