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Chapter5--
I am so sorry bhavini di, got extremely late this time.
I had read the chapter itself when you updated and it was so huge that i thought i will comment later in detail. This part was amazing as it showed jalal's care towards radha to a great extent along with his feelings, whether it be her hands getting burnt or her weakness because of not having food. It was altogether an awesome update! Ruqaiyaa getting defeated by jodha haha was superb! Loving the way radha is questioning herself on her decision to take revenge from jalal as he is appearing altogether a different person to him, i am glad she is not shown ignorant about such things.
Best part was when she took his hands and showed her concern upon his wound. Now meena bazaar is heading yeah! Would be great to see jodha doing something, hope she does :/ Lol! I would love to see ruks getting defeated again! And when on earth jodha will eat? Hope she does now.
Again the thing which i liked was she getting all flattered because of jalal praising her infront of everyone and then whispering her about her hunar! Amazing!
Now i will read the next :X and sorry :/
I am so sorry bhavini di, got extremely late this time.
I had read the chapter itself when you updated and it was so huge that i thought i will comment later in detail. This part was amazing as it showed jalal's care towards radha to a great extent along with his feelings, whether it be her hands getting burnt or her weakness because of not having food. It was altogether an awesome update! Ruqaiyaa getting defeated by jodha haha was superb! Loving the way radha is questioning herself on her decision to take revenge from jalal as he is appearing altogether a different person to him, i am glad she is not shown ignorant about such things.
Best part was when she took his hands and showed her concern upon his wound. Now meena bazaar is heading yeah! Would be great to see jodha doing something, hope she does :/ Lol! I would love to see ruks getting defeated again! And when on earth jodha will eat? Hope she does now.
Again the thing which i liked was she getting all flattered because of jalal praising her infront of everyone and then whispering her about her hunar! Amazing!
Now i will read the next :X and sorry :/
Actually i can't wait to read the next isliye i am writing in a hurry! And did i missed to tell you that you have written chapter 5 marvellously from both jalal and jodha's pov Your stories are treat to my eyes! Plus the wait is always worth so aapko itna pester karna nahi padta to update as i know aap jab bhi update karoge it will be worth it! 👏 Acha now let me read chapter 6!
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