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charu

@cjs369

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

awesome update...

wow ! both spent the final moments drawing upto the new year together ...the song n dance leading to the near kiss was so romantic😳...
hope we get to read more such romantic moments...
waiting eagerly for the next update

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: justlovetv
Awesome update! They were just going to kiss! Arghh😔!

Awww thanks so much 😳 don't be disappointed... one day, it'll happen! 🤗

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Serves her right for choosing to sing that song with all that tension between them. For once this confident and sure girl has no clue!😆 Just as long as she doesn't think the worst of him. With a person who is friendly like Jalal, once you get to know him, it will be hard for her to be sure. Specially, since she is alien to such proximity. Can't wait for what's next. I so badly need to know how you are planning to take this story.

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Sandhya.A

@Sandhya.A

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Lashy

Read the Part 1 of your story. (almost 22-25 days after you sent me the co-ordinates.😕) Actually I was busy cursing the makers of the tv jodha-akbar those weeks and praising them the last week that I didn't start with your story.😆

Lashy, I repeat you do have a flair for writing. Do consider some serious professional writing (if you already aren't one). Your flow can convey the exact feelings that you wish to convey. This and your OS - I have something IMPORTANT to tell you Jodha Begum are proof enough that you can create romance easily in your writing...no need for high sounding words or great imaginative locales...or even explicitly romantic dialogues. Yet the essence is easily felt. This particular one gave me a Chetan Bhagat feel though the plot is less complex.

Jodha Singh and Jalal are interesting, Jalal more because I am already partial to the on-screen one. 😉 A very different attempt, keeping the characters and feelings on a parallel plane in a totally different setting.👍🏼

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SUMESHNI

@SUMESHNI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Awesome amazing update

Plz plz plz continue soon

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Bobby13

@Bobby13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Very nice one Shraddha. Loved the part 18 thoroughly. You have a great talent for writing novels as I told before.

Jodha was very sweet. Even I was little confused similar to jodha with Jalal not getting preoccupied with what happened in the store room. Luckily you did not let the kiss happen, otherwise I would have thought it was too early. I know I am the minority here 😊.

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

Ok..this part is way beyond what I had expected!!! You just surprise me every single time and the surprises only get better! I'm gonna sound like a kharab tape recorder but...once again, this chapter surpassed all the previous ones and so is my super favourite(till the next one...though all the chapters are favourites)!!!😳😆🤗

Well, I already discussed this part in length with you...so I'll keep this short😆

Great to see that Jo knows Jalal as a person now..to an extent. I couldn't have imagined her thinking of him as a gentleman till a few parts earlier! And that's called progress!😛

Her attempts to cheer him up were so so sweet and it worked! And he knows how to get her to do what he wants...mwaaahh to you for the song-dance part..it was out of this world! And what a choice of song..waah!! Perfect song, perfect scene and intense emotions...these two are fire! ☺️☺️☺️

Jo having her doubts about him at the end..well, not her fault at all

Why do I feel that Jalal hasn't come out of that moment either, but is just not showing it..?😆 His doggy distracting him😆

Anyway..loving this Jalal and Jo like anything, you know how much!! And here goes hot and sexy Jalalaaya namaha😆 I loveee him😳😳

Absolutely loving the way this story is going..and you're a spectacular writer...so brilliant story+brilliant writer combo= Dil nahi bharta❤️❤️❤️❤️

So update very very very soon diii...1-1 din kaatna mushkil hai without this!😒😳

Love ya sooo much akka!!!🤗🤗

P.S. Didn't turn out very short did it? Too much badbad by me😆 But ye mera pyaar hai, you know!😳😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
shraddha i wish they had kissed,i know it would be too too soon,hope jalal can understand jodha's doubts and tension..there should seriosly be no misunderstanding.

Yeah...itd' be too soon...they (well at least she) got caught up in the moment...

Aanchal I can clearly see you saying no MU to me every time 😆...awww...i totally understand dear...but then at some point...you know what I mean...😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#979

Originally posted by: ashpat
I like the last chapter a lot. So sweet of jodha to give bigger part og chocolte to jalal. So caring of jalal to go get car first and telll her tonwait for 3 honks. The dance part was sensuous. Cant wait for next update. Thx for pm.

Thank so much Ayesha...😳

Originally posted by: --Aashi--
Thank you !! And welcome !! 🤗

🤗🤗 Same here...THANK YOUUU

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AbHer_neha

@AbHer_neha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#980

For ur last update I said its the best till date...now I would like to say the same thing for this part also..👍🏼..aur pata nahi aage aur aisa kitni baar bolna padega...😆..superb job Shraddha.👏👏

Plz update soon.😳