AkDha OS ~ A Lovely Evening Part 2- SR - Pg12 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg day by day u make me amaze by ur amazing way of writing thaxxx alot keep rocking with ur wonderful writing love ur work always god bless u

JA❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow!!! this is hot and sexy. I just loved how jalal is so careful and sensitive towards her fears. I loved it. thx nancy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res🤣
mujhe hosh me aane de.. kal unres karungi... and i know tu yaad dilayegi unreskarne ko🤣
P.S: Awesome tha update..isssh☺️😆SR wowww😳
Task🤣wow subah tak bass task hi chalu rakhe accha hoga🤣
Edited by roshaeldsouza91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
MINBLOWING...supeeerb yaar really nyc 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
it was very hawt n sexy...☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
res 😳😳😳 superb!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Firstly thankxx foh d Honour 😎👏👏 & thank Uuu Sooo mUchchch jaan foh my Hot & Sensuous G!ft.🥳 🥳 this is d 2nd best gift I've eva received. 😃😃My first Gift is U my Precious Princess-Namsss 🤗 🤗

Goshhh !!!! what a Hot & Sexxxyyy update ⭐️Star 👏👏👏👏Iiisshhshshshshsh😳 😉😉

I was blushing v hard while reading . ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I loved each & every bits. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️The d way jalal lifts jodha in his arms with utmost passion & hugged her . the way he made her comfortable @ first when he hugged her how she got an electric shock. Jalal'z feelings d way he clutched her & whisperd "PAAK MOHABBAT" ☺️ ☺️😛 & how much she waited foh dis moment to arrive in her life. 😊

There mixed feelings , jodha sat near fire silhouette n blushing. En how jalal came near her n asked do u trust me & d way she said more dan herself & how he assured her make her comfortable. 😃😳

And it was all Silence in der room ☺️ with diyaz were flickering in der love & d BG song started HAaaYyyeee d song was

http://picasion.com/gl/2B4p/

And they started kissing each other, he kissed on every part of her as he wanted to taste every bit of her. ☺️ ☺️

He left a trial ov kisses on her so dat she cUd nt control & dug his nails on his back..😉😉(Aaawwh kuch zyada hi chubhgaye hOngey nails usko)😆😆

Now I can't say how much I blushed while reading it gaves me goosebumps ☺️ ☺️ & tearz 😭. How did u do dis my princess... m speechless. Every tym uh surprise+shockz me with ur updates & made me speechless. ⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏 I was mesmerized with each word. U r way beyond my imagination. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

And 1 more thing which I quite loved it ❤️. when dey were making love all the diyaz blowed off by Allah'z wish..😊😊 I loved it instead of God u used d word "Allah" was brilliant foh ME. 👍🏼 👍🏼 So special tq foh dis !! & they continued der love session.

Finally task completed & salim made hiz way 2 arrive. 🥳😉 I wish dis task I can gt in nxt part too. 😛😛😉😃

U've done a complEte JUSTICE with d title 👏👏👏👏👏. what an HOT & ULTIMATE SR.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ haayye m fainted . 🤢🤢🤢😳😳🤢🤢

P.S - i wish yeh SR hamey show mein dkhne ko b milta bolkar b mai ni kehsakti.. 🤣 🤣 coz show ki SR ka to Ekta ow uski team hi jaawne !! 😳😳

And & & & lastly THANK U sooo much foh d SONG. 🤗 🤗 The song which I suggest u ve put in ur update. M glad & v HAppPyyY but d FULL credit goes to U jaan to think dis song vl suit foh dis update.. 🤗👍🏼

Thankz a tonnn foh my lovely gift 🥳 after a looonnnggg waittt... 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Lotz ov love. ❤️ ❤️

Alina


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Posted: 11 years ago
nxt update plz 😛😛
Edited by lovergirlalina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drveena



nancy...🤗..
... first of all thanks for the PM...😊...what shall i say? words nahi hai mere paas.. how wonderfully you have expressed their emotions without making it seem vulgar... 👏.. you know dear.😊. as i said earlier as well.. it's not easy to write about SR...this requires immense talent... your are very creative and talented...i liked it when you said that about " the fire blushing..."...too good...👍🏼... keep writing...👏
waisae, jee lay zara forum pae bhi aakar likho naa..😊.. i am sure everybody there will appreciate you too ... 👏

Aunty 🤗 Thank You sooo much...!!! I am so so so happy and glad with your beautiful comment.. I mean seriously I am so happy !!!!😃😃 You liked it and that's means so much to me.. 🤗 Your words directly touched my heart aunty.. 😳😃 Aww.. You know I would have loved to write there but unfortunately I don't watch the show..I am so much lost in Jodha Akbar..that I don think about any other show.. But don worry.. I'll try to read some updates of that show to get the story..and will some day write an OS for you!!!😛😛 Thanks again./.Love ya 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: baubles

O...M...G...!!!☺️


Do you have any idea what you've done to me...I was grinning and blushing the whole while!!!😳😳😳

Trust me Nams...this is one of the BEST SR's I ever read, perfect!!

Loved every emotion, every feeling, the passion, over flowing love...every line and just everything about this part...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thankyou sooo much for this brilliant part and for making me imagine every bit of it and making me even more crazy for AkDha than I already am!!😆
Love you da Nams kanna 🤗🤗

Sou,.. 🤗 I LOVE YOU MY JAAN.. I know HOW MUCH YOU LOVED IT.. Thank you so much dearo.. I am so lucky to have you as my full day n night partner.. 🤗 Love you da kanna.. Embarrassed 🤗 I am so o0oo0o happy you loved it..😃

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