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Posted: 11 years ago
Aanchal awesome yaar ...
I hope nothing happens to Jodha and I hope that no MU will happen between the Mughals and Rajputs ...
Plz update part c soon ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome so far...Reading the next part now😛😛😛

Edited by Az3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6(c)
mainavati was in a state of shock...jodha had been kidnapped...someone had dared to hurt the begum of shehenshah-e-hind and kidnap the princess of amer,that too in broad daylight...and from the palace itself...mainavati could not fantom who would even think of commiting this crime...her in-laws were here,the guards were everywhere,there were maids all around,YET...

MN-hamida dhyaan se yaad karo,tumne kissi ko dekha kya...kaun tha wahan.

HB-nahi maina,tumhare jane ke baad hum bhi jodha ko lekar tumhare hojre ki taraf ja rahe the,jodha uthi toh hum usse lori gakar sulane ki koshish kar rahe thee,achanak kissi ne hamara mooh daba diya,humne chudane ki liye cheekhne ki koshish bhi ki magar wahan na koi sipahi aur na hi koi bandhi thi...phit usne humen kuch sunghaya aur hum behosh hone lage,magar woh hamare haaton se jodha ko le gaya maina...

MN(shouts)-DASI JALDI ANDAR AAO,TUM SAB KAHAN MAR GAYE THEE ,KYUN NAHI THEE YAHAN PAR HAMIDA BEGUM AUR RAJKUMARI KE PASS.

DASI-JI MAHARANI HUMEIN AAPKI DEVRANIJI NE BULAYA THA,UNHONE KAHA KI UNHE KUCH ZAROORI KAAM HAI,HUMNE UNSE YEH BHI KAHA THA KI HUMEIN AAPNE YAHAN RAJKUMARI JI KE SAATH REHNE KO KAHA HAI MAGAR WOH NAHI MANI AUR HUMEIN JAANA PADA.

MN-TUM SAB SIPAHIYON KO EKATHA HONE KO KAHO...HUM ABHI UNSE BAAT KARNA CAHTEIN HAIN...

all the soldiers gather in the ground below the palace waiting to be addresses by their queen,this was the first time a female from the royal family that too the queen was about to address them.they never that something big must have happened,that is why the soldiers were being addresses by their queen and not some male member of the royal family,nor some minister...mainavati stepped onto the balcony and looked down on the army gathered there...

MN-HUMEIN YEH KEHTE HUE BAHUT TAKLEEF HO RAHI HAI KI AAP SAB KE HOTE HUI AAJ HAMARE HI GHAR SE HAMARI KI BETI KA APHARAN HO GAYA HAI...

ALL THE SOLDIERS WERE SHOCKED,RAJKUMARI JODHA HAD BEEN KIDNAPPED,THEY KNEW SOMETHING BIG HAD HAPPENED,BUT NEVER KNEW IT WAS THIS BIG.

MN-RAJA BHARMAL BAHAR GAYE HUI HAIN,UNKI GAIRHAZARI MAIN HAMARI JODHA KO KISSI NE HUMSE ALAG KARNA KA PAAP KIYA HAI,AAP SAB KO APKE AMER KI KASAM ,AAP SAB HAMARI BACCHI KO DHOON KAR LAEYE HAMARE PASS...WOH SIRF HAMRI BETI NAHI HAI AAPKI RAJKUMARI BHI HAI...AAPKO AMBE MAA KI KASAM,HAMARI BETI KA APHARAN KARNE WALA HUMEIN HAMARE SAMNE CAHIYE...CAHE KUCH BHI HO JAYE...JAEYE AAP SAB AUR TABHI AANA JAB RAJKUMARI KI YA UNKI KOI KHABAR MILE AAPKO...

mainavati came back to her room and called the guards who were stationed in the corridor around her room..

MN-AAPKE HOTE HUE YEH DUSAHAS KARNE KI HIMMAT KAISE HUI KISSI KI...

