FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 20

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

what took u soo long pratiksha ... damn this story is getting tooo addictive ... you nailed it luv !!!! finally my jalal get's to know the kitten in his arms is jodha ...😉 , so much passion in every sentence spoken by jalal ... gosh !!! pratiksha m going mad !! can't wait any further ... give me the next chapter ASAP ... i command 😆

Hahaha, I tried to make this one longer and I think I didn't take nearly as long as before. So yay me! Your wish is my command 😆 Its so amazing to see that you like my story so much! Makes me wanna keep putting hot scenes somewhere 😛 Gimme your comments on the next chapter too, Varsha ❤️

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Ah, the words of Tahni, how they melt my heart! 😛I think I am having an old world hangover. Or maybe this is the result of reading too many Judith McNaught novels😆Seriously, I recommend you to read her novels. She is absolutely brilliant! And my inspirationOfcourse, my writing is even more ancient than hers cuz I am basically supposed to be transported into Medieval India😆

But seriously, you totally thrill me with your comments!❤️

Haha, Jalal knew all along that she was a woman😉Thankfully, this is not a Kekta serial where Akbar keeps running to solve harem matters, and does not ever doubt Maham. I think this story is turning out to be more my fantasy than an FF based on a show😃

OMG! You think I can write a novel?😲I think about it at times but I wanted to do a test run as an FF writer before even planning something so big. But if I write one some day, you would be given the task of dissecting it and putting up with it first😆Soch le!

I still sent you a PM to confirm that you are on the list!😛

I will definitely try to post chapters this size. However, I don't think you would be okay to wait more days for the next chapter😛

well u deserve it girl!yup I
Do think you can write a novel and I'm pretty sure it's gonna be full of passion, intrigued!
Would you suggest me some of the novels of this fellow writer?

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

well u deserve it girl!yup I
Do think you can write a novel and I'm pretty sure it's gonna be full of passion, intrigued!
Would you suggest me some of the novels of this fellow writer?

Awww, hopefully, one day..

i always read ur story n i m loving it to my core..😃

Wow great going!! I love ur style of writing, very interesting!!
Keep the updates coming dear!!

Loving this!! Killer dialogues between them! And the way Jodha's subconscious irritates her is awesome! Continue soon!

OMG .. prateeksha this was a perfect bang on chapter ... gosh.. !! the conversation's ❤️... the most fav part was :

Amazing update!!! Do update soon!!!!

Oh.. I just love their banter..😳 Especially the following bit...

"In the course of a few hours, you have become a hissy kitten, a proud lioness, a laughing hyena and now, a coy maiden. I think I will keep you here just to see what you amuse me as next."

"A venomous snake? I am sure you would find that highly amusing," she retorted

This chapter is just amazing ⭐️.

I am in love with ur writing style girl...❤️

part 4
nice part...
interesting...
so he has made her to tell him her name...