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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Aanchal !!! 👏
Wow Sujamal and Bakshi ... Never expected that ...
Did Jallu forget about Jodha ??? 😕
I can't wait for Jodha's entry ...
Keep up the good work dear ... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme ff aanchal.
Read all partz.
Plz pm me nxt part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wwwooowww finally they r nw grown up...awesome update yaar...
aachal ab jaldi humari akdha ko mila dooo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww...👏👏👏
superb.. so finally sab bade hogaye...😆😆
Ab jaldi se jodha aur jalal ko bhi milva do...😭😭
Update soon...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 12
JALAL-YEH NAAM...JODHA...JANA PEHCHANA LAG RAHA HAI...MAGAR AAJ TAK HUM INSE MILE KYUN NAHI...AUR BADI AMMI AUR ABBU UNHE APNE BETI BULA RAHE HAIN...YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI...AUR HAMARE NIKAAH KI BAAT...KISSE KARNA CAHTE HAIN ABBUJAAN HAMARA NIKAAH...

all of them are still unaware of jalal being there...

RB-HAAN HUMAYUN,AGAR JODHA HUMEIN NA MILI TOH KYA JALAL KABHI SHAADI NAHI KAREGA...

HUM-ABHI ABHI 16 SAAL BEETE HAIN BHARMAL,HUMEIN JODHA KO DUBARA DHOONDNA CAHIYE...SHAGUNI BAI NE BHI KAHA THA KI 16 SAAL BAAD HUMEIN HAMARI BETI MIL JAYEGI...

RB-KAISE DHOONDEIN BHARMAL...KAHAN DHOONDEIN...HAMARI BETI HUMSE BAHUT DUR JA CHUKI HAI..

HUM-AAP AAISE HAAR KAISE MAAN SAKTEIN HAIN BHARMAL...

RB-HUM THAK GAYE HAIN HUMAYUN,APNI BETI KE INTEZAAR MAIN...KAHAN HAI WOH,KAISI HOGI...WOH ZINDA HAI NA...

MN-AAPKO SHAGUNI BAI PAR BHAROSA HO NA HO,HUMEIN PURA BHAROSA HAI UN PAR...HAMARI JODHA ZINDA HAI JI..MAGAR HUM PHIR BHI KAHENGE BHAISA AAPSE KI AAP JALAL KI SHAADI KE BAARE MAIN SOCHIYE...

HUM-NAHI BHABHIJAAN,HUMNE APNE AAPKO AUR AAP SAB KO ZUBAAN DI HAI...AGAR JALAL KI SHAADI HOGI TOH SIRF AMER KI SHEHZADI SE HOGI...SIRF JODHA SE...

jalal is shocked to hear this...so this is the reason why abbujaan never insisted that i get married till now...he has already fixed my marriage with bade abbu's daughter...JODHA...but where is she...what happened to her...jalal decides that this is the right time to show himself and clear all doubts he has...he comes out from his hiding place and presents himself to the 4 of them...

HUM-AREY BETA AAP,AAP KAB AAYE...HUM TOH APKE BADE ABBU SE GAPPE HANKNE MAIN LAGE THEE,WAQT KA PATA HI NAHI CHALA...

JALAL-ABBUJAAN...YEH JODHA KAUN HAI...

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forest near malwa...

Tak Ta Tak Ta Tak, Tiki Thai
Tak Ta Tak Ta Tak, Mm Hm
San Sanana Nan, San Sanana Nan - 2
Tak Ta Tak Ta Tak, Tiki Thai
Tak Ta Tak Ta Tak, Tak Tak
Tak Ta Tak Ta Tak, Tiki Thai, Taka Tak

(San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan) - 2
Mere Jaisa Dhoondu keLaa Mera Sajan
San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan

a girl clad in a long plain cotton cloth of vibrant red color emerges out of the river,on to the banks...her payal clad feet making melodious music...her beautiful long hair wet and plastered along her lithe form...dark kohl coloring her doe like amber eyes...long lashes...beautiful straight cute nose...lips like two lotus petals...her beauty is such that even the angels in heaven would feel shy to come before her...

