**AkDha SS** Jaane Dil Mein Kabse Hai Tu! Chapter-2 Pg-3 22nd Jan 14

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Here is Chapter1 of the ts.


Chapter-1
The birds were chirping merrily all around the royal palace as if today was something special. A lady had just finished her prayers when a soldier appeared and said her that the king wants to meet her.
Soldier: Gustakhi muaff Begum Sahiba. Shehenshah ne apko unke hojre mein bulaya hai.
Lady: Theek hai. Aap jaiye aur kahiye ke hum aarahe hai.
Soldier: Ji. Adaab.
Lady (MV): Unhone hume kyun bulaya? Hume toh laga tha ke voh... Khair rehne do. Hum unse milne jate hai.


In Jalal's Chamber:
Jalal was pacing up and down his room nervously.
Jalal: Ya Allah! Yeh kesi musibaat hai? Ab hume yeh karne se pehle itna dar lagraha hai toh jab unke samne honge tab toh behosh hi ho jayenge! Hume toh laga tha ek shehenshah keliye sab kuch asan hota hai! Yeh thodi hi pata tha ke yeh ek cheez sabse mushkil hai?! Aaarrgghh!
Just then a lady appears.
Lady: Apne hume bulvaya?
Jalal: Haan. Voh hume apki madad chaiye.
Lady: Agar apko Jodha Begum wale muamle mein koi madad chaiye toh hum apki madad bilkul nahi karenge.
Jalal: Arey! Yeh kesi baat hui bhala? Tumhe humari madad karni padegi.
Lady: Hum koi madad nahi karenge.
Jalal: RUQAIYA!
Ruqaiya: JALAL!
Jalal: Chota sa madad!
Ruqaiya: Nahi!
Jalal: Par...(Ruqs cuts him off)
Ruqaiya: Jalal hum apki madad nahi karenge. Yeh apko khud karna hoga. Hum bohut khush hai apko leke par iss baar aap hi unko sab batayenge aur voh bhi pyaar se.
Jalal: Theek hai. Hum hi karlenge.
Ruqaiya: Ab hum chalte hai. Adaab.
Jalal: Adaab.
Ruqs left.


In the afternoon:
In Jalal's Chamber:
She slowly stepped inside the empty chamber. Jalal had called her for somework in which he needed some help. Suddenly a voice came from her back.
Voice: SALIMA BEGUM!{LOL! Mujhe pata hai ke ts ke start pe bhi apne Jodha ko expect kia tha aur yaha bhi kar rahe the. Better luck nxt tym}
Salima turned around only to find Jalal standing there. Jalal told Salima a thing which made Salima's happiness cross all bounds. Salima had a big smile on her face like this ==> 😃 !
Jalal: Aap hume batayengi naa?
Salima: Zaroor Shehenshah.
Jalal-Salima discussed some things and then Salima left.
Jalal (MV): Ab toh bas aaj raat ki der hai.
TBC


Precap: NAHI DENGE! NAHI DENGE APKO...!

Hey all this ts for my besties- Nanu(Nancy) and Pallu(Pallavvi). They've been my inspiration. I started writing only after reading their stories. They've been more like sisters to me then friends.
Luv u dears!

P.S:- plz no juta chappals. Tomatoes are more then welcum. Salad banane ke kaam ayenge. Thode mangoes bhi de dena. I love mangoes. Saath mein ek lyk and do char comments. I'll finish it in two three chapters since its ts. Zyada bore nahi karungi.
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Index

Chapter-1 ~ Page-1
Chapter-2 ~ Page-3
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Amazing start plz update soon
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Nice start dear !!! 👏
So when I read 'a lady' the 1st thing that came to my mind was Jodha ...
Then later when she said "if it's related to Jodha..." I was like ok that lady might be Moti but then you fooled me by making that lady be Ruku ...
2nd one also I thought it's Jodha but it turned out to be Salima ...
Wasn't expecting that btw ... So good job for the suspence ...
One part I really liked is when Jalal was like feeling so scared even before meeting Jodha and he'll faint when she in front of him really made me 🤣
Really enjoyed it and you did a good job in making a fool out of us ...
Keep up the good work darling ... 😉
Edited by VincyAnne - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne

<font size="2" color="#3300ff">Nice start dear !!! 👏</font>

<font size="2" color="#3300ff">So when I read 'a lady' the 1st thing that came to my mind was Jodha ... </font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">Then later when she said "if it's related to Jodha..." I was like ok that lady might be Moti but then you fooled me by making that lady be Ruku ... </font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">2nd one also I thought it's Jodha but it turned out to be Salima ... </font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">Wasn't expecting that btw ... So good job for the suspence ... </font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">One part I really liked is when Jalal was like feeling so scared even before meeting Jodha and he'll faint when she in front of him really made me 🤣</font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">Really enjoyed it and you did a good job in making a fool out of us ...</font>
<font size="2" color="#3300ff">Keep up the good work darling ... 😉</font>

thnx di.
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Oh My !😲 Mujhe dedicate kiya !😲 Oh god ! Thank You SO much yaar Arshaya 🤗 Do I need to say that it was amazing!😳 It was awesome..Lol I really thought it was Jodha first time😆 But no It was Ruqs!😉 Second time, I was again fooled as she was Salima!😉😆 Ok Shahenshah Jalal is in love with Jodha..hmm..and he is nervous!!😳 Wow! Eagerly waiting for next update ! And thank you so much for dedicating it to me and Pallu..Its such an honour.. you are my darling sister 🤗

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Precap: NAHI DENGE! NAHI DENGE APKO...!
Kyaa...😲 Nahi..hum ye nainsafi nahi bardarsht karenge..Hum mar jayenge lekin precap lekar hi chain ki saans lenge... 😈 🤣 kiddin sista! update soon!😳
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Precap: NAHI DENGE! NAHI DENGE APKO...!
Kyaa...😲 Nahi..hum ye nainsafi nahi bardarsht karenge..Hum mar jayenge lekin precap lekar hi chain ki saans lenge... 😈 🤣 kiddin sista! update soon!😳


😆
If I'm not mistaken sometimes you also don't giv precap ...
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Originally posted by: VincyAnne


😆
If I'm not mistaken sometimes you also don't giv precap ...

Lol ya.. I love to tadpaofy u ppl 😈 😈 😆
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Lol ya.. I love to tadpaofy u ppl 😈 😈 😆


Evil Nancy !!! 😆

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