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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Awesome update now jalal will find his jodha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

very nice updtd ear...thnx for d PM

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Wow aanchal this is awesome !!!

Finally Jalal gets to know the truth bout Jodha !!!

And loved the song you used for Jodha !!!

Can't wait for the next chapter ...

Keep up the good work dear ...

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

awesome update...
now jalal knew y no one insisted him abt his marriage...
jamaima her ammi abbu's shezadi...
loved it...

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Aanchal My Darling! Thnks for pm.. I am so much dying to read the last 2-3 chaps of this lovely FF !!😭😊

Forgive me plz.. I m gonna read the chaps soon now and and will edit my comment later!😳 I reserve this comment!😊

Thanks for wonderful FF! Az missing you!😃😊

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy
Aanchal My Darling! Thnks for pm.. I am so much dying to read the last 2-3 chaps of this lovely FF !!😭😊
Forgive me plz.. I m gonna read the chaps soon now and and will edit my comment later!😳 I reserve this comment!😊

Thanks for wonderful FF! Az missing you!😃😊

even i miss azra...hope she can come back soon.

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SUMESHNI

@SUMESHNI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Plz plz plz update soon

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

part 13

JALAL-ABBUJAAN,YEH JODHA KAUN HAI...

hamida,mainavati,humayun and bharmal are shocked...

BHARMAL(thinking)-HEY BHAGWAAN,KAHIN JALAL NE SAB KUCH SUN TOH NAHI LIYA...AB KAISE SAMBHALEINGE HUM BAAT KO...

HUM(thinking)-LAGTA HAI ALLAH KI BHI YEHI MARZI HAI KI JALAL KO AB SAB PATA CHAL JAYE...

HUM-JALAL AAJ HUM APKO JO BATANE WALE HAIN USSE SUN KAR SHAYAD APKO JHATKA LAGE MAGAR HUMEIN SAMAJHNE KI KOSHISH KARNA BETA..HUMNE AAPSE JO CHUPAYA WOH MAJBURI MAIN CHUPAYA...

RB-YEH KYA KAR RAHE HO HUMAYUN,APNE HUMSE AUR MAINAVATI SE VADA KIYA HAI KI AAP JALAL KO KUCH NAHI BATAYENGE...

HUM-WOH VADA HUMNEIN APSE 16 SAAL PEHLE KIYA THI KYUNKI TAB HAMARE PASS KOI CHARA NAHI THA BHARMAL..MAGAR AB JALAL BADA HO CHUKA HAI...USSE SACH JANNE KA HAQ HAI...

RB-MAGAR HUMAYUN...

JALAL-HUM MUAFFI CAHTE HAIN BADE ABBU MAGAR HUM JANNA CAHTE HAIN KI AAP SAB NE HUMSE KYA CHUPAYA HAI...KYUN HUMEIN AAISE LAGTA HAI KI HAMARI ZINDAGI KA EK HISSA HAI JISSE HUMEIN JANNA BAKI HAI...

RB-JALAL BETA AAP SAMAJH KYUN NAHI RAHE...ISKA AB KOI FAYADA NAHI HAI...

HUM-AGAR APKO LAGTA HAI KI SACH SE KOI FAYADA NAHI HOGA TOH KOI BAAT NAHI MAGAR HUM APNE BETE KO SACH BATA KAR RAHENGE..YEH USKA HAQ HAI...

before bharmal or mainavati could say anything else hamida said"SHEHENSHAH THEEK KEH RAHE HAIN BHAIJAAN,MAINAVATI...JALAL KO SAB PATA HONA CAHIYE...USKE BAAD HUM FAISLA US PAR CHOD DENGE...AKHIR YEH USKI ZINDAGI KA SAWAAL HAI"

