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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

i am speechless

i do not have words
outstanding
extraordinary
excellent
magnificent
fantastic
fabulous
awesome
superb
wonderful
lovely
beautiful
mind blowing

well i will not review it in just 1 post
as then it will be an insult of the update
when u have given such an update
then u have to go through my rants
i will review it in parts

U KNOW RIMA ...UR COMMENT AND AYESHA'S COMMENT I AM ALWAYS WAITING FOR... U BOTH SHARE UR CONCERN AND LOVE FOR THE STORY...😃😃😃
I am so touched with your comment U have no idea... UR so many comment for this chapter really brought tears in my eyes... I always feel that I am not that good in writing... after posting chapter I feel I could have done better...every time push myself more to improve... Always after seeing UR comment give me confidence about my chapter... Some how I have habit of seeing your comment after posting chapter... Best part with UR comment I can tell U love it or like it... or I have miss something... Thank u for supporting me in writing ... You are reading my story from beginning and always comment without any miss... Such a great support... Thank u so much... I remember One time I said... I have not received good response... and U said...don't worry UR chapter is fine it's just forum due to bad track ..forum has less activity... U always encourage me... thank u so much😃 BIG HUG...LOVE U SWEETY🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

ok here i start

the first part is the kc
wow i am so happy dear
u fulfilled my man ki murad
ma has been hit now
and that too by ruq
so she cannot tell any thing
this is really my dream come true
please make ma get more blows
and the next time
please give them from jalal
not physically but emotionally
i am not much interested in their conversation
but let them keep on fighting between themselves
so that they cannot harm akdha
well i hope that they cannot harm them really
it is high time ma is exposed too
how long can she hide
AS SOON AS U REQUEST FOR KC TRACK...TOUCHED MY HEART... LOVED THE CONCEPT... I WAS LITTLE BIT NERVOUSE BECAUSE I HAVE ADDED WITH SAD TRACK..😃
MA BLOW😆 I WILL SOON... SOON EMOTIONALLY MA ka bend bajne wala hai

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

jalal inner thoughts

i can really feel his inner turmoil
what is going through his heart now
poor man he is suffering so much
POOR JALLU is paying for what he has done... but best part Jodha has not curse him and unknowingly he came to know what she is going through😃
he had hurt his beloved so badly
he has insulted her in front of all
and now he has understood his mistake
he is regretting repenting
the guilt is killing him from inside
he is yearning for jodha
as she has gone far from him
emotionally and mentally
i feel so bad for both of them
well what can i say
he has done something grave
and he will pay for it
good that he arranged the kc
hope he does things for jodha
that helps bridge the gap between them
My Jallu love her to extreme... Mistake happens but best quality of him he remorse and repent for his mistake... He apologies in front of DWK... Hope Jodha will come back to him soon😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

jodha and reva

i am happy that reva told jodha about kc
that ruq has refused a leave for the hindu dasis
but jala went oput and accepted their request
and granted them leave for kc
i know that this melted jodhas heart to some extent
she was happy seeing the change in him
he never involved in harem affairs
but that he got himself involved
opposed ruq and negated her decision
and granted them to take a leave
to enjoy a hindu festival
this had touched jodha i am sure
YES U GOT THE POINT... That was his first step towards her heart..😳
poor jodha does not want him to know
that she is also keeping a fast for him
thank u for jodhas dialogue
she at least expressed her feelings to some one
she will feel lighter now i am sure
i can understand what she is feeling
hurt betrayed insulted broken
i loved revas suggestion to forgive him
This talk was necessary for her to take out her inner turmoil... She was burning herself for last six days with pretending smile on her face😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

the song

well this song was so perfect for the situation
it fitted them so well
both are in pain
i do not know whose pain is more
who is suffering more
as jodha is in immense pain
and jalal is in pain and guilt
well i so feel bad for him
Jalal Anger and Ego hurt both of them to extreme... U right... can't tell who is in more pain
his ego has done a lot damage
it will take a longtime to salvage it
and take the situation to as it was before
but till then he will suffer
well good that he heard the song
jodha never opened up to him after that
she kept herself to herself
so good that he came to know of her feelings
that he knew what she was going through
now he can know what damage he has done
and to what extent
U RIGHT ...He knew that she is going to pain...but had no idea upto what extent he has hurt her... this song made him realize...she is in immense pain😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

