Nice chapter..😳
To begin with, I would like to say LOVED the chapter.😳
Gosh! Exams!🥱 (Even my exams are on head😭) ... Jo's Mom and Bade bhaiyya have lost it or what! Exams dene jaa rahi hai vo... I understand that may be Jo ki anxiety dekhkar her Mom thought all that.. But still How on Earth are you asking all those questions...are you hiding something or what? As if this was not enough, Bade Bhaiya comes with 'Abhi jitna enjoy karna hai karlo... shaadi ke baad to ye sab band'... Thumbs UP to these two 👏🥱🥱🥱
'I better be careful with the glass painting as well!' she was referring to the latest project that she'd just started - the one of Robbie sitting on Jalal's lap.
I KNEW KNEW KNEW this!! She was gonna paint.. I should have said it in my comment before but I swear I knew why she had transferred that pic to her mob... may she would paint it herself..or make a portrait..laminate it n all I have thought... Anyways.. I got it half right 😛😆 But really... so so sweet and lovely of her! 😃😳
After the exam, the card she found in her bag (I know who kept it..btw 😡 ) ... was so so amazing..Hot.. unless the last line... Di I would like to tell you one thing... When I saw the blue lines even before reading the chap.. I obviously thought that it was some message.. and also thought that it must be from stalker... and last mein I get to know that..YUP.. It IS from stalker..but m no more surprised.. I think I know whos doing this all... Actually, jab kisi par shaq/doubt hota hai.. to We generally tend to observe their movements/talks/words carefully..Right? That's what I did in chap as well...!
Anyways.. Meri taraf se tell to that stalker (s) ... GO TO HELL and DONT come back!😡😆
Okay... seriously this is so annoying..whenever these two get sometime to meet each other... they have got a bad news or so... (Stalker😡)
Awwiiee My Jalal The way he spoke those abusive words... God! I could so very well imagine RT's enraging form in front of silent Pari Haayee!!! 😳
'Yeah...' he let out a deep breath 'Entrepreneurship...not the toughest subject...it went well...' his eyes finally met hers, mellowing down his attitude for a short spell 'And yours? Financial Accounts ...you would have aced it!'
Ohhooo... !! Compliment ho toh aisa...actually this is confidence on her..😃
Lol..he mimicked the asst. dean 😆 What all these two talk yaar..😆 ek dusre ke face par smile lane ke liye kya kuch nahi karte ❤️
Lol the Jealousy part... 2 ouches jalal ke...and third one for Jo... superb... I love the way they chat.. 😳 Simply shows how both of them are possessive of each other...
He surveyed her tight-lipped stance with awe. Such a naturally enticing package of emotions she was just then - fiery, witty, angry, flirty and haughty. Damn, he loved it. Only, her smile had gone amiss!
Ooo ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
So, he came up with something - a few words that should help bring her 'proud' grins back. Drifting closer to her ears, he whispered into them what was meant for her alone 'I've realized it's pointless getting worked up over some idiot's fantasies...no one's fault that my girlfriend's so irresistible...' sensing the hot flush beginning to radiate on her cheeks, he waited silently - before continuing with a husky tone 'That pervert can dream-on all he wants...I don't care... at the end of the day, it's to my arms that she comes running to...and it's me that she kisses...' he paused again - she was positively blushing now 'So, I'm the lucky guy here...'
Man! ☺️ (Di..how do you write such BRILLIANT dialogues...👏👏)
This Jalal should be punished for not only bringing up so many butterflies on Jo's tummy...but mine as well ☺️ I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED this bit..😳
With him not moving and her not budging, the smitten couple froze as they were. Their unceasing gazes did not go any further, but the duo weren't bothered since it was the thrill of the game that they enjoyed more. She loved how he kept her guessing. He loved how she kept him on his toes. They could sense the frenzy in one another's warm breath. They could feel the burning desire when their lips brushed past every now and again. Still, they didn't kiss, because they didn't want the games to end. Their enthrallment during that spell was unparalleled. The chemistry they shared was electric and they wanted it to go on forever...
I LOVE this para.. I LOVED that they didn't kiss... infact they enjoyed that dangeruously hot passionate moment... That's what makes them so much in love with each other...❤️ ☺️ ☺️
Tapki Renu beech mein... Uski kya galti waise.. Uska phone calls/msgs nahi uthaaye to she'll have to come na..😛😆
OKay both Jo and Ja have genuine reasons for their unsurity... But I am SO sure that either BOTH of them would make to the picnic... or BOTH of them would not make to the picnic...
A note to Stalker - Aap jis bhi reason ki wajah se ye sab kar rahe ho, its only resulting in bringing our beloved JoJa closer... so keep trying! You not gonna achieve anything..😃
Briliant chapter di.. LOVED it..
Continue soon!😳
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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