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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Tu mat ... Me yeh paka batati hu,,,kisi ko bacha nahi aayega atleast 20 chap tak

20 chaps tak no baby making OMG...tum mujhe confuse kar rahi hai...tumara registan ka gulab...confused hai

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
20 chaps tak no baby making OMG...tum mujhe confuse kar rahi hai...tumara registan ka gulab...confused hai

I have entire plot ready for the story... Trust me it is coming up very interesting ... lot of twist ...turn ... love... hate... revange... emotion... many more things... I am really enjoying this different type of story...😃

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Parijatrocks

@Peacefulmind

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
I have entire plot ready for the story... Trust me it is coming up very interesting ... lot of twist ...turn ... love... hate... revange... emotion... many more things... I am really enjoying this different type of story...😃

haaan pls ruquaiyya ko out karo is baar in this FF...

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
haaan pls ruquaiyya ko out karo is baar in this FF...

Vese to yeh FF me muje Maham ... Ruku... kisi ki jarurat nahi hai... they all are time pass

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Parijatrocks

@Peacefulmind

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

wow good to know no maham and ruqu...i am bored of them

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks
wow good to know no maham and ruqu...i am bored of them

I really hate them... sale kamine koi na koi game khelte rehte hai...

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Deepika

@dkorumilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

You told that mystery will be revelaed in chapter 3 and instead of revelaing you introduced another one.

Jokes apart, as usual a fantastic update. Loved the entire chapter .You are such a fantastic writer (routine dialogue) . You described Jalal;s condition very well and poor Ruk , really felt bad for her that she is thinking that all the things happened is ougt of Jalal's desire for her . And how arrogant Jalal is that he want her to beg . What will happen to her once she realised the truth.Maham already started turing against Jo. Now story is normal . Jodha is more powerful than I can imagine. She controlled all her emotions and looked innocently in a flick .And Jalal got peace looking at her innocent eyes. And he kissed her , oh my god and Jodha controlled her anger. Poor Jalal . Don't know what in for him. Rahim is so cute and possesive for his choti ammi. And the entire nok jokh is fantastic. Awesome job.. Now please dont keep us like this , please update soon and reveal the mystery. Please PLease Please

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: dkorumilli
You told that mystery will be revelaed in chapter 3 and instead of revelaing you introduced another one.

Lol Deepika I am laughing with scary angry face😆 Are Itna bada suspense to revel kiya... Radha is JODHA... and she is in Agra palace to revenge mission... Kis chij ki revenge yeh me abhi nahi bata sakti😆

Jokes apart, as usual a fantastic update. Loved the entire chapter .You are such a fantastic writer (routine dialogue) .

Aww So sweet Thank you!!!!😳

You described Jalal;s condition very well and poor Ruk , really felt bad for her that she is thinking that all the things happened is ougt of Jalal's desire for her . And how arrogant Jalal is that he want her to beg . What will happen to her once she realised the truth.

Yeh Jalal Ruku ko pata nahi chalne dega... Overall Jallu is a good heart person... So he will not hurt her emotions... For him women is for his enjoyment... nothing more than that... It's not that he doesn't respect them... but always thinks he is superior then all... He has not seen any women in power... this is first time he is attracted to some one... At this time first time some one didn't care about him... that is very unusual for him... either women has fear of him or lust for him... and Radha is so different... It's just beginning of his frustration... He is going soon fall in for her very hard...
Maham already started turing against Jo. Now story is normal .

Ma is Ma... she will not change😆

Jodha is more powerful than I can imagine. She controlled all her emotions and looked innocently in a flick .

She did control her emotions quickly... She is way stronger and smarter ... 😃

And Jalal got peace looking at her innocent eyes. And he kissed her , oh my god and Jodha controlled her anger. Poor Jalal . Don't know what in for him.

He is taking panga with this Sherni... U right use pata nahi uska kya hoga

Rahim is so cute and possesive for his choti ammi. And the entire nok jokh is fantastic.

Rahim my fav part too...
Awesome job..

😳😳😳

Now please dont keep us like this , please update soon and reveal the mystery. Please PLease Please

Mystery ke bina history nahi banti... thoda intzaar karo... Ja ko prem me padne do...JO ka gussa kum hone do... Jo ko dhir dhire pata chanle de Ja is not bed... baad me sab raaz khul jayege

Yaar Such a sweet comment... I am so happy to see your cute emotions comments... love U..😃.

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

Wow bhavi di aWchUmm update 👏

Loved it

The session was indeed hawt but i assumed her as jodha. instead of ruq 😃😉

Jallu is v wild his desire was on its peak..😛

I was ryt maham vl neva change d way she turned negative on jo.😳. sawli kabhi nahi sudregi😆😳

Worried foh moti. 😲 Uska yeh hawl kis kaminey ne kiya😡 dis story has sooo much suspenses

M desparate to read more 😳

Rahim n jodha's moments was v cuute loved it ... 👏🤗

N i loved d section more whr jalal holds jodha n how he moves her hairs from her face n how he placed a kiss on her cheeks n d way rahim was saying only he has a ryt to kiss his choti ammijaan.. 😛😊 howw cuute it was. 👏 N i lovd it whr jallu shifts rahim to othr place n how he lied on his place so dat he can c jo's divine face

Overall loved it totallyyy... ⭐️

Thrilling storyyy 👏

Brilliant writer 🤗

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#390

Bhavini dear, so sorry for late comment!!

First of all, I loved the entire first scene especially the way u revealed radha is jodha and the way her and jalal's emotions and expressions changed so fast and her inner talk. second, thanks for the fb and showing why she is here in agra. She seems ladli of bharmal and it's awesome to c she is best in everything as bharmal mentioned.Third, I was just thinking that MA seemed impressed with Radha so how would she trouble radha but now it seems she is already mad at how radha went against law; so this is first step of ruq/ma vs radha. Fourth, I also liked Jalal's conflicting feelings related to radha that how he is attarcted to her but also his ego hurt that she does not even care to give him a second look and her declaration that he will be dewaana of her. that's huge thing to say to shahensha from a dasi )bec he does not know she is princess).Fifth, i was so shocked to c ruq get mad at jalal like this but LOVED the way Jalal told her off and got mad at her. But, I did not like his way of manoing ruq by doing ahem ahem with her.I know she is begum-e-khaas and has right but it was torture for me and that's why i skipped it. Sixth, it was so touching to c how jalal was concerned of rahim and asked ruq about maid and rahim etc and she deserved the scolding from him. Seventh, I love radha and rahim together and the song which seems apt for them. Eigth, i was so glad that radha cleared the begum mu. Ninth, I loved rahim punishing jalal and their interaction. Tenth, Jalal taking advantage of the situation and flirting with his so called begum and radha cannot even say much and even their nok-jhok seems like hubby-wife which is needed for rahim sake (so it does not feel like dasi is insulting shahenshah). I LOVED rahim-radha-jalal. Always a delight to watch jodha, jalal and rahim in show too. Note at end of chapter was good addition and helpful.

Plzzz update soon. but, first is it hate or love needs update.thx for pm.

P.S. u're most welcome swthrt! just to let u know, u misspelled my username: it's ashpat.