after the song

we now see jalal breaking down fully
he has lost himself in the grief
he asks allah to punish him
and to grant peace to jodha
he again goes to the lake
where he had come before also
then he was hurt by jodha
now he has hurt her badly
now he is thinking about all
doing introspection
now he is realizing all his mistakes
After the Song... I don't know why but Jalal's grief was too senti... I read it...my heart cried for my writing😆 I don't know how I wrote it... but may be some people might think it was too much...😆

poor jodha is also restless
she went to meet him
but he was not there
aww both are in so much pain
both want the other
but cannot reach the person
how bad this situation is
POOR JO ... I felt so bad... unknowingly she wanted comfort from him... her heart is longing for him and mind is still not ready to forgive him... KC was her dream ... and 1st kc and husband is not around...and even doesn't know anything about it...😭

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

jalal comes back

well he went towards her room
and saw her standing by his picture
and talking to him and expressing herself
good that he heard all that she said
then finally she saw him and he too looked at her
they finally met after a long time
hunger and fast finally took toll on him
and he got dizzy and blacked out
poor jodha is terrified
well he is ok and she knows the truth
AWWW... THIS IS MY FAV PART IN THIS CHAPTER
now jalal also expressed her feelings to her
and she is so touched and moved
well she giggled and that changed the situation
then the rituals are done and they have a lovely banter
well now they are both much better
they are enjoying their company
and they enjoy the togetherness with each other
they spend such a peaceful time
wow i am happy for this
YES INDEED... this is their precious moment and how can ruin that😲 of course I want them to remember this time forever😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

finally they are having the conversation

a much needed conversation
they needed to express themselves
jodha expresses her fear about his anger
and he promises to try to control his anger
aww how sweet
Yap... Jo needed clarification why...Jalal was angry and hurtful... Chalo atleast sab bat clear ho gayi...Poor Jo... usko keh keh ke thak chuki hai... hay re Ja ka gussa... but I guess this time he will remember to control it...
he asks her permission
to lay his head on her lap
she tries to kiss him but cannot
he has to win her heart and soul again
well i loved his reply
that her company and her smile
they are enough for him to live
how touching soothing moving words
now he wants a head message too
and now she asks the question
to which he does not want to reply
she asks for 2 things which is very painful for him
i felt so bad for them again
thankfully their sorrow will end soon
i loved the song he sang
JALLU IS GOOD AT PATA ING JODHA😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

i loved the dek scene so much

i knew that something big will happen
ma ruq plans failed i am so happy
they thought that she will not come
I WAS HAPPY TOO... JALKUKDI...JAL GAYI😆
but she came at his request
i loved what and how he did all
he confessed his mistakes
he accepted that he was wrong
he restored her honour back
he told all before all the people
this is the first step towards his redemption
YAP INDEED... ONLY GREAT CAN PEOPLE ACCEPT THEIR MISTAKE AND APOLOGIES IN FRONT OF THAT MANY PEOPLE... YES THIS IS FIRST STEP TOWARDS HIS GREATNESS
i loved his speech
i loved all the changes that he made
he understood his people
he understood their needs
he empathized with them
now we are seeing a change
rather may be it is the start of the change
IT IS JUST A BEGINNING OF HIS JOURNEY TOWARDS AKBAR THE GREAT😃
i so loved this part
i mean this part is so beautiful and lovely
jodha was amazed
JODHA KE DIL ME GHATI BAJI...LOL😆 YES KIS KA DIL NAHI PIGLEGA😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

please give sr in the next update

SR LOL😆
and please make her say that she has forgiven him
YAAR VO KESE KAHEGI... KI HUM AAPKE KARIB AANA CHAHTE HAI...😆

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