Originally posted by: ashpat
First of all, thank u sooo much for giving a fantastic, emotional, heartfelt update.
OMG!!! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL COMMENT...SPEECHLESS... DIL KUSH KAR DIYA😃
U WERE THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT IN DETAIL FOR THIS CHAPTER...AS USUAL I WAS NERVOUS... HOW IS IT...BUT U SERIOUSLY RELIVED MY STRESS...😃
u have no idea how thankful I am. I have been upset since I watched precap and a possible upcoming MU shown in new promo. so thank u so much u updating once again.😃
ACTUALLY I AM NOT DISAPPOINTED WITH PRECAP... I KNEW BEFORE THEY ACCEPT EACH OTHER... THERE WAS A NEED FOR DRAMA...AND EMOTIONS... OTHER WISE SR WILL SOUND TO SWEET... I WAS 100% SURE SOMETHING BIG WILL HAPPEN...BUT SOME HOW I LOOKING FORWARD THIS MU...SO BAAD ME MAJA AYEGA😆
There so many things that I loved in this update.
AWWW😳😳😳
First of all, jodha singing the song of dil ke armaan reflected her feeling spot on and jalal listening to it was very effective.
I didn't wanted Jodha directly curse him... I wanted him to indirectly that what she going through... This song had perfect wording...I am glad U like it...
Second,I was really happy and touched to c Jalal fasting for jodha even when it's so hard for him. I really liked when he thought of all the times in past when jalal hurt her especially when she had fasted and made her cook and called her names. u were great with showing jalal's feelings.This shows how introspective jalal is. because usually guys don't think about what wrong they have done. they r like raat gayi baat gayi as in it's gone what's the point of remember or they conveniently forget it or downplay it.
Jalal had done many things wrong... and worst than dwk drama... So I wanted him to do something divine for her... I wanted him remorse...and remember his all mistakes... U R right man are diff than us... they are like rat gayi baat gayi but they do remember big things... and certain things in everyone's life happened you have fear to even recall that event... Forcing on her and calling her that word both are fearful to recall...when he recall those thing made him crazy angry at himself
Third, it was nice to c that they were showing to be happy for each other in spite of what they were feeling in their heart.
Their love for each other is not only sexual attraction but their love is divine... even in hate, anger or any emotion doesn't impact on their caring for each other...
Fourth, jodha and reva's conversation clearly shows how hurt is jodha and she is in dilemma about her heart,mind, swabhimaan and prem. u have done a superb job describing her feelings.
I am glad...U like their conversation... actually their conversation opened her wounds but it was needed to talk it out...
Fifth, Jodha talking out loud and jalal hearing when she is breaking fast. I really liked that part. I have added my comments in red. The entire fast breaking scene was beautiful and emotional.
Jalal had pound on her swabhiman... so atleast tasvir pe gussa nikalana Jo ka hakk banta hai😆
I also liked how jodha has still not given her consent for physical intimacy until her heart is not won again by him and her wounds are not healed by him. But, it was nice to see naughty jalal and jodha back.
Jo already forgive him from her heart but still her wounds are not healed completely... soon she will realize...😃 their nok jok is most interesting in their relation and fun for us
Sixth, I am so glad that jodha asked him why he was mad at her and he promised to try to control his anger Jodha's reply was very apt saying she never tried to insult him. I also liked that jodha said she won't come in DEK which also shows that it did hurt her self-respect but jalal requested her to come.
Poor Jo somany time she has told him that his anger will ruin every thing...but Jallu sudharne ka naam hi nahi leta... He insulted her very badly in DWK... uske swabhiman ka swal hai
Seventh, Jalal waiting for jodha and when she comes, he hurriedly goes to receiver her. awww, it shows how happy and relieved he was. Finally, the entire DEK scene was just wow. in front of entire world/court, Jalal, the shahenshah and husband admitted about his mistake, arrogance, ego, partialtiy, unfairness and asked for forgiveness from Jodha. that takes lot of guts. I like he folded his hands but i doubt shahensha would do it. As a man and shahenshah, he admitted and rectified his mistake and announced that all hindus and mughals r equal.
Jalal was eagerly waiting for her... and when she came he forgot that he was in DWK... actually while asking for forgiveness and folding his hand...he forgot that he is shenshah and in dwk... he was a husband and lover...not Shenshah... This Jalal is kind of extreme in everything love hate anger remorse... Only great people can admit their mistake in that many people...
wow👏👏👏
I am so thankful for UR COMMENT... Always bring smile on face ... this time I am feeling proud😃
I have also added my comments in red below.
P.S. U know when I was about to log off and I saw ur pm. i was like yaaayyy. I was happy to receive ur pm but when i started reading ur ff, I was still not in mood bec of precap of a show about jodha-sujamal and MA and I don't know when I got lost into ur story that I had completely forgot about it and did not remember until I read precap word at the end in ur story. my super long comment shows how lost i was in ur story and how much it cheered me up. So, thanks a lot once again.
btw, a superb, fantastic, amazing update. 🤗
I am so touched😭😭😃😃😃😛😛😛
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