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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: LizBennett
Shraddha dear,
I like this kahaani mein twist...the uber confident...belles genuflecting to his magnificence.. ...dude needs the swift kick up his figurative behind and realize that THIS one..is zaraa hatke...and not his run of the mill usual suspect flame...
She..on the other hand..needs to understand that an essentially good nature, integrity and honesty trumps all other superficialities..religion, money et al.
That you are making them work towards valuing each other is very Jane Austen...ish...
And I , true to my nom de plume...LOVE it..!😳

Queen liz 😛 Hola dear.. missed you

Awww my heart sunk a bit when I imagined you kicking my confident guy on his figurative behind 😭

She..on the other hand..needs to understand that an essentially good nature, integrity and honesty trumps all other superficialities..religion, money et al.

But this line had me go

And will you kick my not-so-figurative behind if I told you I've read hardly any romance novels - neither the classics (Bronte sisters, Austen etc) nor modern romance (Nora Roberts and the sort) ...so while Pride and Prejudice definitely rings a bell due to popularity factor...I'm not too aware of its contents.. yes, I'm a very very poor reader😒

Originally posted by: Pals2411
You bet, I read all the parts in one day. 😛 I just could not discontinue reading, barring lunch breaks and tea time. It is so my type of romance😳 Your frank and rich Jallu and a fiery and grounded Jo who knows her middle class background make a great attraction. Now only one request, no demand (if I can make one), UPDATE SOON.😉

ooo thank you... thank you... I'm working towards the next one madame! 😛

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rajani_sid

@rajani_sid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1022

Loved the update..!!...I love the way in which the story is progressing...look forward to your updates...always. Keep it up 👏

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1023

💔 😭 Dil mile bhi nahi theek se aur heart break kar diya !!

Lashy, this is one amazing story on Adhka, in fact ,the only one i read n look forward to reading. totally realistic and relatable , still so endearing!! how well you have captured the essence of these characters !! 👏

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: rajani_sid
Loved the update..!!...I love the way in which the story is progressing...look forward to your updates...always. Keep it up 👏

Hey thanks so so so much yaar 😳 Those were some very supportive comments ...thanks

Originally posted by: mdeshpande
💔 😭 Dil mile bhi nahi theek se aur heart break kar diya !!
Lashy, this is one amazing story on Adhka, in fact ,the only one i read n look forward to reading. totally realistic and relatable , still so endearing!! how well you have captured the essence of these characters !! 👏

Hey thanks so much...Its a great compliment for me if in this sea of amazing authors you've picked this one...

Thanks yaar 😃 Yes...I'm trying to keep it realistic...but, don't worry there'll be tender moments too! 😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1025

Some comments I recd via pm that I wanted to paste here so that they don't get lost somewhere in the inbox ...thanks so much guys.. 🤗

riyasp

Shradda ,

Both the parts are beautifully written dear.

18th part- I was never expecting that almost kiss. hmm

19th part -Oh god, it was so real, that awkwardness and all beautifully written.

11110

Hey yrr i have a request 4 u plz update its 20th part tomorrow as it is sunday nd yr fans will also be happy plz yrr i cant 4 it any longer i m thinking about that only its a request nd i hope u will fulfill my request plzzz update ittt. I know i m troubling u but its nt my fault that u r a fabtabulous writer which is making me mad so plz think about it its a request from someone who is yr die heart fan(which is me) nd i m requesting it from my bottom of my heart... Sry for taking yr time

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charu

@cjs369

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1026

Chap 19

awesome update...
the convo in the library seemed quite Intense...
Jalal was really taken aback by Jodha's reply to if she was attracted to him or not... he must have never in his wildest dreams expected her to say no to him...even I was upset with her answers... but on further thought one feels it is better this way...atleast he wudnt keep false hopes till jodha is sure of herself.
But not being able to be jalal's friend is going to be very difficult for Jodha...and may make her realise what he actually means to her...
very interesting track...looking forward to your next update...

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riyasp

@riyasp

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1027

Shradda , you pasted my PM here thanks a lot.

When are you giving us the update ...Sorry dear I know you will be busy.

Each 2 hrs I will refresh this page to check whether u have updated or not.

Each time you are able to give the reader a beautiful surprise.

So I am not predicting anything . Waiting to see what is going to be there in the next part.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1028

LASHY I HAVE NO WORDS HOW TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS... TRUELY AMAZING ... I ENJOYED ALL THE CHAPTERS... 🤗

FROM CHAPTER 13

A moment later, she found her glances reverting to him once more. It was disconcerting, because he'd caught her unintentional 'eyeing' of him twice already.

I love the part she suddenly jump to conclusion about... he is going to disconcert her about project... Before he complete she blurt... Stupid girl... Her ego... I love it how confidently she said she will manage it... and How swiftly he said.. I knew it's not your cup of tea... I love their ego

Poor salim cry while watching tv... Awww. So senti... Abadul what U trying to prove... U want to be funny one... Ye saare uske piche pade hai... romatic movie... girl friend... Lashy too good... I can tell one thing...u still remember Ur college days... I feel I am in canteen in some colleage... superb...

I love Maan and Payal... lol... everyone looked at them...so embarrassing for them... they didn't even confess...Lashy I am smiling...

My Jallu... hot crush for girls... Their glare and silent talk... Lashy...love it... as usual I have not words for appreciation... I can't wait to go on next chapter... Superb!!!!