GUARDS-MAHARISA,HUM SAB KO BOLA GAYA THA KI HAMARI ZARORRAT HAI AAPKE DEVARSA KO,HUMEIN JANA PADA,KYUNKI WOH BAHUT KRODHIT HO GAYE THEE...

MN-AUR UNHONE AAPKO KAUNSA KAAAM SAUMPA.

GUARDS-NHE KAMRE KE BAHAR JO BAAG HAI USSE SAAF KARNE KA...JAB HUMNE UNHE KAHA KI RAJKUMARISA AKELI HAIN TOH UNHONE HUMSE KAHA KI WOH WAHAN DURSE GUARDS KO BHEJ DENGE...

MN-HUMNE TUM SAB KO MEHEL KE CHARO TARAF DHOONDNE KO KAHA THA,HAMRI BETI KE BAARE MAIN PATA LAGANE KO KAHA THA...HUM JAANNA CAHTEIN HAIN KI TUM SAB KYA KHABAR LAYE HO..

GUARDS-MAHARANISA RAJKUMARI MEHEL MAIN KAHAIN NAHI HAIN,PARANTU HUMNE MEHEL KE PEECHE KI DEEWAR PAR KISSI KO CADTE DEKHA THA..HAMRE POOCHNE PAR WOH BHAG GAYA,ISSE PEHLE KI HUM USKA PEECHA KARTE AAPKE DEVARSA NE HUMEIN PHIR SE BULA LIYA..

mainavati though in a bad state could make out what had played right under her nose.her family had not wanted jodha to get married to jalal,and for that they used such a cheap trick...she swore if something happened to her daughter she would kill the conspirators with her own hands...a dasi came to inform mainavati and hamida that raja bharmal and shehenshah humayun had come back from their trip and had entered the palace...mainavati and hamida ran to meet their husbands..bharmal and humayun were surprised to see very less soldiers in the palace...the moment they entered the palce they saw mainavati and hamida running towards them..bharmal could make out that all was not well in the palace...

RB-MAHARANI MAINAVATI YEH KYA,,AAP AAISE HUMSE MILNE KYUN AAYI HAIN...HUM TOH AAPKE PASS HI AA RAHE THE .

MN-GAZAB HO GAYA MAHARJ(she started crying loudly)

HUM-KYA HUA HAI BHAABHI JAAN,AAP BHI RO RAHIN HAIN AUR HAMIDA BEGUM BHI...

MN-MAHARAJ,AAPKI BETI...

RB-KYA HUA MAINAVATI,JODHA THEEK TOH HAI NA...

MN(shakes her head indicating NO)

RB-SAAF SAAF BOLO MAINAVATI,KYA HUA HAI JODHA KO..

MN-JODHA KO KOI LE GAYA MAHARAJ..

HUM,RB-KYAAA?

in another corner of the palace bharmals family was having a gala time celebrating their victory

"AB DEKHTEIN HAIN BHARMAL APNI BETI KI SHAADI USS JALAL SE KAISE KARTA HAI,JAB JODHA HI NAHI RAHEGI TOH JALAL SHAADI KISSI KAREGA...HAHAHAHAHA

MAGAR AGAR MAHARAJ KO PATA CHAL GAYA KI HUMNE HI RAJKUMARI KA APHARAN KARVAYA HAI TOH WOH HUMEIN JEENE NAHI DENGE,MARVA DALENGE HUMEIN.

NAHI KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTA WOH,MAASA HAMARE SAATH HAI,WOH HUMEIN KUCH NAHI HONE DEGI,BAS AB JODHA KI MAUT KA INTEZAR HAI.

AAP USSE MARNA KYUN CAHTEIN HAIN,USSE KISSI KO DE BHI TOH SAKTEIN HAIN.

