Jodha Akbar 147: Discordant expectations - Page 5

agaopana!!!!!
M dying with laughter!!!!
I dinno tiz a hindi word.
Always thought it to b Marathi one!

Btw ya u r right!
Evn I was baffled by "mention to Jalal!" As if he was Wedding Reception Hall manager!!!

N hunar ki malika aur gunon
ki khaan!!!
Lord!
Tiz not Jodha Akbar show. Tiz Sirf Jodha show!
Jalal jayena tel lagane!
Bt Jo ko bhi kitna stupid dikhate hai.

May b she z patient of Alzeimer. So forgets what she said.
N so comes back to ghrina thing, despite claiming to have abadoned it in old suitecase of Amer!
Or it can b that she suffers from maladaptive daydreaming!
So she thinks that she actually apologised to him bt hasn't actually!

Edit:
M sure Mirza plans maaany marriages! So no moghul can have problem wid any one wife of his, in particular!
N he too z clever chap! Ruqs n Samr his sisters too! So only Jo was left. Who he z sharp to point at her face k "apke shayari ka rang bhaijaan pe chadha nahi abtak!" Bt still knows well Jalal z attracted to her n listens her any crazy demand! So she z prime important for Jalal n this marriage will tilt her in his favour, he knows well!

Aunty, I replied to your comment (the OS one). 😳

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My sweet, the old Jalal is gone for good. This is what an infatuation does even to a strong man or a learned man (remember the professor in The Blue Angel, besotted with the cabaret dancer played by Marlene Dietrich, though he at least had some excuse seeing whom he flipped for!😉). The roar and the shove at the jashn was like a child crying out to its mother I hate you, I hate you! The minute he spots Jodha, the craving for her to be nice to him kicks in. There is no salvation for him at all.

I have seen it, Komal. I agree with what you have said there.

Truth to tell, I loved your first OS about the shack in the rain; it was like a light, airy souffle. I liked this one, but heavy emotions are not my cup of tea. I always prefer Jane Austen to Anna Karenina. But you do write well, really well, and I do not say this of many here.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: TheIronLady

Aunty, I replied to your comment (the OS one). 😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99263488

My dear, your array of medical/psychiatric terms is imposing! And I am glad you had so much fun with this post.

No, Ruqaiya and Salima are Mirza's (and Jalal's) first cousins, not his sisters. Ruqaiya on the paternal side and Salima on the maternal side, in the way both of them traced their ancestry back to Babur.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Originally posted by: RagSia

agaopana!!!!!
M dying with laughter!!!!
I dinno tiz a hindi word.
Always thought it to b Marathi one!

Btw ya u r right!
Evn I was baffled by "mention to Jalal!" As if he was Wedding Reception Hall manager!!!

N hunar ki malika aur gunon
ki khaan!!!
Lord!
Tiz not Jodha Akbar show. Tiz Sirf Jodha show!
Jalal jayena tel lagane!
Bt Jo ko bhi kitna stupid dikhate hai.

May b she z patient of Alzeimer. So forgets what she said.
N so comes back to ghrina thing, despite claiming to have abadoned it in old suitecase of Amer!
Or it can b that she suffers from maladaptive daydreaming!
So she thinks that she actually apologised to him bt hasn't actually!

Edit:
M sure Mirza plans maaany marriages! So no moghul can have problem wid any one wife of his, in particular!
N he too z clever chap! Ruqs n Samr his sisters too! So only Jo was left. Who he z sharp to point at her face k "apke shayari ka rang bhaijaan pe chadha nahi abtak!" Bt still knows well Jalal z attracted to her n listens her any crazy demand! So she z prime important for Jalal n this marriage will tilt her in his favour, he knows well!

Originally posted by: sashashyam

I have seen it, Komal. I agree with what you have said there.

Truth to tell, I loved your first OS about the shack in the rain; it was like a light, airy souffle. I liked this one, but heavy emotions are not my cup of tea. I always prefer Jane Austen to Anna Karenina. But you do write well, really well, and I do not say this of many here.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: RagSia

Btw ya u r right!
Evn I was baffled by "mention to Jalal!" As if he was Wedding Reception Hall manager!!!

Yup...Yup I'm one of the guilty 'gushing' parties here...and guilty of describing Tej as a handsome dude too...😆 I can totally sense the disappointment in your post...

The forum was in seventh heaven this week after the Jodha-Jalal scenes and it was enough to appease them for the time being. But again, these were hackneyed scenes and I found little to no pleasure in them. I won't go into the illogical aspects of the behaviors of our favorite pair since I no longer have the patience for that. It seems that lowering expectations is the only way to continue to enjoy these episodes.

Komal dear, I am really getting on in age, it seems! No, the shack in the rain OS, which was very charming and light, was not yours of course. Yours, which I liked enormously and told you so, was the one called The Epiphany. I still have it somewhere on my hard drive.

The thing is, my dear, I am asked to comment on a lot of writing, both here and even in my old forums, 2 of them, where I used to write for much shorter periods of time, just 5 weeks in one case.But somehow I acquire young friends there who still want my views on their FFs, SSes and OSes. As of now I have at least 4 chapters in different FFs pending for my comments, and that is not in this forum. I do try and respond as much as I can, for I am very fond of the writers, but can you wonder at my getting occasionally mixed up between two of them? Especially with curious IDs that are changed periodically?

Never mind, it is enough that I liked both of yours that I read. And what I wrote below applies perfectly to The Epiphany and this one. If only the CVs had taken your script, there would never have been The Shove, and we would be in far better shape now. But of course that would be too much to expect.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: TheIronLady

@bold, Aunty, what are you talking about? I never wrote anything about a hut in the rain?...The only other OS of mine, you commented on was about the letter one. 😕