FF *Ishqzaade* ~THd-2~ chptr 31 updtd on page 34 - Page 6

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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

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Chapter 29:-

(Jodha stood up and walked to the washroom and changed in the beautiful full length LIGHT GREEN night gown...that was made up of two parts...i.e. a shiny overcoat with a sleeveless figure hugging nighty inside...she came out of the washroom...and again sat in front of the mirror...she left her hairs wide open without any support or hair clip...she looked at herself once again...to make sure that everything is perfect...but she was feeling a bit nervous from inside ...she closed her eyes to gather some strength...but as she closed her eyes...she started remembering about their previous love making session...how he lifted her up in his arms...his intense...passionate and desire full eyes...the way he lifted up her ghunghat...and kissed her from hand to face then lips...Jodha raised her finger...and started gliding it on her hand...approaching towards her shoulder...remembering and literally feeling his touch all over the places...where she caressed with her fingers...from hand to shoulders...then neck...then stopped them at her lips...her face was turning crimson...as she was blushing really heavily...smiling imagining him hugging and kissing her...suddenly she was having goose bumps all over her body...she opened her eyes slowly and whispered in a way too seductive voice..."I LOVE YOU SO MUCH SHENSHAH...I WILL DEFINITELY MAKE UP FOR THE MISTAKE I HAVE DONE...I HOPE YOU WILL FORGIVE YOUR SILLY BAAGHIN...WHERE ARE YOU??...PLZ COME SOON...")

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(On the other hand...Jalal was discussing some crucial issues with Adhka sahib...esp. about Adham's matter...so as to decide the correct strategy...by which he could be traced soon...after completing his discussion...Jalal took Adhka's leave...and left for his room...It was almost one hour since he was outside...so he thought Jodha must have been slept till now...but he dint have any idea...about what his baaghin was planning to do with him tonight...he reached near his hojra...but stopped thinking something...he asked the guard ...did he bring food for her or not??...he replied in a low tone that he asked her but she rejected for it...Jalal got even more disappointed...he immediately ordered him to bring food...and entered in the room...)

(As soon as Jalal entered in the room...his eyes caught her reflection in the mirror...he was surprised...amazed...astonished...for a moment he thought...who is that person sitting in his hojra without his permission...where is Jodha??...as it was his first time when he was seeing jodha in a night gown...in that much different avtaar...he looked at her reflection in the mirror with more curiosity & concentration...stepping forward slowly and found that it was Jodha only...)

(soothing cold breeze blew at once and touched Jodha's face gently...thus making her aware of his presence...she blushed slightly as she looked up at the mirror only to find him standing behind her...she looked at him in the mirror and they had an intense eye lock through the mirror...she slowly stood up and turned towards him...giving him a ravishingly seductive smile...Jalal was more than stunned seeing her that way...his eyes got glued to the beauty standing in front of him...she always looked beautiful and cute...but she can look this much hot and sexy...was way beyond his imagination...he just stared at her with his mouth left open in amazement slightly...she was not looking less than any stunning diva with lesser jewelry...with her hairs left wide open...and light makeup...including rosy pink lipstick...and a sheer eye liner highlighting her doe like eyes ...the soft wind was blowing gently...was making her hairs swing with its rhythm...thus causing a few threads falling on her face too...Jodha raised her fingers and put them behind her ear...looking at jalal with a blushing smile...Jalal felt like his heart literally stopped beating at that moment... he even forgot to breath for a while as his breath got stuck in his throat ...he was just too lost in her beauty...it worked on him as any black magic...whose spell has captured him completely...for a moment he forgot that they had any misunderstanding...that he was supposed to ignore looking at her...that he was upset with her...instead of it he was just gazing at her...not able to take his eyes off...)

(Seeing her plan moving in the right direction...Jodha slowly moved towards Jalal...staring at him...put her hand beneath his chin...and closed his open mouth...all smirking...As she touched him...he came out of her magic spell and shook his head...and in no time...all the anger, depression...and disappointment returned again...as he remembered what all happened few hours ago...as he had yet not forgotten her ruthless words...he was literally shocked at himself...that how easily he got trapped in her beauty...he moved his head sideways with a stern expression on his face...while Jodha kept on staring at him lovingly...finally after some time he spoke out in a plain tone still looking away..."aap soyi nahi??" ...Jodha replied in a husky seductive voice..."aapke bina hume nind aa bhi kaise sakti thi shenshah??"...)