HUM-JALAL JAB AP CHOTE SE THEE,TAB APKI EK DOST BANI THI...USKA NAAM SHEHZADI JODHA THA...APKE BADE ABBU AUR AMMI KI BETIJAAN...APKO YAAD NAHI HAI MAGAR HUM APKO USSE MILVANE YAHAN AMER LAYE THEE...KUCH HI WAQT MAIN AAP KO UNSE BAHUT LAGAV BHI HO GAYA THA...YAHAN AMER KE EK MANDIR MAIN EK PUJARAN REHTEIN THI,JINKA NAAM SHAGUNI BAI THA..JODHA KE JANAM KE WAQT UNHONE BATAYA THA KI JODHA KI AUR APKI JODI UPAR SE LIKH KAR AAYI HAI...HUM SAB KO TOH YAKEEN HI NAHI HUA THA..UNHONE KAHA KI AAP AUR JODHA MANNO EK DUSRE KE LIYE HI BANE HOON..TAB HUMEIN AUR APKE BADE ABBU NE MIL KAR YEHFAISLA KIYA KI AGAR NIYATI KO YEHI MANZOOR HAI TOH AAISA HI SAHI..JAB HUM ITNE GEHRE DOST HAIN TOH SAMDHI BANNA TOH HAMARE LIYE GARV KI BAAT AUR SABSE ZAROORI KHUSHI KI BAAT HOGI..MAGAR SHAGUNI BAI NE EK AUR BAAT BOLI THI..KI JODHA KI ZINDAGI MEIN BAHUT MUGHKILEIN AAYENGI..MAGAR HUMEIN YEH NAHI PATA THA KI WOH MUSHKILEIN APKE BADE ABBU KE BHAI AIR BHABHI KE ROOP MAIN AAYENGI...UNHONE(chokes a little) JODHA KO HUMSE DUR KAR DIYA...

JALAL-KAISE ABBUJAAN...

HUM-UNHONE JODHA KO AGVAH KAR VALIYA...AUR USSE ZEHER DE KAR NADI MEIN BAHA DIYA...

by now all four are crying and even jalal has tears in his eyes...

JALAL-TOH ISKA MATLAB JODHA AB ISS DUNIYA MAIN...

HUM-NAHI ,NAHI JALAL..AAISA MAT KAHO..JAB HUM SAB KO YEH KHABAR MILI ,USSI DAURAN HUMEIN SHAGUNI BAI PHIR SE MILNE AAYI THI..UNHONE KAHA KI JODHA JAHAN BHI HAI KHUSH HAI...AUR WOH HUMEIN AB 16 SAAL BAAD HI MIL SAKTI HAI...

MAINAVATI-JALAL,HUM APSE KUCH KEHNA CAHTE HAIN...

JALAL-BOLIYE NA BADI AMMI..

MN-BETA,HUMEIN NAHI PATA KI HAMARI BETI KAHAN HAI,KAISI HAI AUR WOH HUMEIN MILEGI YA NAHI MAGAR HUM APSE EK VADA CAHTE HAIN...

JALAL-BOLIYE BADI AMMI...

MN-BETA AB APKO VIVAAH KAR LENA CAHIYE...

HUM-NAHI BHABHIJAAN,HUMEIN YEH MANZOOR NAHI HAI

MN-BHAISA,HUM JALAL KI BADI AMMI HAIN,HUMEIN UNKI BAHUT CHINTA HOTI HAI,KAB TAK HUM JODHA KA INTEZAR KARENGE...HUMEIN TOH YEH BHI NAHI PATA KI WOH KAHAN HAI...KAHIN USKA VIVAAH TOH NAHI HO GAYA...

HB-NAHI MAINA...HAMARA DIL KEHTA HAI KI JODHA BAHUT JALDI HUMEIN MIL JAYEGI...KHUDA APNE BANDON PAR ITNA ZULM HI NAHI KARTA..JAB USNE JALAL AUR JODHA KI JODI BANAYI HAI TOH JODHA KO HUMEIN MILNA HI HOGA...

RB-AAP SAB JO BHI KEHNA CAHEIN..MAGAR HUM JALAL SE SIRF YEH KEHNA CAHTEIN HAIN KI ISKA NIRNAY HUMNE JALAL PAR CHOD DIYA HAI...AUR AB HUM APKI EK NAHI SUNENGE HUMAYUN,AGAR HAMARA BETA VIVAAH KARNA CAHTA HAI TOH HUM USKA VIVAAH KARVAYENGE AUR WOH BHI USKI PASAND KI LADKI SE...

HUM-NAHI HUMEIN YEH MANZOOR NAHI...

HB-HUMEIN BHI NAHI...

JALAL-MAGAR HUMEIN HAI...

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in malwa...

at jamima's house...

SB-SUNIYE JI,HUMEIN APSE BAHUT ZAROORI BAAT KARNI HAI...

