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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Az3003
Chapter 11- OMG OMG😲😲😲 Jalal found out the truth!! I'm so curious as to what happens next I'm typing this review in a rush!! You are to0o0o0o0o Amazing Aanchal👏

lol Sujamal and Bakshi Bano who'd have thought??😆😆😆 Only you copuld come up with such a pair... So cute yaar😛

i want detailed analysis ,esp from u.

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Chapter 12- FINALLY Jalal knows the truth!! Yaaay!!😃😃😃

I want to see how he'll react!! Suspense create karna toh koi aapse sikhe Aanchal!! I can't wait to read the latest update (Chapter 13)... Jodha lol... She's s0o0 fiery and adorable! Despite being raised a Mughal I love how she hasn't lost that Rajput fire😛😛😛 It's amazing and she is very well written!! You just proved with this update Aanchal... That you can take a Rajput out of Rajputana but you can never take Rajputana out of a Rajput👏👏👏 BRILLIANT👏👏👏

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

i want detailed analysis ,esp from u.

lol sorry yaar... I'll give now after I read chapter 13... It's so0o0o good I can't wait!!!😃😃😃

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Az3003
lol sorry yaar... I'll give now after I read chapter 13... It's so0o0o good I can't wait!!!😃😃😃

did u read jalal jealous..plz do read that also and let me know what u think.

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Az3003

@Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

I have finally caught up with chapter 13 so here is the detailed review you wanted😛😛😛 Aanchal how do you do it?? Your writing especially your dialogues are the most zabardast of any writer I have read👏👏👏 I love how your Jalal is so respectful of the hindus and his Badi Abbu and Badi Ammi. He single-handedly untied Sujamal and Bakshi. He truly is a young man of noble birth.. But now I'm worried about whether he'll not want to wait for Jodha😲😲 I hope Ruqaiyya won't cause a right there...

Humayun, Bharmal, Mainavati and Hamida... What do I say about them? Their friendship seems to have strengthened even more over the past 16 years and I salute their loyalty and their love for one another... Only you could have depicted such a strong bond in your writing Aanchal my dearest🤗

My favourite though without a doubt is the naughty Bairam Khan😈 He's a sexy beast na?🤣 He's such a romantic husband and indulgent father!! I just hope that they are always in Jodha's life as their daughter even after she finds out the truth. Jodha... My Rajput firebrand... She is mischievous as she is beautiful. He fire will complement Jalal's impishness perfectly😳😳😳 But please yaar... Let them meet soon😭😭😭

And now that I have finally caught up with this MASTER BLASTER story I can finally say with much joy and pride... UPDATE PLEASE😛😛😛😛😛

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J2lover

@J2lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

plzzz update next part soon...am TOTALLY LOVING IT!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESUMLY BEAUTIFUL...BRILLANT WORK!!!!!!!!😊 UPDATE SOON!!!!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

aachal... Update this story soon please...

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

update plzz. pm me when u do

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alapi

@alapi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

hey i read ur story at 1 go...its fab nd unique...suspense queen no.2 jldi se update kro na...plz

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

part 14

JALAL-AMMIJAAN,ABBU AB HUM NIKAAH ZAROOR KARENGE...

hamida and humayun were shocked..humayun had always prided himself on fulfilling all his promises then how could jalal his own son not understand this...arent my words of any value to jalal that he has taken such a decision...

HUM-YEH KYA KEH RAHE HO JALAL,TUN HAMARE FAISLE KI NAFARMANI KAR RAHE HO...

HB-HAAN BETA YEH KYUN KAR RAHE HO...KYA APNE AMMI ABBU PAR BHAROSA NAHI HAI TUMHE...

bharmal and mainavati though were sad that jodha would now not get to be a part of such a wonderful family,but they knew it was not fair for them to ask jalal to wait any longer to get married...they had a smile on their faces...

RB-HUMAYUN,JALAL KA FAISLA BILKUL SAHI HAI,YEH SAHI NAHI HAI KI HUM USSE VIVAAH KARNE SE ROKEIN...AB WOH BADA HO GAYA HAI..USSE BHI EK SAATHI KI ZAROORAT HAI...AUR HUMNE VADA KIYA THA KI HUM USKA VIVAAH USKI PASAND KI LADKI SE KARVAYENGE...

MN-HAAN HAMIDA,HUM BHI CAHTE HAIN KI AB JALAL KA VIVAAH HO JAYE...SHAYAD BHAGWAAN KO YEH MANZUR NAHI HAI KI HAMARI JODHA KO JALAL EK VAR KE ROOP MAIN MILE...

RB-JALAL,KYA AAPKO KOI LADKI PASAND HAI BETA...HUMEIN BATAEYE...

JALAL-JI BADE ABBU...HUM EK LADKI SE NIKAAH KARNA CAHTE HAIN...

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jamaima was busy sorting out her room ...her room always used to be in a mess...salima begum had tried to make her lazy daughter more responsible but jamaima try as she might could never straighten up her room...jamaima loved books,colors,clothes in that order...her most precious possession was a book about Prithviraj chauhan..a great rajvanshi king...though being brought up in a mughal household jamaima had always been fasinated about hindu culture..she felt very close to the hindu form of worship and had secretly wandered into the forests to see hindu saints worship there Ambe Maa whoes temple was there a little deep into the forest...away from the prying eyes of the fanatic mughal ruler ADHAM KHAN...jamaima loved her culture and her people a lot,but was not fanatic about it...she was attached to the hindu culture also... for some reason she had always had a specialplace in her heart for hindus...

Salima came to call her daughter for dinner...the scene she saw there raised her temper...jamaima had strewn all her clothes on the bed...and was busy throwing her books on top of her clothes...

SB-YA ALLAH...YEH KYA KAR DIYA TUMNE JAMAIMA...KYA HAAL BANA RAKHA HAI APNE HOJRE KA...

JAMAIMA-AREY AMMIJAAN AAP PHIKAR KYUN KARTI HAIN,HUM ABHI SAB SAMBHAL DENGE...YEH SAB HUMNE SAMBHALNE KE LIYE HI TOH NIKALA HAI...

SB-AAISE APNA HOJRA SAMBHALOGI TUM...TUMHARA SHAUHAR TOH TUMSE PARESHAN HO JAYEGA...

JAMAIMA-AAP PHIR SE HAMARE NIKAAH KI BAAT KARNE LAGI...HUMNE KAHA NA HUM VAHIN NIKAAH KARENGE JAHAN AAP BHI AHAMARE SAATH RAHENGI...

SB-CHUP KAR.KUCH BHI BOLTI HAI...

JAMAIMA-HAAN TOH THEEK HAI NA...AAP HAMARA NIKAAH EK SHEHZADE SE KARVADO...VAHAN TOH KITNI BANDIYAAN HONGI,HUMEIN BHI APNA HOJRA KHUD NAHI SAMBHALNA PADEGA...(laughs out loud)

SB-SAPNE DEKHNA BAND KARDO,AB TUMHARI NIKAAH KI UMAR HO GAYI HAI...JALD SE JALD EK ACCHA LADKA DEKH KAR HUM TUMHARA NIKAAH PADVADENGI...PHIR JA KAR TIM KAHIN SUDHROGI...

salima yeh nahi janti thi ki jamaima ki shararat main bole gaye alfaaz ek din sach sabit hone wale hain...ki jamaima ki kismat aaisa karvat lene wali thi ki jo kahani 16 saal pehle shuru hui thi woh apne anjaam tak pohchne wali thi...

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HUM-KYA...TUM KISS LADKI KI BAAT KAR RAHE HO JALAL...KAUN HAI WOH GUSTAKH...

RB-SHANT HO JAO HUMAYUN...TUM KYUN APNI MARZI HAMARE BETE PAR THOP RAHE HO...AGAR WOH VIVAAH KARNA CAHTA HAI TOH WOH ZAROOR VIVAAH KAREGA,HUM USKA VIVAAH USKI PASAND KI LADKI SE KARVAYENGE...

HUM-MAGAR BHARMAL HAMARE VAADE KA KYA,JO HUMNE EK DUSRE KO DIYA THA...KYA USKI KOI KEEMAT NAHI HAI...

RB-SHAYAD KISMAT MAIN YEHI LIKHA HAI HUMAYUN...SHAYAD HAMARI JODHA AB HUMSE KABHI NAHI MILEGI...

JALAL-AAISA HO HI NAHI SAKTA BADE ABBU,KYUNKI HUM APNI KISMAT KHUD BANANE MAIN YAKEEN RAKHTE HAIN...

RB-MATLAB KYA HAI TUMHARA JALAL...

JALAL-MATLAB YEH HAI BADE ABBU KI HUMEIN APSE KUCH CAHIYE...

RB-MANGO JALAL,JO CAHOGE WOH MILEGA...

JALAL-HUMEIN JODHA CAHIYE BADE ABBU...

humayun,hamida are plesantly shocked...just then a soldier comes there...he had some important news for raja bharmal...

RB-KAHO KYA SUCHNA LAYE HO...

SOLDIER-MAHARAJ BAHUT BADI SUCHNA HAI...AMER KE BAHAR WALE MANDIR KI JO PUJARAN THI...SHAGUNI BAI...UNKA PATA CHAL GAYA HAI...HUMNE UNHE KHOJ LIYE HAI MAHARAJ...

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