**AkDha SS** Jaane Dil Mein Kabse Hai Tu! Chapter-2 Pg-3 22nd Jan 14

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Evil Nancy !!! 😆

I am Mahaa- Evil at times..😈 😈 😈 😆 Btw, come on CC..I am waiting!😛

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Mishika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg ! dear its such a nice story ! 👏
Very nice start !! 👍🏼
Good going !! ⭐️⭐️
Why no precap ?? 😭😭
Its a very amazing Ts !!
Plz update it as soon as possible !

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Arshaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

LoL on precap part by nancy!
Nxt update ka wait karo apne ap pata chal jayega!

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

good start... waiting for next updates

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srividhya68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

so nice & interesting upt
cont soon

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Soumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Lovely start Arshaya!! Would love to read more..update soon!😳

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Arshaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Recap:
Salima turned around only to find Jalal standing there. Jalal told Salima a thing which made Salima's happiness cross all bounds. Salima had a big smile on her face like this ==> 😃 !
Jalal: Aap hume batayengi naa?
Salima: Zaroor Shehenshah.
Jalal-Salima discussed some things and then Salima left.
Jalal (MV): Ab toh bas aaj raat ki der hai.

Chapter-2
At Night:
In Jodha's Chamber:
A baandhi enters the room.
Baandhi: Adaab Begum Sahiba. Shehenshah ne apko apne hojre mein bulaya hai.
Jodha: Theek hai.
Baandhi leaves.
Jodha: Itni ratri ko Shehenshah ne hume kyun bulaya? Ab yeh toh vaha jake pata chalega.

In Jalal's Chamber:
The whole chamber was decorated with roses, jasmines and candles. Jalal had put up all Jodha's favourite flowers' petal in a big thaal and kept it on top of the door in a manner so that when she enters all those petals fall on her. Jalal was really thankful to Salima as she had told Jalal all Jodha's favourite things. Salima had noticed how Jodha's face sparkled seeing roses and jasmines. How Jodha would want to go to the garden when it would rain. But Moti being Jodha's childhood friend would stop her for 2reasons. First Jodha would catch cold in no time and second she was now Jalal's begum and if she goes out someone or the other would taunt her for being childish. Jalal had got to know all these from Salima after REQUESTING her to help him win Jodha's heart. REQUEST? Yup u read it right. Shehenshah Jalaluddin requested to know about Jodha's likes and dislikes! He was head over heels in love with Jodha! He was thinking all these when the door's opening sound made him come out of his thoughts.

Jodha slowly entered his room and was showered with rose, jasmine and tulips' petals. She was amazed with this action of his. She knew there was something going on his mind. Jalal was watching her from behind the door. He slowly came out and started singing softly!

Jalal: Jaane dil mein kabse hai tu!
Jabse mein hoon tabse hai tu!
Mujhko mere rab ki kasam!
Yaara rab se pehle hai tu!

Jodha was utterly shocked! She turned around and saw him smiling at her. She was actually blushing and was already cherry red. Jalal looked at her and took 4quick steps towards her but went past her. He gave a rose and jasmine bouquet. Jodha took it and kept it on the bed still looking at his eyes. He held her hand in his lovingly.

Jalal: Jodha Begum aaj hum apse apni dil ki baat kehna chahte hai. Jodha Begum hum...hum apse beinteha mohabbat karte hai!! Hume pata bhi nahi chala ke jis dil ko humne kabhi mehsoos hi nahi kia, voh kab apke liye dhadakne laga. Ke iss dil mein(pointing towards his heart) kab aap rehne lagi. Hume mualum hai ki aap humse bohot nafrat karti hai. Magar hum apse apni dil ki baat bataye bagair rehnahi paye. Hume pata hai humne apko bohot dukh pohchaya hai aur hum unke liye bohot sharminda bhi hai. Hum apse tahe dil se muaffi mangte hai. Hosake toh hume muaf kardijiyega.

Jodha was in tears. She was happy and sad at the same time. Happy for Jalal loved her and sad for Jalal was sad. Jalal went past Jodha and was about to move towards the door when Jodha held his hand and spoke.
Jodha(in a low tone): Aur agar hum kahe ki hum apse ghrina nahi balki prem karte hai toh?
Jalal turned around and saw her back facing him.
Jalal: Aap sach kehrahi hai?
Jodha just nodded letting the tears fall which she was blinking away all this time. Jalal pulled Jodha towards him making her twirl and crash on his broad chest. He hugged her tightly to which she responded.
Jodha(while hugging Jalal): Par hum apko apna hriday nahi desakte!
Jalal: Kyun nahi dengi aap?
Jodha: Humne kaha na NAHI DENGE!
Jalal: Dena padega. Humne vaise bhi apna dil apko de dia toh apko bhi dena padega.
Jodha: NAHI DENGE! NAHI DENGE APKO! (Nancy dear ab chap1 ka precap samjhi?)
Jalal: Magar kyun?
Jodha: Kyunki voh humare paas nahi hai.
Jalal: Toh kaha hai?
Jodha: Sharifuddin ke paas.
Jalal(shocked): KYA???
Jodha: Mazak kar rahe the. Hum apko apna hriday ABHI nahi de sakte kyunki voh humne apko pehle se hi de rakkha hai. Ab agar dena hai toh vapas apse hi lena padega.
Jalal(smiling): Toh fir hum apko apka dil kabhi nahi denge.
Jodha: Hume chaiye bhi nahi. Aur haan. HUM APSE BOHOT ZYADA PREM KARTE HAI!!
AkDha hugged each other more tightly.
TBC

Precap: AkDha SR

Yeh tha chapter2. Nxt chapter=AKDHA SR!! And i was thinking of changing this ts into ss. Tell me if i should do it or not. ENJOY MY DEARS!

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Reserved !!!🤗 Unres..

Wow!!😳 So soothing and lovely.. God! Arshaya you write so exceptionally well..😳😃

Loved the flowers falling on JO..😳 And The confession and talk was amazing😳

Lol now I get what the precap was 😆

Beautiful Chap !! Simply loved it !!!👏😳

PS - Please edit your post title to AkDha TS Part 2 on so and so Page no..😉

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago

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diksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

very good start. PM me next time

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Aww...
The proposal was so pure and cute...
I loved it a lot...
Jalal's way of knowing Jodha's likes and dislikes was really nice and the way he implemented it,was the best way he could propose.
Loved it a lot.
Continue sooonish... :)

p.s: do edit the title,it will become easier for ur readers,