BK-TOH KAHIYE NA BEGUM SAHIBA..HUMNE KABHI APKO KUCH KARNE SE MANA KIYA HAI KYA(winks at salima).

SB-BAHUT BESHARAM HO GAYE HAIN AAP...APKI EK JAWAAN BETI HAI...KUCH TOH LIHAAZ KIJEYE...

SB-MOHABBAT MAIN KAISE LIHAAZ BEGUM SAHIBA...

SB-ACCHA YEH SAB CHODIYE...HUM APSE KEH RAHE THEE KI JAMIMA AB BADI HO GAYI HAI...USKE NIKAAH KE BARE MAIN APNE KYA SOCHA HAI...

BK-HMMM,AAP SAHI KEH RAHI HAIN,MAGAR APSE EK BAAT KAHEIN...KABHI KABHI HUMEIN AAISA LAGTA HAI KI APNI BETI KO KAHIN NAHI JANE DEIN..HAMESHA APNE PASS RAKEIN..HAMARI SHEHZADI HAI WOH...

SB-BETIYAIN TOH PARAYI HOTI HAIN JI...UNHE EK NA EK DIN TOH APNE GHAR JANA HI HOTA HAI...

just then jamaima enters...she had heard their conversation...

JAMAIMA-MAGAR HUMEIN AAP KO CHOD KAR KAHIN NAHI JANA AMMI...

SB-NAHI BETA AAISA NAHI KEHTE...HUM APKE LIYE ITNA ACCHA LADKA DHONDEINGE NA KI APKO APNE AMMI ABBU KI KAMI KABHI MEHSUS HI NAHI HOGI...

JAMAIMA-DEKHIYE NA ABBUJAAN..AMMI HUMEIN PATA NAHI KISKE SAATH AUR KAHAN BHEJ DEINGI...HUM PEHLE SE HI KEH DETE HAIN...HUME WAHIN NIKAAH KARENGE JAHAN AAP DONO BHI HAMARE SAATH REHENGE...

SB-YEH KAISE ZID HAI..DEKH LIYA APNE JI,ISKO SAR PAR BAITHANE KA NATEEEJA...

BK-BEGUM SAHIBA AAP KYUN KHAFA HOTI HAIN...HAMARI SHEHZADI ITNI HUNARVAAN AUR KHOOBSURAT HAI KI KOI BHI ISKO APNI SHAREEKEHAYAT BANNA CAHEGA...

SB-ISKA ROOP DEKH KAR HI TOH DARR LAGTA HAI JI...KAHIN KOI ANHONI NA HO JAYE..AAP JALD HI ISKE NIKAAH KE LIYE KOI ACCHA SA LADKA DHOONDIYE...

JAMAIMA-AAP LOG KUCH BHI KAR LEIN..HUM TOH VAHIN NIKAAH KARENGE JAHAN AAP LOG BHI HAMARE SAATH REH SAKEIN...BAS...(she goes near bairam khan and whispers in his ears)..LAGE RAHIYE ABBU...(pointing towards salima)..WOHI JO AAP AMMI SE KEH RAHE THEE,HAMARE AANE KE PEHLE(both laugh out loud and jamaima goes from there)

bairam khan starts thinking about something...

SB-KYA SOCH RAHE HAIN JI...

BK-SALIMA,HUMNEIN KAYI DINON SE SHEHENSHAH-E-HIND KE YAHAN SE KOI PAIGAM NAHI AAYA...HUMEIN LAGAT HAI KI KAHIN WOH AMER MAIN NA HON...HUMNE SUNA THA KI UNKI SHEHZADI AUR AMER KE SHEHZADE KA NIKAAH HONE JA RAHA THA...

SB-WOH MASHROOF HONGE...

BK-HAAN,MAGAR HUMEIN UNSE BAHUT ZAROORI BAAT KARNI HAI...

SB-TOH PAIGAM BHEJ DIJEYE...

BK-NAHI...AAJ KAL YAHAN KI PEHREDARI KAFI KADI HO CHUKI HAI...EK EK CHEEZ KI JANCH HOTI HAI...YAHAN KUCH AAISA CHAL RAHA HAI JISSE KAMARE SHEHENSHAH KO BAHUT NUKSAAN HO SAKTA HAI..HUMEIN UNHE KHUD HI JA KAR SAB BATANA PADEGA...HUM JALD HI AMER KE LIYE RAVANA HONGE...