OS : Akdha's remarriage PT 8 *UPDATED* ON PG 27 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS : AKDHA'S REMARRIAGE
//PART 4//
Seeing him hurting himself , she forward her hand in pain and a 'no' escapes from her mouth as she can't bear to see him like this!!! He looks up to her innocently as a kid who uses to look at their mother with such sparkling eyes after doing a foppery thing which they know that it isn't going to put their mom in such a sweet mood. Looking to her with such eyes , she looks at him in a same way but more sternly , she nods in a 'no' but once Jalal's eyes has drown into Jodhaa's , he didn't forward to give attention on what she's saying , he is just frozen there kneeling on the ground and his eyes drown into her eyes , her doe like shapeful eyes , deep and well carved till the well pointed corner at the end as a sharp top head of a pencil but delicately pointed above , into her magnificient shinning brown iris , but today reaching there , his eyebrows frown confused as he can't see properly her brown glaring eyes as they are hidden behind her watering tears , something stucked there in his throat seeing this and he clenches his teeth in anger while Jodhaa forward in haste toward him seeing that his hand is continously bleeding meanwhile Ruqaiya has already entered inside her chamber before she can reach at him , Ruqaiya screams with her loud striking voice in an authority manner like asking Jodhaa not to move further , this yelling of her was needless and she knew that but she didn't find any other solution at that precise moment when Jodhaa was approaching Jalal , she must find something fastly to react at this act , to stop her from coming near to her's Jalal , her's husband and after that scream Jodhaa looks toward the doorstep and sees Ruqaiya there standing with a fiery and proud big headed , glaring to her with eyes full of hatred , jealousy and anger , shooting at her as a furious hunter flashes of sharp lightning and arrows aiming her , the spiteful evilness and machiavellian thought in mind are visible through her expression and eyes , she rushes as a storm from nowhere toward Jalal ignoring totally Jodhaa , but what she comes to discover gives her one more reason to yell and scandalize seeing Jalal's dagger inserted into his hand , her eyes widened in shock and she screams in bump "FOR GOD SAKE JALAL!!! HOW DOES THIS HAPPEN??? STILL YOU'RE THERE KNEELING ON FLOOR STARING NOWHERE!!! LOOK AT YOUR HAND!!! WAIT, I WILL CALL BANDHIS TO . . ." Jalal still ignoring Ruku's presence , staring at Jodhaa , cuts her in between saying "NO NEED OF IT" Ruqaiya viciously glares at Jodhaa and sees that they're staring to each other , she fumes in anger , making her blood boil in fury and fire and then she goes near Jalal by cupping his face in her hand and she hugs her to provoke Jodhaa's feelings and hurt her deeply so that she gets conscient about where is her place there , among other wives in harem and near Jalal , she wants to put her at her own place!!! Jodhaa seeing that they're sharing intimate moments between hubby and wife , she feels umcomfortable of her presence here , feeling that it may disturbs them , she feels ill at ease and turns her back to them in speed , she doesn't know why is she feeling like that? It's normal since they're hubby and wife not as two strangers getting intimate infront of her from whom she should get awkward and be ill at ease , why her heart is in pain seeing that someone else is taking care of him , loving him and sharing intimate moments with him? Why? She is also his wife but why? Why her heart is unable to accept it? Why her eyes refuse to see them? Why her heart stopped beating when she saw him hurting himself? Why his pain does effect on her? Why? Why she does care for him? She has declared once infront of him with certitude that she can never ever love him then now where has this certitude disappeared? Why now she feels like she has lied to him? Her mind is full of those unsure questionning , as floppy clouds of doubts over her mind but she is roughly awaken when she hears Ruqaiya's gallivant utterance to Jalal , she yells purposely so that Jodhaa can hear it soundly , she yells "OH MY LOVE , YOU MADE ME FRIGHTENED FOR A WHILE , HOW CAN YOU HUM?" while Jalal is continously staring toward Jodhaa , sensing that her presence is inconvenient , she checks for once before leaving and she reluctantly turns toward them and sees Ruqaiya tightly hugging him meanwhile Jalal is continously gazing at her , she senses his deep gaze and whole attention toward her , it seems like , till now he is unconscious in complete ignorance about Ruqaiya's presence , like his eyes are glued on her , it makes her really embarrased , not knowing how to react to this , she turns away from him and hastily begins to leave thinking that she must not be there and she should leave them alone between hubby and wife , she faster her steps to reach at the doorstep to quit the chamber as fast as possible but before she could steps outside her chamber , Jalal staring at her since the beginning realize her going far from him and senses Ruqaiya's proximity from him , be breaks the hug and yells loudly "WAIT JODHAA" surprising her and stunning Jodhaa!!! Before Jodhaa can react , Ruqaiya looks at him shocked and stammers "JALAL" but he cuts her in between saying "RUQAIYA PLEASE CAN YOU LEAVE US ALONE FOR A MOMENT , JODHAA BEGUM AND ME!!! WE HAVE TO DISCUSS ON A PERSONAL MATTER!!!" , the 'personal matter' makes Jodhaa feels awkward while Ruqaiya gets stupefact thinking for the first time Jalal doesn't want me to shuffle in a matter and nor want to share it with me!!! What can it be? Not finding what can the matter be about? She thinks of staying there and thought of insisting , she fakely pretends "BUT JALAL , JODHAA BEGUM AND ME BOTH ARE YOUR WIFE THEN WHY CAN'T YOU DISCUSS WITH BOTH OF US???" Jalal gets annoyed , he still try to deal gently with her as it's unusual for her , after his numerous attempts , Ruqaiya still keeps cutting him not letting him explain her properly then he glares at her in irritation shouting "RUQAIYA , I SAID LEAVE!!!" , she still tries to insist but meeting Jalal's glare , she decideds to leave , to avoid troubles between them and hesitatingly leave glaring lastly at Jodhaa angrily for once!!! After she leaves , Jodhaa still stays stucked there at the doorstep until Jalal gentily asks her (in a husky voice) "JODHAA BEGUM , CAN YOU SHIFT THERE SO THAT WE CAN DISCUSS PEACEFULLY?" but she doesn't react staying stucked there at the place till Jalal asks with a louder voice "JODHAA BEGUM" , she hears this time his call and goes to him nervously once there , Jalal starts slowly (with a husky and calm voice) "JODHAA BEGUM , I . . . " but before he could complete his sentence , Jodhaa cuts him roughly saying "YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE TALK TO RUQAIYA BEGUM IN SUCH WAY!!!" , sternly with a neutral face without meeting his eyes. Leaving him spellbounded , he is stunned by her concern for her in spite of Ruqaiya's ill behaviour and conduct with her , but Jalal rethinks about what he comes to talk with her and says calmly with a composed voice "JODHAA , I AM NOT HERE TO TALK ABOUT RUQAIYA" , Jodhaa recalls his harsh words before the accident , how he humiliated her and insulted her despite of her numerous attempts to make him understand that his life was in danger!!! His words echoes in her ears constantly "I PROMISE THAT I WOULD NEVER STEP AGAIN IN YOUR ROOM JODHAA BEGUM , TO BE HONEST , I AM FEELING DISGUSTED OF BEING OBLIGATED TO CONSTANTLY SEE YOUR FACE" , tears start to form inside her eyes but she tries to stay strong and taunts him saying "OR MAYBE YOU COME TO INSULT ME ONCE AGAIN AS YOU AREN'T SATISFACT" , Jalal tries to contradict her but Jodhaa is busy in crashing out her anger on him that she doesn't even stop to listen him. She retaunts him saying "YOU PROMISED TO NEVER EVER STEP IN MY CHAMBER SHEHENSHAH THEN HOW COME THAT YOU BREAK IT? AREN'T YOU SUPPOSE TO BE DISGUST SEEING MY FACE?" Jalal yells on her to calm her down "LISTEN TO ME JODHAA" , but she doesn't even give an ear to him and continues to grumble with her statements "THEN TELL ME WHY YOU ARE HERE?" , "YOU SHOULD HAVE NEVER COME HERE , IT COULD HAVE AVOID LOTS OF TROUBLES!!!" , "TELL ME WHY YOU'RE HERE?" , for a moment , the silence takes place for a moment between them , Jalal stays mum at this question of her , while Jodhaa is waiting for his answer , instant after it lasts , she takes his silence for an assumation , for accepting and admitting his mistake , his silence hurts her and makes her furious , she yells at him sarcastically (with a painful voice) "OH , I GET IT , YOU CAME HERE TO MOCK ME , TO MOCK AT MY CONDITION , TO SEE IF I AM ALIVE OR DEAD (RAISING HER VOICE) BUT MUCH TO YOUR BIGGEST DISAPPOINTMENT , I AM ALIVE RIGHT? YOU WERE EXPECTING ME TO DIE . . ." , the last line of her sentence hurts him to core , his heart bump inside his chest , it was like a heart attack for him where his heart was jumping out of his body , a fireball passes through his gullet , his eyes become redder then blood vessels and a red chili , an unknown anger recovers whole his mind , a lonely droplet of tear rolls down from the corner of his eyes reflecting through it the pain and anger created by her vicious and harsh words , he holds tightly his fist to control himself despite that on the otherside Jodhaa is totally unaware of Jalal's state , she continues blabbering those harsh words until a manly hand presses tightly her