NAHI ,BHARMAL USSE KABHI BHI DHOOND SAKTA HAI,TAB HUM KYA KARENGE...YEH BHARMAL KI NADANI KI SAZA MILI HAI USKI BETI KO,KISNE KAHA THA KI MUGHAL KE SAATH RISHTA TAY KARDO...HAMARI ITNI BEZZATI HUI HAI HAMARE SAMAJ MAIN,ISKI SAZA TOH USSE MIL KAR RAHEGI..."

at the entrance

RB-YEH KYA KEH RAHI HO MAINAVATI,JODHA KA APHARAN,WOH BHI MEHEL SE,KAUN ITNI GUSTAKHI KAR SAKTA HAI...

MN-HUM YAKEEN SE TOH NAHI KEH SAKTE MAHARAJ PARANTU HUMEIN LAGTA HAI KI HUM JANTEIN HAIN YEH GIRI HUI HARKAT KISNE KI HAI.

RB-BATAO HUMEIN WOH KAUN HAI

MN-AAPKE CHOTE BHAI NA MAHARAJ..

RB-KYAAA?

next part 6(d) coming up soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome upt
i think jallal will find out where jodha is
Az3003 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved... Gonna read and review chapter 6 (a)(b)(c) now!!😛 - Unreserved... Aanchal my Darling I just read all three parts of chapter 6 in one sitting and I was riveted! It was suspenseful and touching and very well-written!!!👏👏👏 This is one of the best stories I have read in a while and I am loving this to bits!! I am so glad there was no misunderstanding between Hamida and Mainavati and I hope that Jodha is found soon!!😭😭😭
Thank you for this wonderful story but suspense chor dijiye na?? Update soon!! I can't get enough of this story😃😃😃❤️🤗
Edited by Az3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Update plz😛😛😛

Edited by Az3003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing yar !👏👏👏 Awesome part ! Please jaldi jaldi Bharmal family ka exposure kar wao...😆😆 Loving your story to core My aanchal darling!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

i will update soon guys.😊


will be waiting dear...😃😃
VincyAnne thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow so intense ...
I hope they save Jodha before she gets killed ...
Will be waiting for the update aanchal dear ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6(d)

MN-haan maharaj ,hum sach keh rahe hain...

mainavati went on to explain everything to bharmal and human,how hamida was attacked,how jodha was taken away,how the dasi's and the guards were called away,how mainavati herself had been called by her MIL to discuss about jodha and jalal's relation...

MN-humein lagta hai ki rajvanshiyon ke dusmani mitane ke liye aapke bhai ne yeh kiya hai maharaj...hamari beti ko agvah karwa liya...bechari hamari choti si jodha,ab kya hoga maharaj...

HUM-aap chinta mat karo bhabhijaan,hum jodha ko dhoond lenge...

HB-haan maina,mujhe yakeen hai ki bhaijaan aur jalal ke abba jodha beti ko zaroor dhoond lenge...

RB-haan,magar usse pehle humein kissi se hisaab chukta karna hai...

BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN ALONG WITH HAMIDA AND MAINAVATI GO TO FIND RAJENDRA AND VIMLA(BHARMALS YOUNGER BROTHER AND HIS WIFE).THEY WERE WITH THEIR MOTHER..BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN COME BARGING INSIDE HER HIGHNESSES ROOM TO FIND RAJENDRA AND VIMLA SITTING AND ENJOYING A CUP OF TEA EACH.

RB-MERI BETI KAHAN HAI RAJENDRA..

RAJENDRA WAS DUMBSTRUCK FOR A MOMENT,HE HAD THOUGHT THA BHARMAL WOULD NOT FIGURE OUT THINGS SO SOON,AND HE WOULD GET TIME TO PIN THIS ON HUMAYUN..HE STARTED STAMMERING A BIT..

RAJ-BHAISA,HUMEIN KYA PATA JO-JO-JODHA KAHAN HAI..YAHIN KAHAIN HOGI.

BHARMAL LOOKED AT HIS MOTHER,HER EYES WERE DOWNCAST,HE KNEW THAT SHE WAS ALSO A PART OF THIS CONSPIRACY...

RB-SACH BATAO RAJENDRA HAMARI BETI KAHAN HAI,HUM JANTE HAIN KI TUMNE HI USSE AGWAH KARVAYA HAI,TAKI HUM USKA VIVAAH JALAL SE NA KAR SAKEIN...

