~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair THD 2 ~*PART 31 Pg 127-UD 21st Apr! - Page 97

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Posted: 11 years ago
Btw.. The choti wala line reminded me of YOU calling ME Choti...in that lovely naughty voice of yours.. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
amazing...
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
@agun
Lashy - Awesome as ususal...I might be sounding like a broken record but cannot help but say the same thing again and asgain..YOU ROCK. The chapter was amazing to say the least...
Awww thanks so so so so much! 🤗
they are OH SO ATTRACTED to each other. I feel bad that they have to deal with the stalker, her parents, exams, Robbie in such nascent stages of their relationship.
True!
I also keep wondering whether Jodha will tell them about Jalal or if they would come to know on their own. I personally would want Jo to tell them...given her character and integrity, it would make more sense if she tells them.
Undoubtedly, Jodha wants to tell them one day... and on the right day... but, she wants to do so once her college is completed...(and he would also have had time to settle etc) because she fears that if they came to know now the consequences could turn out quite adverse... like maybe they decide to get her married even before she finished her college...😕 she has no idea how they're going to react since there's never been such a precedent in her traditional family before ..so, she's being cautious... but she can't stop loving Ja either... poor thing...tough situation for her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
@samy18
superb and sorry this time i have shortage of words but i must say you are very fantastic writer and different also your story never matches with any of stories in whole forum and that's specialty of your story just keep writing i loved it👏👏👏
wow... thanks so so so much dear.. is this your first comment sweetie... I am so touched... please do drop by if and when you can...would love to hear your take on it... 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow just superb awesome

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that was amazing... please update soon.

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beautiful chapter! Thanks for pm!👏

🤗 thanks so much dearies
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Beautiful Lash... Will be coming back with a long reply on you updates.

Waiting...😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
@varshaakulkarni
Yaar lashy ... I am hating this 🤬 stalker of jodha ... gawddd who is it ..??? only u know ... who it is 😆 , i hope jalal catches him very soon !!!
Bichaaraa he's only a student na re.. he's trying all he can... but everywhere dead end.. kyaa karein.. 😆
btw i hope MBA jaldi khatam ho jaye aur dono ki jaldi shaadi ho jaye ... i knw jo ki family pe bomb padega after hearing her affair ... but i hope after all the drama they get married 😊
Awww...why shaadi ki jaldi...shaadi ke baad life standard ho jaataa hai...most of the mazaa comes in this part.. this chori chupe milna... this getting to know one another.. this early stages of romance... this tadap...after shaadi its more straightforward and sab kuch legal bhi 😆😉

I liked jalal's jealousy .. i also want to see jodha's jealousy , what if a girl stalked jalal ... haaye !!! jo would be sooo mad 😆
Jo was jealous too... we saw nearly two chapters of it during the education fair - remember? 😳
Thanks so so so much Varsha.. thanks a lot for your comments... 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the part,esp how both were teasing each other...loved it totally.jalal is possessive ,good...i really want to know who the stalker is now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ashpat

First of all, shraddha, I did not expect an update at all bec u were on vacation. So, when i checked my PM and saw ur msg, I was really happy and excited. When did u write this if u were on vacation? But,thank u very much for giving us an amazing update. 🤗
My reactions and comments are in red inline.
I wrote a page or so at vacation... and got back to write the remaining 6... Friday ke baad😳 thanks so so so much...

Omg, her mom and brother 😡, don't they have any sense of timing? I mean they could lecture her or whatever after she is done with her exams. I am so mad. I hate it even when my mom or dad says something that would bother or upset me right before exams. I can totally relate to her right now.

Yes... but, it still happens..that's the sad bit.. 😆

she was referring to the latest project that she'd just started - the one of Robbie sitting on Jalal's lap. awww- so this is what she was thinking about that day when she was looking at picture. so sweet of her.

Yes... 😳 he's admired her glass painting before na...so, she wants to do one for him with extra extra special care...

I really hope that meera or payal are not acting as stalker bec they like jalal or something. plz let not their friendship break!I like these three friends and their friendship.

Awww I know... I love their friendship too 😳

Will her parents let her go to picnic? oooh and jalal will be there 2...😳

Awww.. we'll have to wait and watch..

My long wait...