arm , she rushes to turn toward him making her ghagra's dupatta stucks in his wound , unable to bear this unbearable pain creates by two different contents , he whiffs heavily alarming Jodhaa of this sudden change in his behaviour , she reads the pain through his eyes and remembers his untreated wound on his hand , she holds his hand worriedly to check the depth of wound , seeing it continously bleeding as before , the fear in her conducts to run in search of the aid box , not realising that her dupatta is stucked inside while running it begins to twist slowly inside Jalal's wound , Jalal tries hardly to bear it by whiffing profusely until it begins to scratch his wound , he shouts in pain "AWWW DAMN" , at the same Jodhaa stops and turns toward him sensing that the transparent ghagra which is covering her belly and whole the cleavage in back is slowly beginning to tear , but hearing Jalal screaming she runs toward him and realizes that her dupatta is stucked inside his wound even worse , the wound is slowly beginning to scratch , not finding another solution she bits over to cut it surprising Jalal of this sudden act of her , he stares at her stunned while she is busy , staring at her makes him loose all his pain and anger , all of them has been drown into her angelic face , he looks at each part of her face , inch part of it is worthy to be admired , to be praise , able to mesmerize and let a person spellbounded and flabbergasted , he is one of those persons!!! After that she tears her dupatta and covers the wound by it's tissue carefully and delicately in order not to hurt him!!! Even if her ghagra is in disaster now , she is busy in nursing him and didn't realize that her belly is nearly visible and that all her dupatta has been torn!!! After she finishes , she moves away from him telling that now he can leave as Ruqaiya may waiting for him but he mischievously approaches her holding a piece of torn tissue and gently covers the back of her cleavage , sensing his sudden warm touch it makes whole her body shivers , she holds back her breath not to let him sense anything!!! There he asks her gently kneeling behind her (with a husky voice) "JODHAA , WOULD YOU LIKE TO REMARRY WITH THE MAN WHO HAS MADE YOUR LIFE A HELL , WHO HAS LEFT YOUR SIDE WHEN YOU NEEDED HIM THE MOST , WHO HAS OBLIGATED YOU TO FACE LOTS OF TROUBLES AND HUMILIATIONS , WHO HAS BROUGHT TEARS IN YOUR EYES FOR NUMEROUS TIME???" , Jodhaa stays there speechless and stunned about what she has just came to hear , she stays mum but deeply hurt inside thinking that Jalal wants to play this game with her so that she can easily forgive him , she doesn't respond worrying Jalal , but before he can ask again , she cuts him roughly saying "WHY? WHY YOU ALWAYS WANT TO PLAY WITH ME SHEHENSHAH ? WHY? DO YOU THINK OF ME AS A LIFELESS DOLL WITH WHICH YOU CAN DO ANYTHING? WHY? WHY WITH ME WHEN THE HAREM IS FULL OF OTHER WOMEN WITH WHOM YOU CAN REMARRY? IT WOULD BE THEIR DREAM , ALL OF THEM ARE MAD OF
YOU THEN STILL WHY YOU WANT TO MARRY WITH SOMEONE WHO HATES YOU TO CORE , WHO HAS ONLY HATRED AND RANCOR IN HEART FOR YOU? WHY ?" questionning him again and again profusely , but what she expresses randomly ignoring everything by pronouncing the word "hatred" , it pierces deeply inside his heart as a poisoned arrow , he rushes out of her chamber and Jodhaa watches him leaving teary-eyed and she breaks down in tears!!!

PRECAP : Akdha feeds each other 😳😳

I know , the chapter was a disaster but still please do leave your feedbacks 😃😃 It's dedicated for my sweetypie SUMESHNI as I couldn't update the duet OS as promised 🤗🤗


Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
superb emotional block buster👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Awesome superb amazing update
Poor Jalal he really loves her but she
Plz plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww this is such an emotional intense touching update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved loved loved every scene to the core.!! 👏 Didn't like Rukku's fake proximity with Jalal.!! 😡 And AkDha's emotional turmoil was heartbreaking to the core.!!! 😭
Utmost perfection personified 😳
well done.!! Looking forward to Precap 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luvly updte..😊liked it
pplz uddte soon
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if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
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block buster...super se bht upar...thnx for pm..🤗
ur apni comment bhi unres kar do...maine uske bad ek update b de di..😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww it was wonderfull 👏 He finally proposed!!!! YAY😳 Beautiful update!! Thanks for the PM Waiting for the next part desperatly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vow super emotional update. Liked their feelings till core and ofcourse jala asking ruks to leave😉
just amazing👏 do update soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
part 4
awesome...
Jalal was looking only at Jodha...
but her words hurt him so much...
cont soon dear...

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