Omg!!! Jalal is so intelligent... and I am in love with this Jalal... the way he said impressive work... and watch her talking about her... awww... Then carefully he told her mistake... I am in love with the way he talks ...

Joke...hilarious... their talk is really fun to read... they both are so attracted to each other... probably Jalal more...but love it how they are hiding and showing their affection...

Jalal is showing his personal life... that is a big sign of he is gone case... She wanted to visit amal... awww...

Jodha is noticing his every single thing... how he handle office accounts, care for old residents, How involve with those residence personal lives... How powerfully he ordered extra needed stuff for residents... He is so responsible... any girl would fall in for...

She made pauha... vow... love that entire conversation... They both knows what is going on between them...silently... I can't wait for more... Meera and Abdul both notice their silence... This is real college days love... I am loving it... U R amazing... I will run to next chapter. I can't hold myself any more

I love abdul and Meera... both are knows their friend... I scared with Abdul... comment... she is not your type...

Football: Love JO's nirofying my Jallu... This Jalal is so hottt

Imagine topping all of that raw manly appeal with exquisite features - features that glistened even more when sweaty - be it the handsome face, the fair neck or even the broad chest. Not to mention, the dark red wet t-shirt that now clung to his body - making his muscular physique look all the more - well, muscular!

'Jodha...what are you doing?

Jo's Gutter Mind activated lol Superb Lashy... I am in love with U ... Thank the God that humans weren't mind readers! Lol aesa hota to kya hota lashy...

Renuuu... I guess she couldn't take it anymore... I knew from beginning ... she loves Jalal... Probably she is the one who was messaging Jo... Lol her Jealousy at the pick...

New Year Party... Vow... I love how desperately she wanted to go to party... She tried every tactic to get approval.. vow her family is tuff... it took really long to convince them... but finally...bhaiya came in dubba... I love how her mom said... she taking long in dressing up... make up... Jodha is trying her best to impress him...

Poor Jalal is worried about Jo and Renu meeting after big drama... I love how he admit to Abdul...best part

I'm NOT letting her dictate who I should speak to...whose calls I should attend...who I should meet ...' he paused 'Or who I should have a crush on!'

I love this Jalal... he know where to draw a line ... difference between best friend and love of life...

Omg !!!! Club drama... and chippudin... can u clear Lashy... I think chippu didn't send those text... or may be I didn't read it properly

Hmmm car park... Omg!!! Goondas with knife... Then after... best part most awaiting... Store room and their almost kiss...dance... song... Oh Lashy How u imagine all this... what creative idea... And best part U stop it at the right time.. same like cvs... lol... Why they didn't kiss???????????? (modify) Lol actually that make story more interesting...I love entire chapter...

Another surprise...he took her to his home and act like nothing happens... I just love this Jalal... his patience... his passion... and how caring he is just amazing... I love how you have portrait Jalal's character

Amazing... really nicely written... I read all chapters together but not for a minute mind was diverted... I enjoyed each and every part of this story... I have no words but U are indeed witty superb writer...LOVE U... 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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riyasp

@riyasp

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1029

Update karo Shradda. please please😭

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1030

Riyasp

Shradda , you pasted my PM here thanks a lot.

When are you giving us the update ...Sorry dear I know you will be busy.

Each 2 hrs I will refresh this page to check whether u have updated or not.

Thank you so much Smitha...such beautiful words.. I've updated today...😳

Each time you are able to give the reader a beautiful surprise. So I am not predicting anything . Waiting to see what is going to be there in the next part.

What better compliment can a writer ask for... thanks yaar🤗
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cjs369

awesome update...

Thanks yaar😳

the convo in the library seemed quite Intense...

Jalal was really taken aback by Jodha's reply to if she was attracted to him or not... he must have never in his wildest dreams expected her to say no to him...even I was upset with her answers... but on further thought one feels it is better this way...atleast he wudnt keep false hopes till jodha is sure of herself.

She is quite level-headed and realistic...that's why..she knows that even if he has charm, that will not suffice to maintain a peaceful relationship...so, she doesn't want to give in...

But not being able to be jalal's friend is going to be very difficult for Jodha...and may make her realise what he actually means to her...

very interesting track...looking forward to your next update...

Thanks so much yaar

Bhavu

LASHY I HAVE NO WORDS HOW TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS... TRUELY AMAZING ... I ENJOYED ALL THE CHAPTERS... ClapClapClapHug

I am amazed Bhavu... your compliments.. the manner in which you've taken out all of your best bits.. the fact that you said reading this made you feel happier..uplifted you..the points that this story brought back some memories for you...

🤗

OMG... I mean really, I don't know how to express my gratitude for this ...

but here's a wholehearted thanks your way 🤗

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU..

I hope to keep you entertained for long.. and I hope this story keeps you interested in the following chapters too...

I LOVED ALL your comments but one specially made me laugh 😆

Football: Love JO's nirofying my Jallu... This Jalal is so hottt

'Jodha...what are you doing?

Jo's Gutter Mind activated lol Superb Lashy... I am in love with U ... Thank the God that humans weren't mind readers! Lol aesa hota to kya hota lashy...

I'm NOT letting her dictate who I should speak to...whose calls I should attend...who I should meet ...' he paused 'Or who I should have a crush on!'

I love this Jalal... he know where to draw a line ... difference between best friend and love of life...

😆

Omg !!!! Club drama... and chippudin... can u clear Lashy... I think chippu didn't send those text... or may be I didn't read it properly

Pataa chalega dear... 🤗