Jalal: - magar humne kaha tha na...humra intezaar mat kariyega...aur aapne khane ke liye bhi mana kar diya...kyu??

Jodha: -aap jante hai shenshah...humne esa kyu kiya??... (She slowly glided her hands over his chest and shoulders in a most passionate way... encircling his neck with her arms...moved close to him)...hum jante hai jo kuch bhi hua wo thik nahi hua...kintu kya hum use bhul kar nayi shuruaat nahi kar sakte...

Jalal: - (looked at her finally as till now he was looking away... literally having tears in his eyes) itna aasan nahi hai jodha... (His voice turned a bit husky and painful now...) itna aasan nahi hai... (And with it...he gently rifted her hands apart...and turned to move towards his bed...when suddenly Jodha held his wrist... thus preventing him to move further and started singing with her eyes lowered...)

SONG: - WO HAI ZARA KHAFA KHAFA... (SHAAGIRD-1967)

Who hain zara... khafa khafa
To nain yun... churaye hain... ke ho, ho, ho

(Jalal stopped listening her melodious voice...and looked at her with an annoyed and hurt expression...Jodha too looked in his eyes and continued singing with an intriguing and convincing smile...)

Woh hain zara... khafa khafa
To nain yun ...churaye hain... ke ho, ho, ho

(Oh god...it was getting so hard for him to ignore her...he thought to himself...as his heart started singing *not him*...)

Na bol du ...To kya karu
VO hans ke yun ...bulaye hain ...ke ho, ho, ho

(but he controlled himself anyhow and freed his hand from her grip and moved towards the bed...put his shamsheer down on the desk beside his bed... fetch out his dagger from his pocket and kept it down too...and was about to remove his overcoat when Jodha walked up to him slowly and caught his hands from behind...thus helping him remove his overcoat...Jalal quickly withdrew his hands...but Jodha continued and removed his overcoat...sliding it down through his shoulders slowly...removed it completely...she put her head on his shoulder...but jalal moved away thus causing her to tumble a bit...she made a puppy face and followed him...Jalal went and stood in front of the mirror...started removing his necklace...Jodha moved towards the balcony and removed the curtains thus inviting the sparkling moonlight to help her in persuading her stubborn lover and husband...the room glowed immensely with the milky white moonlight...in the full moon night...she continued singing...)

Hans rahi hai chandani
Machal ke ro na du kahi (wiping out a lone tear that had escaped her eyes few moments ago)
Aise koi ruthata nahi(looked at him with a pleading face...)

(Jalal's heart...being way too impatient again started singing without his consent *not him*...)

Yeh tera khayaal hai
Kareeb aa mere hansi
Mujhko tujhse kuch gila nahi

(Jalal slowly patted over his chest...to shush his naughty heart...reminding him that he is angry with her...scolding him..."SHUT UP YOU IDIOT!!"...jodha walked towards him and held his necklace that he was about to remove and pulled him towards her with a startle...their faces mere inches apart now...she peeped in his eyes to know about his state...as she could very well understand that he was trying to control himself...)

Baat yun banaye hain ki o, ho, ho

(She moved near his ear and bit softly on his ear lobe...jalal...at first...lost his control a bit and raised his hands to embrace her but then quickly changed his mood and broke her apart...his anger was slightly getting converted into tantrums now...he couldn't hold but smiled turning his face away...but hid it immediately with his annoyed look...Jodha was trying her best to convince him...but seeing her tactics having no impact on him...her face saddened a bit...)

Woh hain zara... khafa khafa
To nain yun... churaye hain... ke ho, ho, ho

(a lone tear rolled down her cheek...but she quickly wiped it off...Jalal reached to the bed and started picking up a pillow and blanket to go...and sleep on the couch...Jodha hastily moved towards him...snatched it away from his hands and threw it away...all frustrated...held his hand with tears brimming in her eyes...continued singing...)

