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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
BK and salima returned to MALWA...MALWA had been gifted by SHEHENSHAH HUMAYUN's father to his cousin brother for his loyalty and support shown by him...he had been crowned shehenshah by his own right,and his riyasat did not fall under the mughal empire...after humayun's fathers death ,the king of malwa still maintained loyalty and support for humayun,but his wife and his son detested humayun;s influence on the king,and in an attempt to gain the throne had the king killed...no one suspected them of foul play bcoz they acted the part of the grieving son and widow to the T,but humayun was no fool...he had started suspecting that something was wrong and he had then send BAIRAM KHAN who was an apprentice with the royal physician of the mughal sultanat ,to work as a physician in malwa and as an under cover agent for humayun...even though BK would send regular reports of all kinds of trechary malwa's queen mother and her son would commit against the mughal sultanat ,humayun was tied by his fathers promise to not take back malwa under any circumstance,but humayun made sure that he made counter measures for all the treachery commited by the new king...ADHAM KHAN being the DAFT person that he was could never get himself out of humayuns mechanisations and MAHAM ANGA was left with a tiny empire and a fool of a son and daughter-in-law...the only source of happiness for her was her granddaughter SHEHZADI RUQAIYYA SULTAN...for her MAHAM ANGA could go to any lengths...


as soon as BK and salima came to malwa,a soldier came to BK with a message that queen mother maham anga wanted to see him urgently...BK made his way to the royal hall where the queen mother sat down with her DIL and the apple of her eye,her granddaughter RUQAIYYA...BK greeted maham anga and javeda...

BK-AAPNE HUMEIN YAAD KIYA MALLIKA-E-AZAM...

MM-JI BAIRAM KHAN ,HAMARI POTI KI TABIYAT THODI NASAAZ HAI,AAPINHE DURUST KARNE KI KOI DAWA DIJEYE..

BK checked ruqaiyya throughly and finally after a few minutes of careful analysis he said..

BK-INHE BUKHAR TOH HAI MALLIKA-E-AZAM,MAGAR GHABRANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI...YEH MAUSAM KI WAJAH SE HAI..MAUSAM BADAL RAHA HAI NA,ISLIYE BACCHON KI TABIYAT KABHI KABHI BIGAD JATI HAI..

MM-KAISE NA GHABRAEIN BAIRAM KHAN,YEH HAMARI AKHON KA NOOR HAI,INHE HUM KUCH BHI HOTA HUA NAHI DEKH SAKTE...TUMHE AULAD NAHI HAI NA,ISLIYE TOH NAHI SAMAJH SAKTE...HUH..

BK-AAP CHINTA NA KAREIN MALLIKA-E-AZAM,HUM ABHI INKE LIYE DAWAI BANWAKAR BHEJ DETE HAIN...INHE HAR ROOZ 2-3 BAAR WOH DAWAI KHILANI HOGI AAPKO...THODI KADWI HOGI DAWAI MAGAR YEH BAHUT FAYADEMAND HAI INKE LIYE...

MM-THEEK HAI AAP BHEJ DIJEYEGA...AB AAP JA SAKTEIN HAIN...

BK-AAP SE EK AUR BAAT KARNI THI MALLIKA-E-AZAM...

MM-BOLIYE...

BK-WOH HUM ISS BAAR ,SALIMA BEGUM KE MAYAKE GAYE THE UNKE SAATH,WAHAN HUMEIN UNKI BHAI KI BETI MILI,ABHI ABHI PAIDA HUI HAI,SALIM ABEGUM KE BHAI TOH AB ISS DUNIYA MAIN NAHI RAHE,TOH HUMNE SOCHA KI KYUN NA HUM USS BACCHI KO PAAL LEIN...HUMEIN BHI KOI WALD-WAALIDAN KEHNE WALAL MIL JAYEGA...

MM-OH,TOH AAPKO BHI AULAD MIL HI GAYI...CHALO ACCHA HAI...AUR YEH SABSE ACCHI BAAT HAI KI WOH EK MUGHAL HAI,KOI NAPAK HINDU NAHI...THEEK HAI...AB AAP JA SAKTEIN HAIN...

BK went back home and told salima what all had happened in the palace...

SB-ALLAH KA LAKH LAKH SUKAR HAI KI MALLIKA-E-AZAM NE HAMARI BAAT PAR YAKEEN KAR LIYA,VARNA WOH HUMARI BACCHI KO JEENE NAHI DETI...MAGAR AB HUMEIN YEH YAAD RAKHNA HAI KI HUM APNI BETI KO ACCHI TARAH PALEIN PURI ISLAMIC TAUR TARIKON SE...

