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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
what will happend to jodha???
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7
bharmal and humayun returned back with the soldiers...mainavati spotted them from the terrace and rushed to meet them..

MN-KYA HUA MAHARAJ,KAHAN HAIN HAMARI BETI..

hamida,who was right behind mainavati came to humayun

HB-AAP KUCH BOLTE KYUN NAHI,KAHAN HAI JODHA...

bharmal and humayun had tears in their eyes...

FLASHBACK...

bharmal and humayun rushed to the river bank only to see a basket with a saffron cloth tied to it floating away...

they fell on their knees and shouted"JODHAAA"

meanwhile the soldiers had caught the man,and brought in in front of bharmal...the general rushed to bharmal and asked him what is supposed to be done now..

RB-YAHAN KA KONA KONA CHAN MARO,WOH TOKDI KAHIN NA KAHIN TOH RUKEGI NA..HUMEIN HAMARI BETI VAPAS CAHIYE...

MAN-AAP KUCH BHI KARLO MAHARAJ,RAJKUMARI JODHA ZINDA NAHI BACHEGI.HUMNE UNHE ZEHER KHILA DIYA HAI...HAHAHAHAHA...UNKE PASS MUSHKIL SE 2 GHANTE BACHHE HAIN.

humayun walked up to the man and beheaded him within no time...he went back to bharmal and told him that they needed to rush now if they wanted to save jodha...bharmal was in a state of shock...he couldnt believe that someone would even think of harming a small little baby..humayun could see his friend was not in a state to think properly,he decided to take matters in his hand,addressing the ameeri army he said

"AAP SAB KE PASS WAQT BAHUT KAM HAI...HUMEIN HAMARI RAJKUMARI KISSI BHI KEEMAT PAR SAHI SALAMAT VAPAS CAHIYE...YEH KISSI JUNG SE KAM NAHI HAI...AAJ AAPKO APNE MAHARAJ AUR MAHARNI KI ZINDAGI KO BACHANA HAI,APNI RAJKUMARI KO..JAEYE AUR RAJKUMARI KO DHOONDH KARHI VAPAS AANA"

humayun came back to bharmal and forced him to get out of his shocked state...

HUM-BHARMAL,TUMHE HO KYA GAYA HAI,UTHO,JODHA KO HAMARI ZAROORAT HAI..

bharmal finally looks up at humayun with tears falling down his face..

RB-AGAR MERI BETI KO KUCH HO GAYA HUMAYUN ...

HUM-KUCH NAHI HOGA JODHA KO...

both humayun and bharmal get on their horses and ride in the direction they had seen the basket float ..for hours the soldiers kept on looking for their rajkumari,bharmal and humayun were hoping against hope that even now jodha would be ok,nothing would happen to her,finally the general of the ameeri army came back to bharmal...

"HUMEIN KSHAMA KAR DIJEYE MAHARAJ,PARANTU RAJKUMARI KA KAHIN KUCH PATA NAHI CHALA...HUMNE PURI JAGAH DEKH LIYE,MAGAR WOH TOKDI KAHAN GAYAB HO GAYI HUMEIN KUCH NAHI PATA"...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

MAINAVATI could not take it anymore and crumbled down in a dead faint.she was caught by hamida and her dasi's who were ordered to take her back to her chamber.hamida turned to face bharmal...

HB-"AAPKE KEHNE KA KYA MATLAB HAI BHAIJAAN,HAMARI JODHA KO AAP DHOOND NAHI PAYE,YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI"

HUM-"AAP INKI HALAT DEKH RAHI HAIN NA HAMIDA,PHIR BHI YEH SAWAAL"

HB-"HAAN,HUMEIN HAQ HAI YEH SAWAAL KARNE KA,AAPNE MAINA KI HALAT NAHI DEKHI KYA...YEH MAHARAJ HAIN AMER KE ,YEH KAISE NAHI DHOOND PAYE APNI BETI KO"

HUM-"KYUNKI JODHA JIS TOKDI MAIN THI WOH HAMARE DHOONDTE DHOONDTE GAYAB HO GAYI"

HB-"KYA YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI"...

SOMEWHERE VERY CLOSE TO AMER...

a man came running to his wife,very happy.the smile was not leaving his face...he is BAIRAM KHAN the royal physician of a small mughal sultanate,the sultanat of the distant cousin of shehenshah humayun,who had been given a seperate small kingdom to rule because humayun was very very impressed by his loyalty..

BK-SALIMA ,SALIMA DEKHO ...JALDI BAHAR AAO,YEH DEKHO ALLAH NE HAMARI DUA SUN LI...

SB-YEH AAP KYA KEH RAHE HAIN,AUR YEH KYA HAI AAPKE HAATON MAIN...

BK-DEKHO TOH SAHI ,KHUDA NE HUMNE KITNA BADA TOHFA DIYA HAI.

salima came to BK and peeped into the basket that he was carrying...inside was the most gorgeous baby girl wrapped up in a saffron silk cloth,a cloth that had the ameeri emblem engarved on it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this is amazing update!!! It was so wonderful👏👏👏... But poor Jodha😭😭😭... Bharmal must have been devastated😭😭😭 Hope Jodha returns to them soon... So excited😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesme update...nw what she wil become a mughal...😕...and den jalal ka kiya hoga😊😆...so much desperate to knw d further story
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope u guyz r liking the concept,its very different from the serial or any other story but its just a diff and a more passionate take on JODHA-AKBAR.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update liked the way of story tranformation
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Posted: 12 years ago
VERY NICE...AWESOME YAAR...👏👏👏
⭐️⭐️TOOO NICEEE...⭐️⭐️
HEY BT PLZ NA JODHA KO JALDI WAPAS LE AAONA...😭😭😃


PLZ CONTINUE SOON..😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ...
I wonder what's gonna happen to Jodha soon ... Will she go back to her parents ...
Keep up the good work dear ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i had updated a part 8 but unfortunately due to slow net connection it could not be posted..will update one later.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7(b)
mainavati woke up shivering and sweating..she could not and would not believe that something had happened to her daughter...never had she thought that one day she will loose her daughter like this..she needed answers,and she needed answers RIGHT NOW..

just as mainavati was about to get up from bed ,hamida came in and rushed to her side..

