OS : JODHA BANI MEERA: PART 4 Page 25 updated Feb 10th - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ya! pls take them out of agra so thay can spend time alone like the coming epi...they r going to dargah but u modify here instead of dargah u name it another plc 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Di.. I don't have enough words to praise you for this masterpiece OS !!!👏👏👏👏 Seriously, I LOVED it !!!😳😳 You have written this with immense emotions and I really loved the concept!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ The way you brought out Jalal's fear upon Jodha's condition..written exceptionally well!!!👏👏👏 I loved how you brought out Jalal's pleads to almighty and then to Aawam..😳⭐️⭐️⭐️ I absolutely loved all the emotions..👏👏👏 I just love your writing..coz you write feelings and emotions SOoo well that I imagine and feel it happening in front of me..😳😳 Finally, Jodha woke up and she was bit taunting towards him.. It was good bit..😛😛 I loved how guilt-struck Jalal was.. and finally Jo understood that he has been very worried and concerned for her..😳😳😳 Overall, this OS is a MASTERPIECE !!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I am so sorry, I wanted to write more of a review..and I'll post that soon..This one is just to appreciate that how much I loved this piece !!!😃😃

Love you di..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
update plzzz...di plz try to give one update in two days...plz plz plz.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anshfever

yipeee update mik gya...di do din??? pta h kitne hote h.

in do dino ki kimat aap kya jano bhavi d😆...jyada to nhi hua na😆.

ds update ws amazing. loved d moment when jo ws feeling proud for his love. when HB nd salima told her whole incident nd hyeee jalal's guilt ws so painful...she ws crying in her sleep...well written...

overall i luvd ds update...bt ittu sa tha ye update. at d end i ws like... BASS...khatam ho gya😲.

Swati Sweetu I will update soon... I am so swamped with so much workShocked ... U have no idea...once you have kids..hubby...tomany responsibilities...but as soon as I get free time I will update... I want to update both story but looks like I will be able to do one only...I will try to update both...not sure...
I am so happy U like this chotu chappy tooo... it was full of emotions... senti...lol
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baubles

Brilliant Bhav di!!! But inna chotu, not fair..😒

Loved the parts where Jo could feel Jalal's pain and guilt the most..it was so touching!😭
Hamida n Jo bond is lovely!😳
The best was the 2 times Jo held Jalal's hands to make him sit next to her.
Awesome part di...but next part lambaaasa I want ok?😡😛
Love ya🤗

My Sweet Somu... I know it's not fair😲 but its better than none😆 actually I got so much stuck in work had not time to add make it longer so I update it..but I will try to make longer next one...😃
I love the part Jo hold his hand...😃 love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome superb updates.
beautifully written
Plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

OMG OMG...

for now...res...
as i have to find words to prise this one...
yaar nowadays i m feeling that i m in love...oh my akdha...
can't get them out of my mind...

PALLU MERI JAAN...
I AM GLAD U LIKE THIS CHOTU CHAPTER TOO...
NOWA DAYS😲 ABE ME TO KABSE AKDHA KE PYAAR ME HU😆
AB YE BUKHAR UTRNE VALO ME SE NAHI HAI...BACHA😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

res... I will update soon...

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow so touching, really nice update. I read this twice that's how beautiful it was, great job! Please update soon, thank you!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, what an amazing writing style.. 👍🏼
Makes love sound sooo beautiful.
Thanks for writing and sharing...
we are lucky to read such amazing writing :) 🤗

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