Aaise mat sataiye
Zara taras to khaaiye
Dil ki dhadkan mat jagaiye(put her head over his shoulder...placing his hand over her heart...)

(Finally Jalal sang out loud...a bit sarcastically...removing her head from his shoulder...)

Kuch nahin kahunga main
Na ankhdiyan jhukaiye
Sar ko kandhe se uthaiye

(and he moved away...picked up the blanket and pillow again and reached near the couch...put the pillow and blanket down...and lie down on the couch...and closed his eyes...without even looking at her even once...she sang with a complaining face looking at him... in a childish voice...)

Aise neend aaye hai ki... hmm, ho😡

Woh hain zara khafa khafa
To nain yun churaye hain ke ho, ho, ho, ho

(but jalal dint even budge and continued sleeping...put blanket over his face...seeing this much ignorance from his side...Jodha's heart broke apart into million pieces...her voice started getting low...and tears started flooding her eyes...she kept on staring at Jalal with wet eyes but there was no response from his side...having lost her hope...she completely shattered and fell down on her knees...and sang the last line...with a very low voice...with the sobs coming in b/w...)

Woh hain... (Sobs)... zara khafa khafa
to nain yun (sobs)... churaye hain ke ...(and her sobs became even more painful that she couldn't sing further...tears started flowing down her cheeks involuntarily...she looked at jalal with a final heartbreaking gaze...and stood up...tends to move out from the room all crying...)

(but as she was about to pass him...he suddenly removed the blanket...held her wrist tightly...and pulled her back forcibly...with that sudden pull...jodha twirled really fast and fell on top of a lying jalal with a bang...her hairs covered his face completely...Jalal slowly raised his hand and put her hairs aside to look in her innocent eyes...by now her sobs had got converted into..Little hiccups...she glanced at jalal all sobbing like a little baby...and unable to control herself anymore...she bust out in guilt...)

Jodha: - (crying like a baby with terrible sobs and hiccups...in a begging tone...cupping his face in her hands) hume shama kar dijiye shenshah...bhagvan ke liye humse naraz mat hoyiye...humse ghrina mat kariye...hume...hume is tarah nazarandaaz mat kariye...hum nahi seh sakte aur...nahi seh sakte...hum kuch bhi karege...hum jante hai humse bahut badi galti ho gayi hai...per bhagvan ke liye...humse esa vyvhaar mat kariye...hum mar jayege...hum seh nahi payege...hume shama...shama kar dijiye...shama...(and her words got interrupted due to the long hiccups coming in b/w...her tears kept falling on jalal's shoulders making them wet thoroughly...even she dint realize how many times she said sorry in her sentence...seeing her this much shattered...Jalal couldn't hold himself even for a second...he immediately hugged her really tight...to console her...)

Jalal:- (patting her head...consoling her like a little baby) shhh...chup...bilkul chup...ek lavz aur nahi ab...bus...(hiding her completely in his arms...caressing her back with his one hand...and patting her head with other...Jodha too clutched his kurta really tight and pushed her head towards his chest...cried really very loud...with her eyes closed in immense pain and remorse...Jalal dint know what else he could do to calm her down...her loud laments were getting intolerable for him...he just squeezed her in his arms and pulled her even more closer...now her body was completely over his body...he caressed her long hairs)...bus ho gaya na baba...jodha...bus kariye...are meri baaghin...ab itna royegi to pura aagra beh jayega aapke aasuon ki dhaar me... .hum naraz nahi hai aapse...kisne kaha ke hume aapse koi narazgi hai...balki hum to apne aap se khafa the ke hum khud ko is kaabil nahi bana paaye ke humari jodha hum per yakin ker sake...

Jodha: - (kept on sobbing...) na...nahi...shen...shenshah...galti humari hi hai...hu...hume aapki baat sunni chahiye thi...ma... magar...us samay hum apne hosh me hi nahi the...aap humare jivan ki sabse anmol dharohar hai shenshah...aapko kho dene ke dar ne hume pagal kar diya tha...humne wo sab sirf isiliye kiya...kyuki hum aapse bahut zyada prem karte hai shenshah...jab..jab humne rukkaiya begum ko wo sab kehte suna...hume laga mano humme pran hi shesh na reh gaye ho...mano...mano kisi ne humare sine me talwar ghop di ho...us pida ka anumaan laga paana bhi asambhav hai kisi ke liye...hum toot gaye the shenshah...hum bikher gaye the...

