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alinakhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Di i reviewed on pg 35 😃😊

N where is d nxt update jaan😕

Di ap bahut lazy horahi hoo 😉😳

Lazipanti chodho n update karooo jaldhi se 😭

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: lovergirlalina
Di i reviewed on pg 35 😃😊
N where is d nxt update jaan😕
Di ap bahut lazy horahi hoo 😉😳
Lazipanti chodho n update karooo jaldhi se 😭

🤣 Lazy... lazipanti chodo...lol... Yaar u right... I will start today

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Res
I have become lazy again!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
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I have become lazy again!

😆SACH ME UPDATE BHI NAHI DETI😡 AB ME BHI LAZY... HO GAYI HU...😆 TANI YAAR ... UPDATE DENA PLEASE😃

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
🤣 Lazy... lazipanti chodo...lol... Yaar u right... I will start today

M asking u to strt writing n update n u r rofling😛

Apka inna acha name h q lazy ka tag lagwane pe ade hoo😳😉

U vl start today 😲

I tot u hv written n u vl type here may b today ow tomrw but still u didnt had strtd😕

Diii. 😡😡😳 Yeh achi bawt ni h...

Yawr updates k liyeh itnaaa b may latkaaoo hameyy😳😳

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Radhika Arora

@radhika7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Bhavi Di Pls Pls Update 🤗

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

aap yeh ss kab update karoge 😔

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Beautiful Story..

Don't know whats wrong with the like button. Its showing an error.

Update soon. And do send me a pm with your next update.

Tc...

Flavia

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

bhavini...kal mera chutti tha...so I went through the chappys...dear...what was that...it was awesome...

first of all prologue was damn interesting. mere dimag me kitna kuch chal raha hai...I cant tell you...was he attacked or he attacked somebody...precisely jodha...

and btw tum lakh chupalo...am damn sure this Radha is Jodha...may be she is here to take revenge of something...pata nehi tumne kya khichri paka rakhhi hai...

chap 2 se clear hai...Jalal have met those doe like eyes. how I love that diwana Jalal...

bhavini an ardent req from this poor soul...plz plz keep this chase going...bada maza araha...

love you...keep updating...am just loving this...

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Hey bhavini! I am sorry for such a late reply, my exams are going on so i didn't got time to comment here. I read the two chapters before, have to say girl HatsOff! What a brilliant writing and execution :O *Claps*
The story and its concept is so intriguing and appealing that i actually wanted to comment in detail and big as you deserve every bit of it...but today i couldn't stop myself from writing here. I super like the character of radha! She is so strong and independent, her scene with the guard was wow. Plus her bonding with rahim is very sweet. Everyone was all praising about radha, her intelligence, values and beauty which in turn led jalal restless. It was all very nicely described by you!
The jungle incident is getting mysterious...radha is jodha and that man is jalal...thats why she was walking away everytime after morning puja...she is here to seek revenge i guess?
I honestly loved how you handled all the characters in these two updates. The title "Registaan Ka Gulaab" is very nice! It has a ethnic rural touch to it..so i love it. Even i belong to registaan area XD Lol i meant Jaipur :)
Loved the updates. Keep them coming!