'U know what I was gushing and blushing when i was reading this amazing poem but got so shocked when i read the last line. my exact words were "what the" but did not complete it. This stalker is scaring me now. until now, i was like whatever but now i am afraid what if this person blackmails her or something ot tell her parents. plzz do not do that, shraddha 😭

Unfortunately, the stalker is all he/she is and there's more than meets the eye...

As for the poem, I had to imagine as though Jalal was writing it before I wrote this poem to get the 'passion' right... (for Jo to feel like it was Jalal saying it)... I had to spend an hour to get four lines right and all for that silly person 😆

Poor them! with almost every meeting, there is sad or bad news waiiting for them.

😭

It was surprising how even in such profound spells of irritation, one of them always seemed to have the ability to entertain the other.

that's so true!

Yes.. 😃

Who would have thought that even a self-assured independent young lady like herself, could do with such form of attention once in a while?

@ italics- that's so true. for some reason, u always enjoy when ur partner gets jealous. it's a sight to watch.

I know... it does get amusing - as long as its with-the-normal-range jealousy, its always a treat to watch.. and anyway why wouldn't it be.. Jalal is by no means a controlling person.. and also one that practices great self-control...so his silent jealousy was a source of amusement for her...😛

'You're really enjoying this, aren't you?' he questioned, giving her a sly look awww my baby! I just want pull jalal's cheeks. he sounds so cute and adorable.

Awww Ayesha I giggled when I read your comment 😆

'Jo bhi ho...' she started playing with the collar of his handsome shirt 'That doesn't answer my question ...'Oh she is playinh with the collar- she is getting naughty and being a tease!

She is...I know 😲

this young lady I know, actually wanted to stuff tissue paper in one Miss Giggles' mouth...just because she couldn't stand Miss Giggles chattering away with me...'

Ohhh look at u jalal, gr8 comeback! u know one of the many things I like about these two is their lines and comebacks - just how to put the words artfully. Love it.

True..they're very witty..😉

Such a naturally enticing package of emotions she was just then - fiery, witty, angry, flirty and haughty. Damn, he loved it. Only, her smile had gone amiss!

@BOLD- i just loved that line. this is one of the best things about, the way u play with words, AMAZING!

Thanks ☺️

OMG, this man is going to kill me one day with his liners. ☺️ Kaash mein jodha hoti ya phir meri life aisa jalal aajaye.

Awww I know... I seem to be hearing this comment quite often from my readers and I'm going to take it as a compliment 😳

Ohh so that's what he wants to c- so he is testing her.hmmm.it's getting hot in here...

She wasn't going to take the bait and be the first to budge. Since he was being a tease, she was going to be one too!

OHH so now they both are going to be stubborn

Yes, they're both going to be playfully stubborn...😎

She loved how he kept her guessing. He loved how she kept him on his toes. They could sense the frenzy in one another's warm breath. They could feel the burning desire when their lips brushed past every now and again.

HOT HOT! their lips brushing past each other but still not kissing- so tantalising. btw @ bold-italics, that's another thing i love about them.how they always inspire passion in each other and are equal to each other. they give "takkar to each other"

Yes...

Ufff, why did renu have to come in? I don't like her one bit😡

Kyaa karein she HAD to ask Jalal that question at that time.. yeah she was being tantrumy but she also had a point.. he wasn't picking her calls and they needed to make a booking... 😆

Will they go or not? even if they do not go, make sure they can meet each other alone away from their friends then, plzz 😉

😆 Alone tho they're meeting quite often... don't worry lets wait and watch...

Thanks so so so so much my dearie.. 🤗 love you loads..

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Posted: 11 years ago
@Choti
Before I pm you both ladies, lemme go and read the latest chap again... subha ek baar padha tha... after that..had a terrible tiring day in college... just got back home... cya soon! bye
🤗hope you have a better day today

@aasiya49
waw this is stupendously awesome !!!!! first of all i wanna say u r writinng is superb or more then that 👏 still i have not readen the whole chapters but then to !!!!!!!! i am reading all in one go !!! coz i don't wanna leave any word or chapter !!!!! love in it amazing !!!!!! plz plz plz plz do update more and pm me !!!!!
Awww...will definitely pm you dear.. thanks so so so much for the kind words... 🤗
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