RAJ-NAHI BHAISA AAP GALAT SOCH RAHEIN HAI,BHALA HUM AAISA KYUN KAREINGE,JODHA HAMARI BHI TOH BETI HAI..

MN-JHOOTH,AGAR AAISA HOTA TOH AP ITNA GHINOONI CHAAL NAHI CHALTE DEVARJI...

VIMLA-NAHI BHAISA AAP...

RB(loudly)-BAS,AB EK AUR JHOOTH NAHI...HUM SAB JANTE HAIN,KYUN JODHA AUR HAMIDA BHABHIJAAN KE PASS DASI AUR SIPAHI NAHI THEE,KYUN USSI WAQT VAHAN KOI NAHI THA,JAB WOH DONO AKELE THEE,MEHEL MAIN KISSI KI MADAD KE BAGAIR KOI PRAVESH NAHI KAR SAKTA,ISKE BAVJOOD KISSI NE HAMARI BETI KO MEHEL SE HI AGVAAH KAR LIYA HAI...

RAJ- TOH AAP APNE DOST SE KYUN NAHI POOCHTE KI JODHA KAHAN HAIN,HUMEIN TOH LAGTA HAI KI INHONE HI HAMARI RAJKUMARI KO AGVAAH KIYA HAI...

VIMLA-HAAN,HO SAKTA HAI KI YEH NAHI CAHTE KI JODHA KI SHAADI INKE BETE SE HO,ISLIYE...

RAJ-HAAN BHAISA INSE POOCHIYE YEH SAB KYA HAI,JODHA KAHAN HAI...BOLIYE HUMAYUN,HAMARI JODHA KAHAN HAI...

everyone is shocked,humayun cant believe they would try to pin it on him,hamida and mainavati had tears in their eyes...humayun looked at bharmal and started to tell him something when bharmal held up his hand to stop him...rajendra and vimla were very happy,now they thought that this friendship will finally be over...bharmal will never trust humayun again..all will be well...BUT...

BHARMAL WALKED UP TO RAJENDRA AND GAVE HIM A RESOUNDING SLAP..RAJENDRA FELL DOWN AND HELD HIS CHEEK,VIMLA RUSHED TO HIM AND MASSA WAS SHOCKED TO SEE ALL THAT HAD UNFOLDED IN FRONT OF HER EYES...BHARMAL PICKED UP RAJENDRA AND SLAPPED HIM AGAIN...

RB-HUMAYUN NAHI SHEHENSHAH-E-HIND BOLO RAJENDRA,TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI HAMARE DOST PAR ITNA GHATIYA ILZAAM LAGANE KI...TUM JANTE NAHI HO KYA KI HUMAYUN HAMARE LIYE APNI JAAN BHI DE SAKTEIN HAIN...JIS INSAAN SE HUMEIN ITNA APNAPAN MILA HAI WOH HAMARI BETI KO AHVAAH KARENGE..AAISA SOCHNE KI TUMHARI HIMAAT KAISE HUI...

RAJ(in a psycotic state)-AUR APKI HIMMAT KAISE HUI YEH SOCHNEKI KI HUM LOG JODHA KI SHAADI INKE BETE ,EK MUGHAL SE HONE DENGE,HAHAAHHAHAHAHHA...AGVAAH KARVA LIYA HUMNE AAPKI JODHA KO...AB USKI SHAADI USS JALAL SE KABHI NAHI HOGI,AUR DEKHNA HUM AAPKO BHI KHATAM KAR DENGE,PHIR HUM BAITHENGE RAH GADI PAR,HAHAHAHAHAHA

THIS TIME MAASA COMES FORWARD AND SLAP RAJENDRA...