Aisa Kahin Koi Nahin - 2
Aisa Ho To Shaayad Main Kar Loon Milan - 2

Jaa Jaa, Jaa Re Pawan, Jaa Re Pawan
San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan

I BGM---

Aakaashe Koi Prem Kavi
Main Uski Likhi Kavita -- music
Oh, Aakaashe Koi Prem Kavi
Main Uski Likhi Kavita
Mere Jaisa Koi Nahin Aaya Jagu Mein Yugu Beeta
Chhoo Na Sake Koi Mujhe - 2
ChhooLe Tho Haai - Lagu Jaaye Aggan - 2

Jaa Jaa Re Jaa, Jaa Re Pawan, Jaa Re Pawan
San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan

she runs through the forest...a wild rose in one hand and a khanjar in the other...no one would dare mess with her...dancing to her tunes she crosses an old rudraksh tree and stops to pay homage...she dosent understand why but her heart always makes her pay respect to hindu culture...being a mughal she still loves the piousness of hinduism...

II - BGM

Yea Yea Yea Yea, Yea Yea Yea Yea

Main Aapi Apni Premika
Main Aapi Apni Saheli - music
Haan, Main Aapi Apni Premika
Main Aapi Apni Saheli
Aur Nahin Koi Apne Jaise, Basu Main Ek Akeli

Main Aavoon Tho, Main Jaavoon Tho - 2
Mujhko Dekhe Jhuke Gagan - 2

Jaa Jaa, Jaa Re Pawan, Jaa Re Pawan
San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan
Mere Jaisa Dhoondu keLaa Mera Sajan
(San Sanana Nana, San Sanana Nan
Jaa Jaa Re Jaa Re Jaa Re, Jaa Re Pawan) - 2

she goes to her secret hiding place and changes into a pair of beautiful mughal style lehenga choli...she knows her mother and father will be worried about her returning late but she had been having so much fun...that she had lost all track of time...suddenly she hears her friends calling out for her...

JAMAIMA KAHAN HO TUM...

Jamaima turns around and comes out of her hiding place and her friends keep staring at her...

TUM KITNI KHOOBSURAT LAG RAHI HO...JALDI CHALO YAHAN SE...KAHAIN KISSI SAINIK NE DEKH LIYA TOH UTHA KAR TUMHE SHEHENSHAH KE HAREM MAIN ZABARDASTI DAAL DIYA JAYEGA...

JAMAIMA---AREY AAISA KAISA DAAL SAKTEIN HAIN HAREM MAIN HUMEIN...HUM KOI KHILONA NAHI HAIN..KOI CHU KAR TOH DIKHAYE...JAAN NIKAL LENGE USKI...

ITNA GURROR,MANTE HAIN KI TUMHE TALWAARBAZI KA SHAUK HAI MAGAR ITNA GURRO ACCHA NAHI JAMAIMA...TUM EK MAMULI LADKI HO KOI SHEHZADI NAHI...

JAMAIMA-NAHI HUM SHEHZADI HAIN...

KYA(her friends start laughing)...YEH KAISE BEHKI BEHKI BAATE KAR RAHI HO..

JAMAIMA-HAAN ,HUM APNE AMMI AUR ABBU KI SHEHZADI HAIN...HAINA...

all of them start laughing...TUMSE TOH KOI BHI BAATON MAIN JEET NAHI SAKTA...

all of them start going back to the city...to their mundane lives...to their family,with one of them not knowing that her life was about to change soon...that she was about to become a part of history...a history that she herself would be making..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i want to be first to comment😆

Ohho BGM best😳😆 asoka song😃

now jalal knows about the word his father gave to bharmal.. so will he go to search jodha😳

ammi abu ki shehzaadi😆 sachhi wali shehzaadi😃

beautifully written anchal.. please unko jaldi milwao..😳 this is very interesting how will the story proceed😃
thanks anchal🤗


Edited by roshaeldsouza91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...toh jalal Jodha milenge kab!!!
nxt update jaldi karna!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Vow!!👏👏👏👏! I realized I missed part 11 ...so I comment for both the part together...1st of all both parts are amazing...I really love this different prem kahani... Jodha's description is amazing..I can't wait for their meeting... Kya intense story hai ... maja aa gaya...Now Jalal knows who is Jodha... Thank U very much for PM...😃😃

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much for pm. otherwise i always miss it. i just read last2-3 parts. it's awesome. i am so excited. when will jodha be back to amer? i cannot wait. plzzz update soon. thx for pm.

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