Ahhh Thank you so very very much hun for liking my work and giving me such a wonderful comment for it..😃. I'm extremely happy you liked it will definitely pm you when i update next sure thing..👍🏼.Originally posted by: zebbie0504
Omg... Omg... Omg... It was so good... Beautifully written... Perfect portrayal of the feelings of Jalal and Jodha... My Jodha... She is suffering a lot. Thank God,Jalal beheaded Benazir and Zakira... Just to prove Benazir that she is a vishkanya,Jodha drank the sherbet from Jalal's glass... In order to save her husband,she even bore his insults,so that he remains safe and hale and hearty... Wow... Finally,Jodha is back... Jalal is repenting for his deeds.. Atlast,he admitted that he is in love with Jodha...
Read both the parts in one go... It is awesome blowsome... Please please continue sooonish... Do pm me,whenever u update next...
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