~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 99

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Hehe no problem dear u r more than welcome to join our convo!!
I cud do that, i m getting very inspired for writing something after reading all the wonderful FF, SS here 😃
My name is Preet dear!!

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Me too interested😉...Or maybe you can write an FF about your story😉 describing chotta chotta details...Sorry for entering in this convo...but I couldn't hold myself back...Sorry I don't know your name tooo🥱...Lashy feeling stupid🥱.

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Yup exactly, somethings r best hidden 😆
I remember i said i will tell my story but nobody asked me so i thot no is interested

Originally posted by: lashy

Don't be silly LD.. you have as much right over this thread, the story, its readers and its writer 😉 this is your second home... 🤗 I could call it your first home, but then Mr.Pallo will come and start fighting with me😆

Waise, she's introduced herself already - but I'm doing so again😆... her name is Preet😃

🤗🤗 Lashy...Let Mr Pallo dare a fight😡...He will face the consequences😡😆😆😆...Thanks for the re-introduction dear😳...By the way I am still waiting a reply to my comment

Originally posted by: lashy

You first start writing na.. fir dekh.. you can write your own story as a FF maybe change the names if you want to keep it private..but, if people know its inspired from true events they'll flock like bees around a flower 😳

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Chotiii

To begin with, I would like to say LOVED the chapter.😳

I can feel the love baby 😎

Ahaan!😛 🤗

Gosh! Exams!🥱 (Even my exams are on head😭) ... Jo's Mom and Bade bhaiyya have lost it or what! Exams dene jaa rahi hai vo... I understand that may be Jo ki anxiety dekhkar her Mom thought all that.. But still How on Earth are you asking all those questions...are you hiding something or what? As if this was not enough, Bade Bhaiya comes with 'Abhi jitna enjoy karna hai karlo... shaadi ke baad to ye sab band'... Thumbs UP to these two 🥱

Arre yaar family hote tho aise hi hain... kabhi bhi koi bhi interrogation.. 😆 at the end of the day, they think they're doing best for their girl na.. 😳

Yeah yeah.. huh... (why don't we have a 'huh' smilie over here?😡😆)

I know re... phir bhi thoda to dhyaan rakhna chahiye na..😆

'I better be careful with the glass painting as well!' she was referring to the latest project that she'd just started - the one of Robbie sitting on Jalal's lap.

I KNEW KNEW KNEW this!! She was gonna paint.. I should have said it in my comment before but I swear I knew why she had transferred that pic to her mob... may she would paint it herself..or make a portrait..laminate it n all I have thought... Anyways.. I got it half right 😆 But really... so so sweet and lovely of her! 😃😳

Yes dear... I'm sure you must have guessed.. 😳 and Ja has praised her glass painting previously na.. so, she thought what better thing to gift him than a labour of her love with the picture of someone he loved/loves in it...

Aww

After the exam, the card she found in her bag (I know who kept it..btw ) ... was so so amazing..Hot.. unless the last line... Di I would like to tell you one thing... When I saw the blue lines even before reading the chap.. I obviously thought that it was some message.. and also thought that it must be from stalker... and last mein I get to know that..YUP.. It IS from stalker..but m no more surprised.. I think I know whos doing this all... Actually, jab kisi par shaq/doubt hota hai.. to We generally tend to observe their movements/talks/words carefully..Right? That's what I did in chap as well...!

Baap re.. firstly, yesterday night Sojji told me exactlyyy the same words (and she hadn't read your reply yet - ki she guessed its stalker as soon as she saw the message)

Lol! I know my Soda... Intelligent gal she is.. waise uski and my soch mils a lot... 😆

as for your second line, you're spot on.. when you doubt someone you tend to watch everything they do shakki nazar se..

Yeah! Waise to I keep reading even casual dialogues with much more shak than required 😆😆 but kuch logo par to zabardasti I doubt 🤣

Btw, I loved the poem too.. unfortunately it was from the idiot!😭

Yeah... I am gonna read that poem so many times, after deleting the last line, of course!

