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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123

your ff is simply fabulous.cant describe in words.i finished reading all chapters in one go.please update soon and pm me๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thanks so so so much Najma ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: juggaad

I love this Jalal. A man who is not afraid to speak his mind. And when he asked the thing that was of utmost importance to him, whether Jodha was attracted to him or not, I fell for your Jalal. Badly! Madly!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Sachiii? Wow...THAT line caught your attention...awww thanks so much Sneha ๐Ÿค—
Your characters are so in touch with their feelings and so outspoken that I can't help but fall in love with them.
Thanks so much โ˜บ๏ธ These are the best compliments you've given me...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bobby13

Beautifully written Shraddha. I liked this one (Pt 19) more than the previous one. The way Jodha was trying to explain Jalal was really nice and you have depicted Jalal's feelings so very nicely. It was sad, but quite realistic and that's why I liked it so much. They both were quite frank with each other.

Thanks so so so much Vani ๐Ÿค— so beautiful your words
I wish Jodha and Jalal of our favorite serial is half as frank as these two.
Had they been so outspoken and frank...then it'll not bring in the TRPs you see ๐Ÿ˜†

Now I think Jalal will avoid Jodha and Jodha will miss him royally.
Hmmm...๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: minnie2308

Lash, how wonderfully you write... .
What fun it was.
Thanks madamjee...โ˜บ๏ธ
Jo has the will of steel to be able to resist Jalal's charm.
I have the will of steels to act like Jo and resist Jalal's charm...trust me, I have to stop thinking like myself ๐Ÿ˜†
Lair she is.."I find you attractive, but I am not attracted"๐Ÿคฌ
๐Ÿ˜ฒ you called your Jo a liar...
OMG Jalal's breakup line is so hot... ! Why cant real guys find such lines to say to their girls.
Thank God someone else found it hot too...that was one of my personal favourites actually
had I been in Jo's place..I would have changed my mind that instant...๐Ÿ˜† but then maybe that's why Jalal wouldn't have fallen for me in the first place ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Umm, so Jalal spends his evenings in clubs, etc.
Nahi ree not all evenings...๐Ÿ˜† but, all special evenings and weekends yes..!

Jo is such a pampered child. Its so much fun to read her family interactions.
Awww...a bit suffocating at times, you don't think??? but yes she's quite well cared for..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Jalal will maintain a stoic silence where Jo is concerned . But I am not blaming Jo yaar...Ishaqzaade 2 in the making ...
Ishaqzaade was all guns and no roses..my story's not that thrilling...just grounded...๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you my love ๐Ÿค—


P.S. Only when I read all of your comments did I realize how frank Jodha and Jalal actually are... thanks so much for the thumbs up my lovely girls...๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashpat

Gosh, i really felt bad for both jodha and jalal. I can totally relate to this jodha and reminded me of few memories in past. I can feel jalal's pain as well as jodha's worries. This chapter is so real and believable. Plzzz update soon. Thx for pm.


Awww...so you've been through these feelings too?
Thanks so much for your supportive words Ayesha ๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: baubles

Loved the chapter as always di!! You're too good!๐Ÿค—

Thanks dearest ๐Ÿค—
On the whole, a sad chapter but I guess an important and much needed one!
Awww ...true...
The happy n cute parts first...Jalal and Robbie share the same likes ha๐Ÿ˜† The like master, like pet bit was hilarious but so sweet!๐Ÿ˜†
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And the whole lot of smirks and teasing that went on in the car from his side were awesome! He was so adorable there..and almost so sure that their feelings were mutual! Loved the curious and cute Jalal..โค๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ One thing I love about him is how frank he is..no mincing words or hesitating, just ask and get it cleared!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
You're the fourth one who's said so ... I never consciously realized how apparent it was till I read so many say so.. and yes, he was very confident of her feelings for him...

And then...well it was heartbreaking to see all of Jalal's hopes and his surety about her feelings all deflated..๐Ÿฅบ
๐Ÿ˜ญ I feel for ya
He's right in his place..Jo might not have intentionally led him to this but she does share the same feelings for him as he does for her..he seems to have seen it, she's still confused I suppose.๐Ÿ˜ญ
You've worded this very well...
She's not wrong either but..she deffo is attracted to him and it shows! But it's not easy to accept this or admit it to oneself or to the other person. Plus she does have her doubts if it's all a casual thing for him, so she's right in her place!
Again, worded very well...
Paavams...feeling so bad for both, a little more for Jalal..๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿฅบ
I am glad that a breakup chapter managed to balance itself very well with everyone empathizing for both...I must have done something right then...๐Ÿ˜†

Love you loads di๐Ÿค—And you better update soon now!! I just HAVE to know what's happening next as soon as possible!๐Ÿ˜’
Love you too ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lashy dear. just finished reading the last part 19. Starting from Part 1 I mean. I am out of words dear. Beautiful, dramatic, romantic, light-hearted at places, engrossing, I am falling short of adjectives you see. What I loved is that both Jo and Jallu are true to their characters. While Jallu is his teeda self (not least bit dumb) and Jo is her proud, fiery self.๐Ÿ‘ The one person whose mere mention made me laugh was Shantaram๐Ÿ˜† Director ko bhi FF mein ghussa diya๐Ÿ˜† I am hooked for sure dear and am now eagerly waiting to see how this romance enfolds๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 11 years ago
its simply ,wow n beautiful ..i mean its mindblowing....the missed the earler pt ...first i read that n then this one...sorry for late comment Di ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Lashy dear. just finished reading the last part 19. Starting from Part 1 I mean. I am out of words dear. Beautiful, dramatic, romantic, light-hearted at places, engrossing, I am falling short of adjectives you see. What I loved is that both Jo and Jallu are true to their characters. While Jallu is his teeda self (not least bit dumb) and Jo is her proud, fiery self.๐Ÿ‘ The one person whose mere mention made me laugh was Shantaram๐Ÿ˜† Director ko bhi FF mein ghussa diya๐Ÿ˜† I am hooked for sure dear and am now eagerly waiting to see how this romance enfolds๐Ÿ˜›

Thank you so much Pallavi ๐Ÿ˜ณ Thanks a lot lot lot...you read it all in a day???
Yes...I've tried keeping Jalal and Jodha true to their selves...๐Ÿ˜ณ Only tracks are a different setting and century
As for Santharam...๐Ÿ˜† It wasn't a deliberate inclusion at all (and didn't even realize the coincidence as one till you pointed it out now) I purely chose the most common professor names I could think of ๐Ÿ˜† That's all...๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks so so so so much dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

Originally posted by: sunshine_sun

its simply ,wow n beautiful ..i mean its mindblowing....the missed the earler pt ...first i read that n then this one...sorry for late comment Di ๐Ÿค—

Oh dear, did I miss pming you? Thanks so much sweetheart for the lovely comments...love you loads too ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
I felt like mera new year accha gaya๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
thank you so much for the update

You would always remain my favorite author๐Ÿค—

whatever you write feels so real amazing and THE BEST

how correct emotions from jallu๐Ÿ˜ณ and confused girl jo...

PERFECTโค๏ธ

Totally loved it... specially car scene๐Ÿคฃ
and dog -jo ka scene was so cute... 'Like master...like pet!'

I have a crust on you awww...๐Ÿ˜Ž

I love you shraddha more pankhโค๏ธ

Please update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ

cant wait to read next chap
how would jo react him going away... this time why do i feel... she will go behind him๐Ÿ˜›

whatever it is am super excited๐Ÿ˜†

P.S: Who was that unknown message guy๐Ÿ˜ณbolo na๐Ÿ˜†


P.S: I LOVE YOU MORRRE PANKH๐Ÿค—




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

I felt like mera new year accha gaya๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

thank you so much for the update
Imagining yourself, Haan? ๐Ÿ˜†

You would always remain my favorite author๐Ÿค— whatever you write feels so real amazing and THE BEST
Somehow when it comes from you, it feels so inspiring selvi...I'm over the moon when you say this! ๐Ÿ˜Š

how correct emotions from jallu๐Ÿ˜ณ and confused girl jo...PERFECTโค๏ธ
Thanks da...yes, I do try to keep it real...
Totally loved it... specially car scene๐Ÿคฃ
You loved CAR SCENE...why? ๐Ÿ˜›
and dog -jo ka scene was so cute... 'Like master...like pet!'
๐Ÿ˜†
I have a crust on you awww...๐Ÿ˜Ž
Crust on me? You mean, crush ๐Ÿ˜›And you have one on me๐Ÿ˜ฒ main JO ki tarah itna Nahin sochthi๐Ÿ˜†
I love you shraddha more pankhโค๏ธ
Thank you sweetheart!
Please update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ cant wait to read next chap
how would jo react him going away... this time why do i feel... she will go behind him๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿ˜ณ Yes her feelings are the journey, aren't they?
whatever it is am super excited๐Ÿ˜†
Ahaaa๐Ÿ˜›
P.S: Who was that unknown message guy๐Ÿ˜ณbolo na๐Ÿ˜†
Message guy๐Ÿ˜† You'll come to know...don't worry!
P.S: I LOVE YOU MORRRE PANKH๐Ÿค—
Love you too dear๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
Shraddha dear,
I like this kahaani mein twist...the uber confident...belles genuflecting to his magnificence.. ...dude needs the swift kick up his figurative behind and realize that THIS one..is zaraa hatke...and not his run of the mill usual suspect flame...
She..on the other hand..needs to understand that an essentially good nature, integrity and honesty trumps all other superficialities..religion, money et al.
That you are making them work towards valuing each other is very Jane Austen...ish...
And I , true to my nom de plume...LOVE it..!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Thank you so much Pallavi ๐Ÿ˜ณ Thanks a lot lot lot...you read it all in a day???
Yes...I've tried keeping Jalal and Jodha true to their selves...๐Ÿ˜ณ Only tracks are a different setting and century
As for Santharam...๐Ÿ˜† It wasn't a deliberate inclusion at all (and didn't even realize the coincidence as one till you pointed it out now) I purely chose the most common professor names I could think of ๐Ÿ˜† That's all...๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks so so so so much dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.
Oh dear, did I miss pming you? Thanks so much sweetheart for the lovely comments...love you loads too ๐Ÿค—

You bet, I read all the parts in one day. Tongue I just could not discontinue reading, barring lunch breaks and tea time. It is so my type of romanceEmbarrassed Your frank and rich Jallu and a fiery and grounded Jo who knows her middle class background make a great attraction. Now only one request, no demand (if I can make one), UPDATE SOON.๐Ÿ˜‰

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