(Suddenly jalal got up and sat on the diwan...with jodha still sitting in his lap...he gripped her waist tightly with his one hand...and with other...he caressed her cheek and wiped her tears off...)

Jalal: - (in a much calm and soft voice) baat galetfehmi ki nahi thi Jodha...hum achi tarah jante hai ke aap hume kitna chahti hai...gila to sirf is baat ka tha hume...ke humare wajah batane ke bavjood aapne hum per yakin nahi kiya...yakin karna to door aapne yaha tak keh diya ke hum jhoot bol rahe hai...humare dil ko chot sirf isiliye pahuchi..kyuki hume ummid nahi thi ke humari mohabbat itni kamzor ho sakti hai...ke ek halke se jhoke se tinke ki tarah bikher jaaye...

Jodha: - (spoke out at once with a stern and protesting voice)...no shenshah...I admit that I have committed a grave mistake...but that doesn't mean that my love is weak...that was just a momentary weakness...I love u more than anything else in this world...I love you madly...deeply...terribly...and I can prove it to you...do you want me to prove it??...just tell me...I can do anything to make up for it...

(Jalal held her face tightly in his hands...and joined his head to hers...and spoke out all smiling)

Jalal: -na meri baaghin...iski koi zaroorat nahi hai...hum ab naraaz nahi hai...magar aapko humse ek waada karna hoga...phir kabhi mat kahiyega ke hum aapko aapki khubsurati ke liye chahte hai...zindagi bhar aapse jismani taur pe door reh sakte hai hum...lekin phir bhi humari mohabbat me koi kami nahi aayegi...hum aapko isliye chahte hai kyuki sirf ek aap hi hai...jisne jalal ko samjha...uski zaroorato ko samjha...shenshah ko chahne wale to kai the jodha...per hume chahne wale...humse mohabbat karne wale bahut kam...aapne humari zindagi ke khalipan ko door kiya hai jodha...isliye aap humare liye bahut khaas hai...aapki choti se choti baat ka bhi bahut gehra asar hota hai humare dil per...khuda ke liye dobara humari mohabbat per shaq mat kijiyega...kyuki phir shayad hum khud ko samhal na paaye...

Jodha: - (cupping his face in her hands) hum vachan dete hai shenshah...chahe jo ho jaaye...per dobara esa kabhi nahi hoga...phir kabhi aapke prem per sandeh karne ki galti nahi karege hum...bus antim baar shama kar dijiye...dobara esa nahi hoga...hum vachan dete hai aapko...

Jalal: - (kissing her cheeks lovingly) shhh...bus mera bachha...hum apni jaan se naraz kaise ho sakte hai...aur waise bhi...jis insaan ki biwi had se zyada khubsurat ho...use to jhukna padta hi hai...waise ek baat kahen...is libaaz me aap bala ki khubsurat lag rahi hai allah kasam...humari to saanse hi ruk gayi thi ek pal ke liye...upper se aapki adayen...ufff...koi khud ko rok paaye bhi to kaise...

Jodha: - (giggled out loud...) acha ban to bade akdu rahe the aap...bilkul jallad ki tarah...

Jalal: -kya kare...lekin aapki adaaon ne aakhirkaar hume majboor kar hi diya...aur hum khud ko rok nahi paaye...

Jodha:- (in a seductive voice...pulling him towards her) to rukne ko kaha bhi kisne hai shenshah...(and she bend her head to kiss him...but before their lips can touch each other..There was a knock on the door...Jalal faced away in frustration...)

Jalal: - (shouted out loud in rage...holding jodha in his embrace tightly...) kaun hai yaar...??...ek pal theher nahi sakte kya...??

Guard: - (spoke out in a plain tone) gustaakhi muaff ho shenshah...aapne khana mangaya tha na...wohi lekar aaye hai...

