~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , *UPDATED PT 12* : pg 32

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Asapom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

awesome update

ma 's face revealed😃

continue soon

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SIVARANJANI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Wow it was wonderful to read the updates
happy that mm truth is revealed

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Gayuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

nice update dear thanks for the pm

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

part 10
nice...
Jalal is furious...
but Maham has no idea...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

part 11
nice...
very small part...
Jodha's presence changed Jalal's mood...
cont soon dear...

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Spacexplorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

wow awesome update👏

i read ur whole story in one go😊

i am really happy dat mas true face is revealed 2 jalal😃 nd i am desperately waiting 4 d tonue-lashing and her punishment😈

atleast aapke os mein to ma ka revelation hua😊 pata nahi show mein kab hoga🤓 ya hoga bhi ya nhi

plzzz update soon😳 and would u pm me plzzz😳

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sarthshru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

yayayyayay !!!

eagerly waitng !!!

jalal apply color !!!

yayayay !

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Very nice update update soon & do PM

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Hi sweety ... i so much loved ur story ❤️... kindly continue asap ... 😃 & can u PM me as well ... i would love to read ur story 😳

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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Tenzin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

*-* TEASER FOR PART 12 *-*

He imposently scotched her against the wall , blocking the passage from both sides as two barriers into which she is imprisoned but his posessive and forceful transacts haven't any effect on her , she is there only by her presence but her eyes are blank , those doe like shapeful hazel eyes which used to be a great hand for Jalal in sensing and guessing her sentiments once are themself lost and dreary now but Jalal isn't easily going to give up ! He takes off one of his hand without quitting her from eyes and takes a mound of red colour into his manly fist , he insisted much in taking lot that , some of those lently begin to escape from the little holes of his fingers but does he care about it ? He does as fast as he can as if it was question of life and death for him , there he reaches infront of her face , that craving and desirable face which isn't glowing nor smiling today , noticing it he feels a sudden pinch on heart enough to make him realize that she isn't in mood at all , she is unhappy and nor his taunts , nor his posessive and anormal antics would be able to change it , but recalling the event of this special day , he forces himself to gulp down those sentimental lake of emotions and he forwards close to her face , too close that this lady is taking pleasure in belittling Jalaluddin Mohammad's heart , he is there inches part of fingers away from her face , too close but surprisingly , still her eyes aren't fixing toward him , nor there is any gests of embarrassment from her ! He wants her to react ASAP , he no more can bear it , her morn and unhappy face , her silence , her inexpressive eyes are bitterly killing him ! He forwards his impetuous iron fist front her face making finly crumble those colour between them , Jodhaa's senses are brought back by this sudden change of decor and scenery infront of her face , first she was taken aback but she didn't say anything , she just lowered her eyes , breathing heavily thinking that he is still happy and is in amused mood to insult her infront of everyone and spoilt her only celebration day left ! He obviously notices it and hurries to rub those colours on both of his hands and posessively applies colour on her face , hungrily catching hold of whole her face , her forhead , cheeks , chin , Jodhaa inflammed unknowingly the intensity by pouring some tears of unconsciousness , that of how it would be lovable and gentle if it wasn't a fake and

disregarded one . . .

P.S : Please be patient with this long teaser lovely readers 🤗🤗

Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago