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Deepika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Didn't remember if I res somewhere.
This is so different and I love this Jodha. Her attitude is awesome. Maham impressed with Jodha that is too difficult to believe 😉 ofcourse as she is not begum just a daasi so she liked her I think.
Rahim and Jodha combination is always sweet and you put it more sweetly❤️.
Wanna know what happened that night so when are you going to reveal it.
Loved the story overall 👍🏼. Its different and especially Jodha already impressed me very much👏.
Continue soon

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

aww radha is sitting by the lake

she is sad and thoughtful

she was hurt and crying inside

she has some great pain

i feel that it is related to her family

seeing the sunset she grieved more

may be it symbolized her family downfall

jalal heard the song and was alerted

he saw the rose tattoo on her back

her song brought out her pain

even jalal felt that pain and grief

jalal is wondering about her grief

her song and pain touched his heart

he is feeling so bad for her now

argh taht ruq alerted radha

else jalal was walking towards her

why the hell is she a kabab mein haddi

jalal lost her again

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

jalal is thinking about her song and her pain

it really touched him and shook him from inside

strange na that they both are in pain now

wow so now both are alert

she took off her payal

so that it will not alert any one

and jalal was waiting near the harem entrance

these two are really quite smart i must say

radha saw some one waiting at the entrance

she hid behind a tree

jalal understood and waited but she did not come out

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

this scene reminded me of the similar scene in the show

an old lady being hit by the khwaja shera

wow radha tried to stop but he did not hear

then radha took the hunter from him

he tried to attack him she kicked him hard

aww what a scene i love such action scenes

radha beat him with the same hunter

crowd gathered khwaja shera escaped

radha took her to hakim and asked her

the lady told radha what had happened

i felt so bad reading this scene

khwaja went to jalal to complain

haha i found this act so childish

he ordered that girl to be brought to him

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

radha understood the purpose of this meeting

i must again say she is smart and quick witted

her payal distracted jalal

then she went forward and confessed

the moment he heard her name he went to dreamland

he remembered al about her

i am sure he must have been very happy

to ultimately have found a perfect excuse to meet her

though i must say this meeting is in the strangest circumstance

i loved her emotional heart wrenching speech

but i wonder how much of it jalal heard

omg jalal rectified his mistake instantly

he tried to gift her a necklace

but radha refuses to take it

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

now he is interested to see her

or rather have a look at her

he is so curious about her

but radha refuses to move her ghoonghat

omg radha spoke with so much confidence

i knew her refusal will anger him very much

i loved radha jalal conversation too

after a lot exchange of strong words he orders her

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

she removes her ghoonghat and lowers her eyes

jalal is mesmerized and in a spell seeing her

may be he is also charmed by her

he recites a poem in respect of her beauty

he wanted her to look into his yes

he felt that she was scared to look into his eyes

seeing each other they both had extreme reactions

in front of radha was the wrong doer for her family

in front of jalal was the girl whom he had wronged

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

i am short of words for this update

exquisite exemplary excellent update

such a unique concept and story

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Radhika Arora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Bhavi Di...Update Pleeze!!!😆

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Jaisoif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

OMG, this story is so interesting, once you start reading it you don't feel like stopping. Loved the scene where Jalal finally saw Radha, and he was definitely attracted to her, GREAT JOB on this story, you've written everything so beautifully (you always do) I'm so addicted now. Please update soon, thank you so much!!!

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