(Jalal looked at Jodha with a mischievous smile and said in a husky voice..."pehle khana kha le...badi zor ki bhook lagi hai...aur waise bhi abhi to puri raat baaki hai..."...winked at her...jodha smiled back blushingly and nodded her head...Jalal got up from the couch...opened the door slightly...took the food and signaled the guard to leave...)

(he came back with the plate full of delicious food...all jodha's favorites...she became more than delighted seeing it...Jalal came and sat beside her on the couch...and tried to pick a piece of Roti...but as his hand was injured he was having problem in doing that...Jodha affectionately held his hand...and gestured that she will feed him...she took a piece from the plate...and forwarded it towards him...Jalal looked at her with tears in his eyes...and instead of having it himself...he held her hand...and made her eat first...both enjoyed their romantic moonlight dinner together...all smiling...giggling and blushing...feeding each other with love...)

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(It was almost late night...and the lovely couple was sitting in the balcony of shenshah's room...on a comfortable couch...lost in each other's love...in the full moon glowing at its peak...with Jodha resting her head on jalal's shoulder...holding his arm...while Jalal's one hand around her shoulder and other caressing her hand on his arm... Jalal looked at her with an obsessive stare and asked her teasingly...."Acha Jodha...ek baat puche..."...Jodha replied with her eyes closed..."hmmm...puchiye...")

Jalal: - (smirking) aapne itna sab kuch kiya hume rijhane ke liye...ye alag baat hai ke hum aapki khubsurati ke jaal me fas gaye...lekin...farz kijiye...agar hum phir bhi na maante to... (He stopped for a moment then asked more curiously)...to phir aap kya karti??

(Jodha elevated her head up from his shoulder slowly...and looked deep down in his eyes...with irresistible passion in her eyes...she moved really close to his face...and said in a seductive whispher..."phir to humare paas matra ek hi marg shesh reh jaata..."...Jalal too asked in somewhat similar tone...lost in her desire full eyes..."aur wo kya hota??")

(Jodha...slowly but steadily...snaked her hands over his cheeks...bend her head sideways...and pressed her lips against his softly...with that gentle touch Jalal closed his eyes for a moment then opened them again...Jodha moved a bit backward and looked in his eyes with enormous love in her eyes for him...she again bend forward and this time...placed a small peck on his upper lip...then slowly moved downwards and slightly licked his lower lip...then again looked in his eyes...they shared a very intense eye lock before again meeting their lips...Jodha capture his upper lip with her lips and sucked it...arousing his senses...then moved downward and bit slightly over his lower lip...It was enough for turn Jalal on...he held her waist tightly...and swing her from his one arm to another...gripped it with full force...and pulled her towards him...making her body come colliding with his...entered his one hand in her hairs with other pressing her waist...kissed her passionately on her lips...Jodha replied his kiss with the same aggression...having her grip tight on his neck...and in no time the passionate smooch got converted into a full mouth vigorous kiss...with their tongues rolling over each other's lips...playing and teasing each other's...They kissed each other with the same amount of passion as long as they could...while kissing him...Jodha slowly moved her hands down...and opened the nodes of his robes in haste...and slid her hands inside it...started caressing his manly chest and shoulders...almost massaging them...Her approach was making jalal go crazy with desire for more...he left her lips for a moment...entered his hand in her hairs more deep...and pulled them slightly thus causing her neck to tilt a bit backward...thus revealing her cylindrical neck to him...he slowly moved down from her lips...to chin...then licking up her entire throat...smooching and exploring it with his hot lips...he kissed her vigorously from lips ...down till cleavage again and again...now it was Jodha's turn...she slowly slide off his robe down his shoulders...caressing his arms until the robe completely slid off his arms completely...she then started kissing down from his lips...to chin...to neck...to the bare... broad and silky skin of his manly chest as if imitating him...Jalal was enjoying this much passion from her side towards him to the core...as if she was loving him for the last time...Jodha was going insane completely thus making him loose his senses also...Jalal...in respond to her passion...stood up...holding her up In his arm...slid his hand over her neck and shoulder...thus removing her overcoat with his hand from her shoulders... Pushing it down...Jodha stiffed her hands straight as if helping him to do his work swiftly...the gown slip off her arms...leaving her only in the figure hugging nighty...that had only two strip at the side of shoulders for support...having a node at the top of it...Jalal held her up more tightly in his arms...by waist and pulled her inside the room...closing the curtain of balcony with one hand...other still squeezing her waist...)

