FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07

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Jas2204

@Jas2204

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Again a wonderful chapter. Wish it's bit longer 😆

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rpeez

@rpeez

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Pratiksha, I have to say, your Jodha and Jalaal are spontaneous!

I like your style of writing, it is reminiscent of classic literature. 👏

Fabulous chapter. 👍🏼

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J2lover

@J2lover

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Hey...read your story soo far...n i must say...U R A AMAZING WRITER!!!!!😳😳...first thing that attracts me the most is the STORY LINE!!!👏👏...very different n intriguing...😳😳...secondly YOUR COMMAND OVER THE LANGUAGE dear!!!!😃😃...you seem to have awesome vocabulary...👏👏...n third...you language suits with the era your story is in...as in the story is in 16th century...soo you make it feel the readers the same through THOSE words...😳😳...its getting very interesting...n the idea of jalal having a elder bro is quite interesting...would like to knw about jodha's past soon!!!😳😳...continue soon dea!!!!🤗🤗

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pkdhot

@pkdhot

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Yaar kaha ho? Ab to update de do. I'm begging...Fans ke liye update de do !!!! Bhagwan Tera bhala kare 😆😆

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Nayapyaar

@Nayapyaar

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Pls update soon. .its been a month now..we r waiting. .plsss. .😭

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Nayapyaar

@Nayapyaar

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Please update the next chapter. Thanks👍🏼

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Jas2204

@Jas2204

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Hope to see a new update soon. 😊

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Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Amazing storyline. Another Ff that I really like.
Like the stubbornness of Ja & Jo.
Can't wait for the next update!

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Pratiksha ... my dearest pattuuu ... high time u update da ... itz been ages we havent heard from u ... i knw u r kinda busy ... but still take out some time for us na 😭 ... its just i am missing u so badly here ... what makes u go underground suddenly re ???

hope allz well at ur end ...sweets ... loove u ... come back ... missing u 😭

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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lovejodhaakbar

@lovejodhaakbar

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#280

read in one go...but so heart broken seeing no updates after chapter 7...hope to see how the rajput princess and soon to be king jalal interact more with their smart chat and lil bit harsh way...updates????