~*FF-NOT just a passionate affair ~* Thread 1~Parts 1 - 18 - Page 94

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Loved parts 16 and 17...There's just something about your writing that the stupid smile on face does not seem to go...and I wish your chapters went on and on... What magic you weave with simple situations...uh! Well not so simple situations in 17 ...gosh. Those were gundas in the car park.

since the silly CVs decided to do away with action in their scripts, I inculcated what sensible bits of action I could... here... thanks my sweet sweet dost! what beautiful words of praise...

However - as for the 'eternal smile' - no guarantee for that 😒

I love their silent talks. Its good

Awww thanks

Jalal ko gussa kyon ata hai?

this Shareef and the serila ka lech Shareef are so similar😉 Both so shareef...

Because, the characters are like the ones in the serial dear.. had they time travelled to the 21st century... story & track diff...personalities the same (obviously, trying to avoid the inconsistencies, where I can unless situations demand so😳)

How come Jo did not go back into the club?

Hamaari Jo? Go back to club? After that public brawl where she was the centrepiece? Waise, bhi she felt quite out-of-place since she arrived...after this, she really had no mind to go back (explanations will follow in next chapter😛)

As for why she left with Jalal - meera tho two wheeler mein aayi thee and payal with her own chacha.. she'd assured her family she'd get back home by the same mode na.. so, she left with Jalal with whom she'd come...waise bhi these days, she's more comfy with him than the rest.. 😉

Well... good that she did not. what an interesting evening they had

Oh you made it in the past tense I see😛

Originally posted by: baubles

This was just...MINDBLOWING!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Sharif's remark was just as cheap as him..git! He deserved what he got from Jalal..😡

He was only drunk da...poor thing😳😆

Another round of naino ki bhasha talking between Jalal-Jo..I love these aankhon ke ishaare and Q-A sessions always! Makes me blush every single time!😳😳

Awww😳 Thank you ...

So..Jalan didn't really have a good enough explanation to give his friends for that brawl..hmm..interesting! He's over protective of Jo😳

Well, he's very dignified and sophisticated generally na...for him to get involved in something that till a few months ago he'd have called cheap is unusual...he surprised himself basically!

I actually liked Renu and her 'new friend' comment to Jalal😆

Loool

You know, this is one thing I love about Jalal's friends group(excluding Jo and her sangaathis) They are a perfect group..all different people, who think differently, having different traits..yet great friends! That's the ideal friends group for me!❤️❤️❤️

Even Jodhas group is like that...all lively but different in their own ways...😛

Back to the update, the store room scene was my super favourite! What chemistry these two have yaar di...their words work like magic..be it when he asked her whether she believed the texts and her 'No' or his answer to her question making her feel so warm and protected..hayye! ☺️☺️

Hai...sanchi? 😳

Btw, I saw a jhalak of me in Jo in the part where she's no more nervous but pretty much ok..even Jalal was surprised😳

Jalak of you? 😲

And the end...he could have kissed her..gosh, really?! This guy will drive me insane one of these days! Can't tell you how badly I blushed there☺️☺️☺️

ROFL...😆

So coming to the end of the long essay..I love such extra long updates, keep them coming!😆😆

Update sooonnn...and by soon I mean really really soon!😛😆

Love ya loadsss🤗🤗

Love you moreee🤗

Originally posted by: LizBennett

Arz kiya hai...after a lot of plagiarizing...

Kya khoob likhti ho...

Badi sundar likhti ho...

Phir se likho...update karo..

Acha lagta hai..

Kahani ka progression bada Sacha lagta hai...

I take full credit for doing a total Bappi Lahiri to an original and lovely tune...notice the words are all...errr...not mine..but phir bhi...appreciation to banta hai...

Originally posted by: ashpat

I really liked this protective jalal and how jodga cleared the misunderstanding and tried to cheer him up.

Thanks dear 😳

I was really happy and relieved to c jalal and jodga alone for once

Loool😆

but i am just curios that how come jodga did not stay at club or meera, payal did not join jodha and jalal? I thought jalal's friends wont left him wlone and go back to party. I thought they would be like we will go somewhere else where we cn all be together.

Hmmm, an explanation is to follow in the next...but, the basic reason why they didn't leave was because they paid for the party ...costly affair na new year parties in clubs and hotels these days...so, it'd be unfair of JA Jo to expect them to come...in fact, they wouldn't have let them come alone, even if they offered...

But, dont think i am complaining about this. I was just curios about the reasonings behind it. Anyways, I am reallly happy that jalal and jodha were alone and not with group. I so agree with jalals thoughts that it looked like a moment when he could kiss her but glad he did not act on it; otherwise, jodha would have been mad.
Awww thanks so much! 😳

Plzzz update soon.thx for pm.

Originally posted by: sunshine_sun

lovely lovely lovely ⭐️
make it more longer than this...😳

Originally posted by: --Aashi--

Awesome update like always !!!

You should seriously consider writing a book 🤓

Will give lambe comments later 😭

Hindi 😵😒 hen science & maths *facepalm*

Originally posted by: lashy

I didn't know you were still following

welcome home 🤗

and thanks so so so much!

Originally posted by: lashy

Thanks so much jaan...

hope you had a lovely birthday...you know yesterday, it was 5 of my friends' birthdays (3 on IF and 2 others😲)

I'll update few days later... 🤗need a bit of a break dear...

Originally posted by: --Aashi--

5th is such a good day , nahi ??😆

We also got a love confession from jalal ❤️

How many days ?? 😲