Anyways.. Meri taraf se tell to that stalker (s) ... GO TO HELL and DONT come back!😆

I've never seen you so angry re.. 😆 awww 🤗

Okay... seriously this is so annoying..whenever these two get sometime to meet each other... they have got a bad news or so... (Stalker)

I know, right? 😕

But I am so glad... They both met in the car after confession, and she got that lewd text...what did it result in? Their first hug! Robbie's death resulted in their first 3 kisses The last bloody message resulted in the deadly hot passionate moment, without the kiss, which was even more enjoyable! So I am thankful to the bad times, they always bring JoJa closer...closer..closer...!!! The trust, the love is only increasing

Awwiiee My Jalal The way he spoke those abusive words... God! I could so very well imagine RT's enraging form in front of silent Pari Haayee!!! 😳

I swear.. and Pari teasing him.. I mean Jo teasing him... Omg

Aise scene dekhne ko kyun nahi milte.. 😭

Trust me! I have NO NO NO hopes from the show... I can bet we are not gonna a get a simple proper kiss/hug/ passionate moment between Jo Ja... NO HOPES!

BUT... This story gives me everything and much more than I want! So I am thankful to this show, in which I am losing interest, that it made you give us this wonderful and most amazing FF!😃

Financial Accounts ...you would have aced it!'

Ohhooo... !! Compliment ho toh aisa...actually this is confidence on her..😃

Lol..he mimicked the asst. dean 😆 What all these two talk yaar..😆 ek dusre ke face par smile lane ke liye kya kuch nahi karte ❤️

Woh actually usne frustration main bol diyaa.. but she found it super cute 😆

I know😆

Lol the Jealousy part... 2 ouches jalal ke...and third one for Jo... superb... I love the way they chat.. 😳 Simply shows how both of them are possessive of each other...

Yes... 😳 the thing is they're not insecure or controlling of one another... par fir bhi possessiveness hoti hai.. I like the scene even more when I'm discussing it now with you..

Awww🤗

He surveyed her tight-lipped stance with awe. Such a naturally enticing package of emotions she was just then - fiery, witty, angry, flirty and haughty. Damn, he loved it. Only, her smile had gone amiss!

Ooo ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Hee hee... many seemed to have liked this line..🤗

Liked it?? LOVED it! ☺️

'I've realized it's pointless getting worked up over some idiot's fantasies...no one's fault that my girlfriend's so irresistible...' sensing the hot flush beginning to radiate on her cheeks, he waited silently - before continuing with a husky tone 'That pervert can dream-on all he wants...I don't care... at the end of the day, it's to my arms that she comes running to...and it's me that she kisses...' he paused again - she was positively blushing now 'So, I'm the lucky guy here...'

Man! ☺️ (Di..how do you write such BRILLIANT dialogues...👏👏)

This Jalal should be punished for not only bringing up so many butterflies on Jo's tummy...but mine as well ☺️ I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED this bit..😳

Ooo Dinosaurs came back eh? If our husbands/boyfriends said all this... fir tho gaye.. 😆☺️

LOOOL!! How much I wish I got this NJAPA Jalal in my life... ☺️

I LOVE this para.. I LOVED that they didn't kiss... infact they enjoyed that dangeruously hot passionate moment... That's what makes them so much in love with each other...❤️ ☺️ ☺️

Tapki Renu beech mein... Uski kya galti waise.. Uska phone calls/msgs nahi uthaaye to she'll have to come na..😆

Exactly.. usko booking karwaani hai na... 😆

OKay both Jo and Ja have genuine reasons for their unsurity... But I am SO sure that either BOTH of them would make to the picnic... or BOTH of them would not make to the picnic...

Shyea.. can you imagine the picnic with only one of them😭

Oh Please! I cannot imagine if only one of them goes on picnic... I want BOTH of them to either go or not go... but obviously, 'kuch' masaaledaar masti should happen between these two ☺️ iykwim...☺️ ☺️

A note to Stalker - Aap jis bhi reason ki wajah se ye sab kar rahe ho, its only resulting in bringing our beloved JoJa closer... so keep trying! You not gonna achieve anything..😃

I LOVE you for this last line.. because it shows how protective you are of the couple and the story...you are amazing!🤗

Awww... Kyaa pata... stalker ke intentions ache ho 🤣

PS : Why I ditched you thrice - The answer is awaiting you...😆

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Hi Preet😛...Startwriting and we will be around👍🏼

Originally posted by: lashy

You first start writing na.. fir dekh.. you can write your own story as a FF maybe change the names if you want to keep it private..but, if people know its inspired from true events they'll flock like bees around a flower😳

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

U guys r lovely writers so help me start...as u know and have already mentioned that IF being public forum i certainly dont want to write all details here so how shud i go about it??
Make it a fiction by putting different names??? And perhaps adding few things that didnt really happen but wud make the story interesting perhaps?? Or shud i just mention things that i can share on a public forum and simply leave the stuff that i cant share???

Suggestions please!!