~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 101

Originally posted by: lashy

^^^ and I've deliberately NOT 'liked' the post above

Originally posted by: Pals2411

My name is Pallavi dear😊...Nobody seemed to havebothered introducing me to you😡😡...Hope somebody got the hint😡😡

You have got two beautiful suggestions from experienced/talented writers like Lashy and Princess😊...Though I am not a writer, I would suggest you to write 'inspired from true story' to create the desired effect😉Even if there is something personal or masala, readers wont know😉

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

I know! None of you would 'like' it... But alas! Truth is bitter...

Originally posted by: lashy

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Originally posted by: lashy

@ LD

My garamaa garam reply to ooo ..thanks so much thanks thanks.. I'm so silly .. I said I'm coming in order and then went back and realized I jumped 1 page.. chollie... wohi soch rahi thee ki pals ki comment kahaan gayaa abhi tho padee thee😆

Mera kisiko kadar hi nahin🥱...I had to remind you to reply😭😭...but finally aa gaya😳

You know what Lashy, when I read about the scented note and what all was written, I was blushing...Trying hard that no one sees me while smiling..

Sachi mein? I imagined that happening with you..☺️

Still enjoying my vacation. My dad loves being around me when I am here...I was ☺️☺️☺️😃😃 while reading (not around him) and when around I was busy acting as if I was checking mails...Kitna natak karna padta hai mein hi jaanti hu🥱🥱

Jalal's ragewala reaction on reading the note was justified...How can someone write such cheap/personal stuff about HIS GIRL😡...SHE ONLY BELONGS TO HIM and HE TO ONLY HER Koi stalker haddi banker nahin aa sakta hai😡...

Ooo so you liked Jalal's gussaa here.. I was wondering how the reactions would be..

Yes, I do...Because Jo and I know what lies beneath his rage😳😳😳

Jallu and Jo stopped right there, taunting/teasing/waiting for each other to make the move first...I was waiting tooo😆...Dono didn't budge...I was still waiting...The wait made it very sweet for them and me too but inbetween they increased the passion/intensity in the room ten-fold😉...

Exactly.. have you noticed how much more you treasure a piece of cake, if you let it sit in front of you for 10-15 minutes before eating it?😛

Sorry, I have never noticed this cake ka bit because cakes dekhne ke baad I just eat it...No waiting here😳

And there barged RENU😡spoiling a perfect romantic moment😡...only to remind of the picnic (Was that so important...Baad mein baat nahin kar sakti thi kya😡)...Meri Jo fas gayi picnic ke naam pe...Oh her family and their doubts...This ending makes it all the more necessary for you to update soon😃...PICNIC Jo par pressure...she will go, she won't, she will, she won't😕... What if Jallu cancels😕...Next update kab

Dekhthe hain kyaa hota hai.. 😛

Either they both go or both wont😳...Ek ke begair dusra enjoy kabhi nahin kar sakta hai😳 and I know you are not that nirday😳

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Hi Pallavi, i really like ur name!!

Thx dear will keep it in mind while writing!!

Since m writing in JA forum shud i name the characters Ja Jo???

Originally posted by: lashy

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Originally posted by: lashy

LD and choti - mahaa hug 🤗