BK-TUM SAHI KEH RAHI HO BEGUM...PATA NAHI ISKE MATA PITA NE ISKA KOI NAAM RAKHA YA NAHI,MAGAR HUM ISSE EK BEHAD KHOOBSURAT NAAM DENGE...

SB-MAGAR HUM ISKA NAAM RAKHEIN KYA...

BK-HUM ISKA NAAM JAMAIMA(lucky) RAKHENGE,YEH HAMARI ZINDAGI MAIN AAYI AUR ROSHNI KARDI...

SB-BEHAD KHOOBSURAT NAAM HAI ,AAJ SE HAMARI BETI KA NAAM JAMAIMA HAI...

both BK and samlima then took jodha in their arms and cuddled her close to their chests...she was send to them by allah and they would love her like their own daughter...they could not thank allah enough for such a precious gift...

IN AMER...

RB and mainavati were distraught..SHAGUNI BAI had clearly told them that they would have to forget about jodha and move on in their lives,when the right time comes they would get their daughter ,but how can parents forget their children and move on...

HUM-BHARMAL AAPKO APNE MANTIYON KO SAB SACH BATANA HOGA...AUR APNE GUNAHAGAR BHAI KO BHI SAZA DENI HOGI...

BHARMAL ALONG WITH HUMAYUN WENT TO THE ROYAL HALL TO ADDRESS HIS MINISTERS AND PUNISH THE CULPRITS...

RB-HUM AAP SAB KO YEH BATANA CAHTE HAIN,KI SHAGUNI BAI KE KAHE ANUSAAR HAMARI BETI ,AAPKI RAJKUMARI JODHA BILKUL THEEK HAI...

everyone let out a relieved sigh,except devendra and vimla...

MIN-TOH AB HUM RAJKUMARI KO KAB DHOONDNE JAYENGE MAHARAJ...

BHARMAL COULD NOT TELL THEM HOW HELPLESS HER FELT AS A FATHER...

HUM-SHAGUNI BAI NE KAHA HAI KI AAP SAB KO SHEHZADI JODHA KO KUCH SAMAY KE LIYE APNE AAP SE DUR RAKHNA HOGA..WOH ABHI HAMARE SAATH NAHI REH SAKTI HAIN..YEH UNKI ZINDAGI KE LIYE KHATARNAK HAI...ABHI WOH JAHAN PAR BHI HAIN BILKUL THEEK HAIN..SAMAY AANE PAR WOH KHUD HUM SAB KO MIL JAYENGI...

RDEVENDRA AND VIMLA STARTED LAUGHING LIKE MANIACS...EVERYONE LOOKED AT THEM WITH DISGUST...BHARMAL HAD ,HAD ENOUGH...

RB-BAS DEVENDRA...TUMHE KYA LAGTA HAI,HAMARI BETI HUMEIN VAPAS NAHI MILEGI...HUMEIN AMBEY MAA PAR PURA BHAROSA HAI..TUM JAISA DUSHT KITNA BHI PRAYAS KAR LE,HAMARI BETI KO HUMSE ALAG NAHI KAR SAKTA...HUMNE YEH FAISLA KAR LIYA HAI ,HUM TUMHE APNI PRAJA KO SAUMP DENGE,WOH TUMHARA INSAAF KARENGI...JITNI TAKLEEF TUMNE HUMEIN POHCHAYI HAI UTNI HI UN LOGON KO BHI...AB APNI MAUT KE LIYE TAYAR HO JAO TUM DONON...AUR RAJ MATA AAP...HAMARI SANSKRITI MAIN MAA KO BHAGWAN MANA JATA HAI ISLIYE HUM APKO DAND NAHI DE SAKTE,PARANTU HUM YEH PRATIGYA LETE HAIN KI JAB TAK HAMRI BETI,AMER KI RAJKUMARI HUMEIN VAPAS NAHI MIL JATI HUM APKA CEHRA BHI NAHI DEKENGE...AAPSE MILNE BHI NAHI AAYENGE...MAR GAYI AAP HAMARE LIYE...




