FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 27

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Haha, yay ME! My first reader in record time 😆😆

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Okay i believe you 😡 now, where were you darling ...?? i hope ur interview went well ... btw gawd this chapter was beautiful ... was he trying to seduce her & was she enjoying this act ...hmmm😉 damnn she was getting aroused ...😆 ... btw who wouldnt get if such an enormous handsome being is tending ur wounds ... 😉 ... ummm ...!!! & yet she was all confused with the range of emotions playing in her mind & heart ... 😆 ... this lady & that man are damn spicy & too hot with their attitude & words ...😆 ... was he offering her tooo ..u knw what I mean 😳 ... & she being the theekhi ameri mirchi jodha gave him a nice answer ... hope I am right in deciphering the write up ... 😆

"When I want you, you will come willingly." with this sentence by jalal ... is he having any doubt of she being a princess ...??? how confidently he made this statement ??? 😲

You never let us down prateeksha ...isnt it 😉 ... btw this was a short chappy ... I want next chapter to be a long one ... 😆 ... btw marvelous update gurl ⭐️👏 ... I just love ur writing ... it takes me to another world 👏😉

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

unres...

Your ff is really lovely.. im speechless... i love your jodha... and jalal is always awesome... his naughty smirks... nd how he is to confident that he will have jodha in his arms under her will... but im little angry on him.. how he think that she is one of those by whom he can spent a night with her... really discusting.. nd jodha leave him always speechless.. and that toe tickling licking lip scene... is awesome... jalal has almost revealed his identity.. will he tell her that he is going to be the next shehnshaa.. because i think temporary this job is done by his brother.. right??? nd thankd for listening to what i have said.. and updating it...and the addition of that little intimate moment give goosebumbs... awesome.. update soon dear.. nd dont be late.. lov euu😛😛

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

My interview sucked in ways I cannot define 😆 I just ended up making a lot of friends though, so that was good. Otherwise, its been an utter time waste from one city to the other

Haha, thanks yaar. I think he WAS seducing and she WAS liking it 😛 Jodha and Jalal are both very conflicted souls, so it does come across in that way. Damnn, I am so happy you found it hot and spicy. I just wanted to write something like that since you guys have so much of patience with all my problems 😆 I was nervous about posting this chapter because I wasn't sure how I handled those parts. One reason, this one is shorter. Plus, I got a little tired of calling Jalal "the man" and just wanted to get that out of the way 😛

Lol, Jalal keeps offering her you know what 😉 He is quite the rake that way 😆 And no no, he doesn't know she is a Princess. He is just very confident about his sway over women and he knows how she responds to him. Its just pure male arrogance 😛

I love your comments, Varshu. They really make me feel so happy because you describe it in detail and I can mold the chapters according to preferences if I know what the readers actually liked ❤️

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

My interview sucked in ways I cannot define 😆 I just ended up making a lot of friends though, so that was good. Otherwise, its been an utter time waste from one city to the other

Haha, thanks yaar. I think he WAS seducing and she WAS liking it 😛 Jodha and Jalal are both very conflicted souls, so it does come across in that way. Damnn, I am so happy you found it hot and spicy. I just wanted to write something like that since you guys have so much of patience with all my problems 😆 I was nervous about posting this chapter because I wasn't sure how I handled those parts. One reason, this one is shorter. Plus, I got a little tired of calling Jalal "the man" and just wanted to get that out of the way 😛

Lol, Jalal keeps offering her you know what 😉 He is quite the rake that way 😆 And no no, he doesn't know she is a Princess. He is just very confident about his sway over women and he knows how she responds to him. Its just pure male arrogance 😛

I love your comments, Varshu. They really make me feel so happy because you describe it in detail and I can mold the chapters according to preferences if I know what the readers actually liked ❤️