~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Thread 1~Parts 1 - 18 - Page 99

Lashy, ch 18 took my breath away. it was delightfully sensuous 😉👏

Originally posted by: cjs369

awesome update...

wow ! both spent the final moments drawing upto the new year together ...the song n dance leading to the near kiss was so romantic😳...
hope we get to read more such romantic moments...
waiting eagerly for the next update

Originally posted by: rajani_sid

lovely update...

Originally posted by: juggaad

Serves her right for choosing to sing that song with all that tension between them. For once this confident and sure girl has no clue!😆 Just as long as she doesn't think the worst of him.

Awww poor thing...pehle tho unwittingly, she's ended up going out of her comfort zone...Uske oopar this fella acting like he's not really bothered...so, my empathies with her in this one...😳

But not that I'm gonna stop fan gurling over Jalal any time soon 😆

With a person who is friendly like Jalal, once you get to know him, it will be hard for her to be sure. Specially, since she is alien to such proximity.

I couldn't understand this bit dear...once she gets to know him, it's hard for her to be sure of what? 😕

Can't wait for what's next. I so badly need to know how you are planning to take this story

Awww...Sneha, don't keep your hopes too high and all... it's only common college story yaar...boy meets girl falls in love and then the usual stuff 😆...

just reading it with the characters we relate to from the serials puts a bit of a spin on the story...😳

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shradda🤗

gal that was one hell of an awesome story!!

read all parts in one go.. loves it..

plz pm me wen u update..

nd continue soon cant wait!!

Originally posted by: Bobby13

Very nice one Shraddha. Loved the part 18 thoroughly. You have a great talent for writing novels as I told before.

Awww😳

Jodha was very sweet. Even I was little confused similar to jodha with Jalal not getting preoccupied with what happened in the store room.

Hmmm...explanations to follow 😆

Luckily you did not let the kiss happen, otherwise I would have thought it was too early. I know I am the minority here 😊.

No yaar, you're not in the minority...and yes, it'd have been too soon! 😳

Originally posted by: baubles

Ok..this part is way beyond what I had expected!!! You just surprise me every single time and the surprises only get better! I'm gonna sound like a kharab tape recorder but...once again, this chapter surpassed all the previous ones and so is my super favourite(till the next one...though all the chapters are favourites)!!!😳😆🤗

ROFL...yes I got the jist...😆

Well, I already discussed this part in length with you...so I'll keep this short😆

I LOVE the length of your 'short' replies! 😳

Great to see that Jo knows Jalal as a person now..to an extent. I couldn't have imagined her thinking of him as a gentleman till a few parts earlier! And that's called progress!😛

Awww😳 Yup she trusts him now...

Her attempts to cheer him up were so so sweet and it worked! And he knows how to get her to do what he wants...mwaaahh to you for the song-dance part..it was out of this world! And what a choice of song..waah!! Perfect song, perfect scene and intense emotions...these two are fire! ☺️☺️☺️

LOOOL Jalal was on fire...and the aaj spread a bit to her too...IYKWIM...after all, he is a bit irresistible😛

Jo having her doubts about him at the end..well, not her fault at all

Why do I feel that Jalal hasn't come out of that moment either, but is just not showing it..?😆 His doggy distracting him😆

ROFLLL...Let's just say I think you still haven't understood what he's really up to...😆 Wink wink...

Anyway..loving this Jalal and Jo like anything, you know how much!! And here goes hot and sexy Jalalaaya namaha😆 I loveee him😳😳

Absolutely loving the way this story is going..and you're a spectacular writer...so brilliant story+brilliant writer combo= Dil nahi bharta❤️❤️❤️❤️

THANK YOUUU😛 My sweetest support line! Tumhaaraa every day without the update plz mantra bhi mere liye utnaa hi mushkil hai😆

So update very very very soon diii...1-1 din kaatna mushkil hai without this!😒😳

Love ya sooo much akka!!!🤗🤗

Same here too phoophi Anga!!🤗

P.S. Didn't turn out very short did it? Too much badbad by me😆 But ye mera pyaar hai, you know!😳😆

Originally posted by: aranu

Lashy, ch 18 took my breath away. it was delightfully sensuous 😉👏

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: --Rashmi--

Great Going. 😳