FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 5
awesome dear...
very nice...
wow this is interesting...
Jodha wont give up that soon and Jalal too wont stop...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can you pm me too! I love this story and I just read all of them in one go!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Lol, Indian serials are running at the mentality of the Dark Ages for some reason 😆 I have always liked spunky imperfect characters who make mistakes but have the good sense to admit their faults too. That's why I like Sadda Haq. Seems more real than Jodha Akbar.

Darling right now everything seems more real than JA but i do love that Jodha is as egoistic as a man even though she is a woman of the 1600's although I think zee has mixed up their heroine's how come jodha can retort to her husbands insults or even punish him rather than the modern day women in zee who do what ever they hussys or bfs tell them to I swear it kills me to see a man taking advantage of a woman I believe both genders are equal and all men nd even some women need to realize this 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dawg (excuse my gangster moment lol)😆 that was freakin awesome it was like Jodha had an answer for everything Jalal said except when it hit her that Jalal could throw her out the cottage, I love that even though she is a princess she is independant and can sort of protect herself she can also fight just as good as any soldier yet you made her a little dependant to the hero of the story I mean if you are staying in someone's home or riding in someone's car you have to abide by their rules you know? so I am very pleased with Jodha's character in your story. Now Jalal being the little creep he seems to be nice under all that manliness what killed me is when Jalal said " do you know what I thought when I saw you for the first time" or words to that effect 😕 and Jodha retorted " that you could think?" I literally almost died laughing 🤣 cuz I was thinking errmahghad that's so me I would litterally have come backs like that for my guy friends I mean hey they get angry but I ain't nobody's b**ch I say what I think which can be bad too anyway awesome update hope you update soon tho
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome chap as usual..👏👏. I like their sharp and witty answers to each other...
wonder why Jalal didnot disclose his true identity...I am so curious as to how they proceed to matrimony especially after this meeting..
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN
Edited by agun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update, tks for the PM, continue soon & Do PM aswell

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Posted: 11 years ago
i absolutely loved all the chapters and the way you have narrated scenes and characters. really gave me a feeling of reading a novel.update the next part soon. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres
Sorry for the late reply!
Your writing is breathtaking! Love the Jo and Ja in this story... Sorry I'm in a hurry so can't give a detailed review but I can surely say that this story get better each update ❤️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Awww, hopefully, one day..

Ah, yes, start with "Kingdom of Dreams". Its so heartbreakingly beautiful and amazing. It will remind of Jodha, I am sure. The Jodha of the viewer's dreams, not Kekta's caricature.

Her best novels are -

1. Whitney, My Love
2. Paradise
3. Perfect
4. Once and Always
5. Something Wonderful
6. Almost Heaven

Try these books. You can always check them out in ebook form using the application 10,000+ free ebooks. Its really good for Android phones! And easy to read😃

thanks for the suggestions...
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Can't They be found on iBooks?
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Posted: 11 years ago
AUTHOR'S NOTE

Hey, everyone! Thanks for all the love you have shown this story. I am truly deeply honoured by all the messages and feedback, and super excited to write more! 🤗

However, due to my interview being scheduled soon, I will not be in town and will most definitely not be able to update for atleast 10 days. I don't want to write a substandard chapter in a hurry because I deliberate and edit a lot while writing. It won't be fair to the story, and certainly not fair to you guys. I have been busy with my preparations and hence, haven't found the time to write

So, I will get back and start writing as soon as possible. Till then, please wish me luck, because I really need it! And don't hate me too much! 😛

I will reply to all the comments soon as well. I have read all of them, and honestly, you people are the best readers a beginner can ever hope to have! Your views just encourage me to give you my best, and I am so so grateful for the love you people showed me. ❤️🤗



Lots of love,

Pratiksha ❤️

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