MAASA-HUMEIN TOH LAGA THA KI HUM APNI AMER KI IZZAT BACHANE KE LIYE TUMHARA SAATH DEIN RAHE HAIN,PAR CHEE,TUM ITNE BURE INSAAN HO YEH HUMEIN ABHI PATA CHALA...BHARMAL HUMEIN MAAF KARDO,HUM TUMHE BATATE HAIN KI JODHA KAHAN HAI...

RAJ-BATA BHI DOGI TOH KUCH HONE WALA NAHI HAI MAASA,JODHA KAUNSA ZINDA BACHEGI...

RB&HUM(LOUDLY)-RAJENDRA...

RAJ(LOUDLY)-HAHAHHAHAHAH,HUMNE USSE MARNE KA HUKUM DIYA HAIWOH KITNI MANHOOS HAI,USKE AATE HI HAMARE AMER KA NAAM INN HUGHLON SE JUD GAYA,AB HUM USSE ZINDA NAHI CHODENGE...

RB-BATA KAHAN CHUPAYA HAI JODHA KO...

RA-CHUPAYA THA,YEH JO MAASA HAIN NA,HUMEIN PATA THA PIGHAL JAYENGI,ISLIYE HUMNE APNE AADMI KO HUKUM DIYA KI WOH USSE MAAR DALE,HAHAHAHAHAH

just then a soldier comes to bharmal and tells him that they have spotted a man carrying a child and going towards the banks of river sabi,the child was wrapped up in a saffron silk cloth which looked very expensive...

RB-JALDI JAO AUR USS AADMI KO PAKDO...

SIPAHI-HUMNE USSE PAKADNE KI KOSHISH KI MAHARAJ,PARANTU WOH BHAG GAYA...

BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN BOTH RUSHED TO THAT PLACE ON THEIR HORSES,THE SOLDIERS WERE ALREADY THERE,BUT THE MAN COULD NOT BE FOUND...

RB-CHARO AUR DHYAAN SE DEKHO,YAHIN KAHAIN HOGA...

HUM-NADI KE AAS PASS BHI DEKHO...

the man in question was about to kill jodha when he had been spotted by the ameeri soldiers,to save himself he had to hide with jodha and wait for a perfect oppourtunity to finish off his work...it was afternoon now,he decided to wait till night...

humayun and bharmal decided to send some of the soldiers to other parts of his kingdom to find out about jodha,but they stayed on...

HUM-CHINTA MAT KARO BHARMAL,JODHA KO KUCH NAHI HOGA...

RB-AGAR MERI BETI KO KUCH BHI HUA NA HUMAYUN,MAIN RAJENDRA KI JAAN LE LUNGA...

just then a soldier spotted the same man they had seen earlier emerging from the river bank empty handed..they rushed to tell their maharaja..the soldiers had caught the man when bharmal and humayun rushed to the spot to question him..

RB-KAHAN HAI HAMARI BETI...KYA KIYA TUMNE USKE SAATH..

HUM-BOLO VARNA TUMHARI ZINDAGI KHATAM KAR DENGE...

MAN-AREY WAAH AAP SHEHEHSHAH-E-HIND HAIN NA,AAPKI AUR HAMARE MAHARAJ KI DOSTI KE KAFI KISSE SUNEIN HAIN,AAJ DEKH BHI LIYA...MAGAR AB AAP KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTE...

RB-KYA...

MAN-HAAN,AB AAPKO APKI BETI KABHI NAHI MILEGI MAHARAJ...

HUM-KYA BAKWAAS KAR RAHE HO...KYA KIYA TUMNE JODHA KE SAATH...

MAN-YEH NAHI DEKH RAHEIN HAIN AAP,AAPKI BETI KO MAINE ISMAIN BAHA DIYA HAI,HAHAHAHAHAHA

BOTH BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN RUDHED TO THE BANKS OF THE RIVER...THERE A LONG WAY FURTHER IN THE RIVER THEY COULD GLIMPS A BASKET FLOSTING ON THE RIVER WITH A SAFROM CLOTH TIED ON IT...

BHARMAL AND HUMAYUN BOTH FELL ON THEIR KNEES AND CRIED OUT LOUDLY-JODHAAA...

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