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Posted: 12 years ago
wwoowww...its awesome yaar...and bharmal's promise...
superbb going dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very Nice...Ab Jodha jaldi se badi ho jaaye...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Anchal,This one was Shocking yaar!!😲MA is Queen of BK's State & She is Ruqu's Grandmom.😲 😲 😲OMG She loves Ruqu more than anything and Now I'm really scared for My Jodha 😔 😭MA is gonna be the Biggest Threat for Akdha bcoz of Ruqu😡 😭And She even hates Hindus,Only accepted what BK said thinking She is Mughal!!😡 Hate her Really,Plz Kill Her Soon.😆Nice New Name given to Jodha by BK and Salima.😃But I love Jodha more.😆Hope She gets her real name soon.😳Love BK-Salima,Their Love-story and Their Love for Jodha.❤️Bharmal did good by Giving Rajendra and Vimla Those Two Ba***ds😡to the Praja of Amer.😃And Even took vow of not even seeing his mother's face till Jodha come😲Hawww That's Really a Tough descision by him. 😭 😭Ok Now I'm just waiting for Akdha getting big.I hope You'll give leap soon.I'm expecting it in Next Part Only.😳 😆Pls Continue Soon.😊 😳 😳Thanks for the PM.🤗
Edited by --Janvie-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
AK..MA..Ruquya sare ek hi jagah...wo bhi MA as a queen 😲
jodha's new name jamaima...
nice name...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice updt dear...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
vow!!! What a different story... Maham loves Ruku...oh my god!!!! Save my Jodha please!!!!!!!
Love it!!!! Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11
16 YEARS LATER...

A lot had changed in the past 16 years...bharmal and mainavati had 2 more children-sujamal and sukanya...sujamal was born a year after jodha had been lost to them and sukanya after 5 years...bharmal had aged overnight ...even though he was aptly taking care of his kingdom,his people and his kingdom was flourishing but the helpless father in him cursed himself everyday...he cursed himself for not being able to protect his daughter...his jodha...had she been with them today he would have been making arrangements for her and jalal's wedding...

but,wedding preperations were being made...after all this was the first wedding that was happening in amer after a long time...bharmal and mainavati were eagerly waiting for the wedding party to arrive...elephants were placed at the entrance of the palace gates to welcome the guests with gulab jal and itar...women thronged the either sides ready to welcome the guests with roses and marigold...

atlast the wedding party had entered the palace grounds...bharmal and mainavati went to welcome there soon to be relatives...mainavati greeted her samdhi and samdhan with tilaks and did arti for them,there was another person in the wedding procession who longed to hug and take blessings from mainavati...his badi maa might be ignoring him but jalal was a very determined young fellow...he bend down and touched mainavatis feet and hugged her out of immense love and respect..

MN-JALAL HUMEIN AAPSE BAAT NAHI KARNI HAI,AAP AB AA RAHE HAIN...

JALAL-BADI AMMI HUMEIN MUAFF KAR DIJEYE NA...HUM TOH PEHLE HI AANA CAHTE THEE MAGAR ABAAJAAN HAIN NA...UNHONE KAHA KI BEHEN KE SASURAL ITNI JALDI NAHI JATE...

bharmal turned to humayun and asked him to explain himself...

RB-YEH KYA HAI HUMAYUN,TUM HAMARE BETE KO AANE SE ROK RAHE THEE.

HUM-AREY BHARMAL HUMEIN TOH SIRF ITNA KAHA KI BEHEN KI DOLI LEKE JANA BHAI KE LIYE BAHUT BADI BAAT HAI...GALAT KAHA KYA HUMNE...

the crown prince of amer sujamal and the princess of the mughal sultanat bakshi bano had fallen in love with each other...sujamal was enchanted with her beauty while bakshi had never seen a braver warrior...sujamal had saved bakshi once from a gang of dacoits when the naughty princess had run away from home with her bandis to go see a mela near agra...the dacoits learning of her identity had tried to kidnape her but got slautered at the hands of the ameri prince...sujamal had safely dropped bakshi back to the palace where he himself was a guest for a few days...from that day onwards bakshi and sujamal had started feeling for each other...there love could not be hidden for long and the mughals were not to happy about this...they had filled jalal's ears against sujamal and baks his relation and since humayun was out for some political reasons it had all come down to jalal to take a stand now...jalal was at first really surprised that bakshi would dare to go and find a hindu for herself but he had known sujamal for the longest time...sujamal was like his younger brother...they had their share of fights and ego tussels also but jalal knew at the end of the day sujamal was a gem of a person...and his little sister going to his bade abu and badi ammi's place...what could be better but he had waited for humayun to come back from his tour and when humayun was made aware of the situation he lost no time in imforming bharmal of the same and both sat down to think of a solution to this...

