Akdha SS-Touch Of Love part 3 updated - Page 6

Kashmi my angel I am so happy!!🤗 I had no idea that you had started a sorry and I apologise for not commenting earlier. I see you have updated part 2 as well but I wish to review each one individually because I know your wonderful writing deserves nothing less!! This is for part 1...I have seen for myself the depth of your understanding for these beloved characters and today I finally have the privilege of reading your work and I have to say... You're off to a fantastic start!! This was a wonderful track to start from and you have done every single character justice!! Benazir, the ruthless vishkanya, portrayed as a sinister vamp, Jalal who suffers from a misunderstanding yet his agony upon realising the truth was captured perfectly by you Kashmi👏👏👏 Take a bow darling, ever since I saw the promo I have wondered what this scene could turn into and honestly, your portrayal and your version not only satiated my curiosity but went above anything my imagination could have possibly conjured up!! Jalal forcing Jodha to drink the water was a stroke of genius and brought a bittersweet edge to this track!! Bitter for obvious reasons but I say sweet because it will truly be a treat to see how you handle him making it up to her!! Jodha... What can I say about her that no-one already knows?? She is the ultimate pati vithaisthri and your writing brings out her dignity, her pain, her bravery and her Rajvansh shaurya with aplomb⭐️⭐️⭐️ I loved the beginning love... And I'm going straight back to read and review chapter 2!!! Please update soon!! I can't wait for more! And thank you for the pm❤️

Originally posted by: kb_war

great jalal realising his love for jodha

Thank you so much dear..😊.

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

excellent part...do continue soon...good that jalal recognized his love for jodha.

Thank you for the appreciation dear.. Will surely continue soon..😃.

Originally posted by: karry...

Wow!!! My dear u write very welli loved it.keep writing . No doubt its the best i ever read in this forum 😊 👏

Thank you soo much for your wonderful comment karry..😃.

I just finished part two and I WANT MORE😛😛😛

wowiee...jallu ji in love

Originally posted by: Az3003

Kashmi my angel I am so happy!!🤗 I had no idea that you had started a sorry and I apologise for not commenting earlier. I see you have updated part 2 as well but I wish to review each one individually because I know your wonderful writing deserves nothing less!! This is for part 1...I have seen for myself the depth of your understanding for these beloved characters and today I finally have the privilege of reading your work and I have to say... You're off to a fantastic start!! This was a wonderful track to start from and you have done every single character justice!! Benazir, the ruthless vishkanya, portrayed as a sinister vamp, Jalal who suffers from a misunderstanding yet his agony upon realising the truth was captured perfectly by you Kashmi👏👏👏Take a bow darling, ever since I saw the promo I have wondered what this scene could turn into and honestly, your portrayal and your version not only satiated my curiosity but went above anything my imagination could have possibly conjured up!! Jalal forcing Jodha to drink the water was a stroke of genius and brought a bittersweet edge to this track!! Bitter for obvious reasons but I say sweet because it will truly be a treat to see how you handle him making it up to her!! Jodha... What can I say about her that no-one already knows?? She is the ultimate pati vithaisthri and your writing brings out her dignity, her pain, her bravery and her Rajvansh shaurya with aplomb⭐️⭐️⭐️I loved the beginning love... And I'm going straight back to read and review chapter 2!!! Please update soon!! I can't wait for more! And thank you for the pm❤️

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Would you believe me if I say I read your comment like 5-6 times and I'm so freaking happy to have received such a warm welcome from you azu..🤗.
Your comment brightened my mood by infinite times thank you so so so so so very much for your love and acceptance az I love you for this..❤️.

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Would you believe me if I say I read your comment like 5-6 times and I'm so freaking happy to have received such a warm welcome from you azu..🤗.
Your comment brightened my mood by infinite times thank you so so so so so very much for your love and acceptance az I love you for this..❤️.

You deserve it my angel🤗 Thank me with an update😉😆

Originally posted by: Az3003

You deserve it my angel🤗Thank me with an update😉😆

Gimme a return gift in the form of tu jahan's update then..😛.