(As they came inside...Jodha bit on the side of his neck with her sharp teeth...Jalal hissed loudly...and as an automatic response..."Jodha...what are u doing??..."...but she was not in a mood to listen...and again sensually bit on his color bon...Jalal understood her plight and want for him...that was driving her crazy...her sharp bites caused jalal's moves to turn aggressive too...he slowly remove her hairs from her neck...and bit on the side of her neck sensually...a luscious smile appeared on her lips rapidly...as she kept on caressing his bare back...drawing random patterns with her fingers on it...thus driving him more insane...he swiftly moved his lips from neck to shoulders and opened the dori at the top...by pulling it with his teeth...he continued kissing her wildly from one side of shoulder to other...thus reached upon her second dori at the other side...and opened it too...now the support the garment was having was lost...it was about to fell down but before...it could slip down...he glided his hand on her thigh and lifted her up in his arms and again captured her lips with his with wild passion...carried her to the bed...All the while...jodha kept on pulling his hairs lightly...completely lost in the kiss...they almost fell down on the bed...with Jodha on top of Jalal...his smooth hot skin was making her go crazy...she glided both of her hands from his belly to neck...leaving a trail of passionate smooches all over simultaneously...Jalal was really amazed at Jodha's actions...they were so different from the previous one...she had turned into a seductress completely...he just enjoyed her new wild avatar...all smirking...Jodha again reached to his lips...but this time looked in his eyes...her innocent eyes had turned really intense...she whispered in his ears seductively..."I LOVE YO SO MUCH...I WANT YOU...I NEED YOU...I LOVE YOU SHENSHAH..."...her words made jalal go out of his senses...he immediately rolled on the bed...and came on top of her...started smooching her cleavage with utmost intensity...moving down slowly...he swiftly...slid her dress down by his hand...thus revealing the most sensual part of her body...he then kissed passionately on her bre*ts...one after another...tasting and licking them...rolling his tongue over her mound...Jodha was enjoying his touch to the core...because there was a certain softness in his wildness...it was showing his care and devotion towards her womanhood...he moved down further and slid the dress more down...thus targeting her belly now...he rolled his hand over her belly in most passionate way...that made her moan very louder...and kissed her there with enormous love...tears began to flow down her eyes as he removed her gown completely...and lie over her all nak*d...he again reached to her face to match her eyes level... and cupped her face...thus making her look in his eyes...she looked in his eyes..that were in tears too...both of them were drenched in their own sweat due the immense amount of wildness in them...going out of breath...gasping hard...."I LOVE YOU JODHA...PLZ NEVER DOUBT MY LOVE...I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH MY LIFE..."...and with it...still looking in her eyes...he filled her with his love...with tears flowing down involuntarily from their eyes...Jodha hugged him really tight...enjoying his pure and divine love for her...and after a long session of passionate love making...they collapsed in each other's arms...and dozed off hugging each other possessively and obsessively...as if they are..."DO JISM EK JAAN"😳... )

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Originally posted by: IshaAkbar

tell me where to comment on this entire story. you want pm or commment on this post. let me know soon I am actually busy looking for the words to describe. so it will take sometime for me to comment.

are haan...thanku summu...dukko...bhavu...swati ..tani...and everyone who waited and requested for this update..🤗

Originally posted by: ms.dhingra

damn good...its outstanding, marvellous, amazing, fabulous...omg i will have search my dictionary for expressing dt how much i luvd it..

i thnk m reading first time jodha wrong nd jalal z doing nakhra nd all otherwise always my jalal z wrong😭...

loved ds update to d core...plz update bhi jaldi diya kro...ehsaas ki update b jaldi se de do.

Originally posted by: ashpat

I know everyone will hate me when i say this but i am glad u r giving SR in next chapter and not in this chapter. I liked how u handled how jalal felt about jodhas comment about lust etc. jalal was very careful and i understand jodhas pov too but she should have listened to truth first. Thx for pm. Plzzz update soon. Very ecxoting precap.