RB-HUMEYUN JAB HUM APNI BETI APKO DENE KA FAISLA LE SAKTE HAIN TOH BAKSHI AUR SUJAMAL KE RISHTE SE BHI HUMEIN KOI AITRAAZ NAHI HAI...

HUM-HUMEIN APSE YEHI UMEED THI BHARMAL...AB BAS JALD SE JALD HUMEIN SUJAMAL AUR BAKSHI KA NIKAAH KARVA DENA CAHIYE...

sujamal and bakshi were really lucky...jalal single handedly cut down all protests against this marriage...his sister was going to a very loving family...and as far as religion was concerned sujamal and his bade abbu had no problem with bakshi practicing islam...what more could they want...the wedding date was set to the earliest and the venue was fixed as amer...

a small little sukanya came running to jalal,jalal picked her in his arms and asked her most lovingly...

JALAL-KYA BAAT HAI CHOTI RAJKUMARI...KUCH CAHIYE AAPKO..

SUKU-BHAIJAAN AAP LOG YAHAN KYUN KHADE HAIN...BHABHISA KO ANDAR LAEYE NA...BHAISA KAB SE INTEZAAR KAR RAHE HAIN...

everyone started laughing...sujamal was one baichain atma...humayun had thought bakshi to be very lucky to get a husband like sujamal who loved her with his whole being...he would be with her through thick and thin...if only his jalal could be so lucky...if only jodha would be here...

everyone entered the palace...the bride was taken to a secluded corner of the palace to a beautiful room where she would stay till the wedding got over...she was not allowed to meet the groom and even though the groom had protested quiet vehemently no one was listening to him...

it was night time already...jalal was in his room trying to sleep...after two days was his sisters wedding...he was remembering all the memories he had with bakshi...how she used to trouble him to no end,how she used to take away his shamsheer and hide it when he would insist on practicing rather than playing with her...how she used to make fake food and present it to him saying she has cooked it for him...they would all be going back to agra after 3 days but bakshi would not be with them...he knew she would be happy but his heart was heavy...he wanted to see her before going to bed...he decided to go to her room and while passing the corridor he heard his parents and his badi ammi and bade abbu sitting on the terrace discussing something...he felt like they would always keep secrets from him but was never able to find out,now was his chance...he inched cloder to hear them without interruptions...

HUM-YAKEEN NAHI HOTA 16 SAAL HO CHUKE HAIN,AAJ HI KE DIN WOH MANHUS SAAZISH GHATI THI...

RB-HAAN HUMAYUN...HUMEIN TOH AB BHI LAGTA HAI KI WOH YAHIN KAHIN HAIN...ABHI KAHIN SE AAYEGI AUR BAPUSA KEH KAR HAMARE GALE LAG JAYEGI...

JALAL(thinking)-YEH KISSI BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN...SUKANYA TOH YAHIN HAIN..

MN-JAANE KAHAN HOGI MARI LADLI...

HB-SHAGUNI BAI NE TOH KAHA THA 16 SAAL INTEZAAR KARO...AB AUR KITNA WAQT INTEZAAR KARNA HOGA HUMEIN...

RB-BHABHIJAAN SHAGUNIBAI BHI PATA NAHI KAHAN GAYAB HO GAYI USS DIN KE BAAD SE...HUMNE BAHUT DHOONDA MAGAR UNKA KOI AATA PATA NAHI...

JALAL-YEH SHAGUNI BAI KAUN HAI...

MN-AUR ZARA JALAL KA TOH SOCHO...KAB TAK HUM USSKE SAATH AAISA KARENGE...

jalal for alerted...he knew they were talking about that one thing he wanted to hear the most ...his heart started racing...will i get to know what it is exactly...

MN-BHAISA AB TOH AAP JALAL KI SHAADI KE BARE MAIN SOCHIYE...KAB TAK JALAL SHAADI NAHI KAREGA...

HUM-NAHI BHABHIJAAN...HUMNE KASAM KHAI HAI...JALAL KA NIKAAH HOGA TOH USSI SE HOGA...

MN-AUR AGAR WOH NAHI MILI TOH...AGAR MARI JODHA NAHI MILI TOH...

JALAL-JODHAAA

to be continue soon...ok guyz now all of them r grown up...this chapter was for jalal and the gang,next will intoduce jodha...

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Posted: 11 years ago
heyy bhaggu...jalal ko jaaldi se uski jodha se mila de..gudgoing yar, keep it up..👏
nd plz pm me nxt tym
Edited by shreya931 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
after 16 yrs...
sujamal aur bakshi bano ki shadi...
finally jajal ne apni jodha ka naam suna...
loved it...

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