HB-MAINA,LETI RAHO,TUMHARI TABIYAT AUR BIGAD JAYEGI.

MN-NAHI HAMIDA HUMEIN MAHARAJ SE MILNA HAI,ABHI ISSI WAQT...

mainavati pushed herself from the bed and rushed to meet bharmal and humayun who were at this moment in the royal hall,along with the ministers and the culprits..jalal was asleep in mainavatis room..from morning he was looking for jodha but no one was giving him a clear answer as to her whereabout,finally he got really tired and decided to ask his badi ammi abt jodha,just as he was abt to go to her,he found her being carried to her room,she was unconscious...now jalal was very close to mainavati,and seeing her in this condition was too much for him..he got really worried and sat next to her and started calling out to her...

"BADI AMMI ANKHEIN KHOLIYE NA,KYA HUA AAPKO"

after sometime when mainavati did not get up jalal also went off to sleep right next to her,he was really exhausted,the last thing on his mind was that he needed to find out where jodha was when he gets up..

mainavati and hamida reached the royal hall,they stayed behind the curtains with the rest of the ladies and looked down on the proceedings ...raja bharmal was sitting on his throne and right next to him was shehenshah-e-hind humayun..

the ministers were all seated in their places giving angry glares to raja bharmal,bcoz in front of them were rajendra and vimla all cuffed up and along with them the rajmata..never in the history of any rajvanshi kingdom had the royals been treated with such indignity..the ministers were not only furious,they just could not fantom the reason why someone like raja bharmal who always took care of his family could treat them thus..

MIN-HUMEIN KSHAMA KARIYE GA MAHARAJ PARANTU YEH SAB KYA HAI,RAJMATA YAHAN IS HALAT MAIN AAPKE BHAI AUR BHABHI KE SAATH.

RB-RAJENDRA YEH SAB KUCH POOCH RAHEIN HAIN,KOI UTTAR HAI AAPKE PASS YA HUM HI SABKO SACCHAI BATAYEIN.

rajendra and vimla were quiet ,they were really scared,they had never thought that they might also get caught up in this,they had hoped to pin this on humayun but knew that now it was not possible,they had already confessed everything in front of bharmal.

RB-HAMARE CHOTE BHAI NE,APNI PATNI AUR HAMARI MAASA KE SAATH MILKAR HAMARI BETI RAJKUMARI JODHA KA APHARAN KARVAYA HAI...

everyone gasped,shocked.they couldnt believe what they were hearing.how was this possible.this was the younger brother of the king of amer,why would he think of doing such a shamful act.

MIN-KSHAMA KARE MAHARAJ,PARANTU YEH AAISA KYUN KARENGE,HAMARE RAJ KI RAJKUMARI KI SAATH.

RB-INHONE YEH ISLIYE KIYA KYUNKI YEH NAHI CAHTE THEE KI HAMARE RAJYA KA SAMBANDH MUGHLON SE HO...YEH ITNA GIR CHUKE HAIN KI INHONE EK BAAR BHI NAHI SOCHA KI EK CHOTI SI BACCHI KO APNE MAATA PITA SE DUR KAR RAHEIN HAIN..YEH HI NAHI INHONE TOH HAMARI BACCHI KE SAATH...(bharmal couldnt continue,he was chocking up)

humayun took over,he knew his friend was not in a state to say anything else.with tears in his eyes humayun said

"INHONE APKI RAJKUMARI KO ZEHER DE DIYA HAI,HUMEIN NAHI PATA KI HAMARI RAJKUMARI KAISI HAIN,ZINDA HAIN BHI YA ..."

rajendra started laughing,he had lost his balance and was very happy with what he had done.

RAJ-HAAN HUMNE HI YEH SAB KIYA HAI,AUR RAJA BHARMAL NE JO BHI KAHA HAI WOH SAB SACH HAI,MAGAR APNE SOCHA HAI KI AAPNE KITNA BADA GUNAH KIYA HAI MAHARAJ..EK MUGHAL KO APNI BETI SAUMPNE KA FAISLA KARKE APNE RAJVANSHIYON SE DUSHMANI MOL LI.HUM KYUN BHUGTEIN APKE NIRNAY KO..HUMEIN JO THEEK LAGA HUMNE KIYA...

AB NA JODHA HAI,AUR NA HI IN MUGHLON SE AMER KA KOI SAMBANDH..AB NIBHATE RAHIYE SAMBANDH,HUMNE TOH APNE RAJYE KE MAATHE PAR LAGA KALANK MITA DIYA...MARVA DIYA APKI BETI KO...

mainavati could not take it anymore,she came out from behind the curtains and came to rajendra and vimla...there was no regret in their eyes...infact they were silently laughing,very happy and satisfied after taking jodha away from her loved ones...mainavati could not control herself and she gave a tight slap to both of them...

MN-HUMNE TUM DONON KO ITNA PYAAR DIYA...JAB TUMHARA BACCHA NAHI HO RAHA THA TAB TUMHE HOSLA BHI DIYA...TUMHARI SARI BHUL CHUK KO MAAF KIYA AUR YEH SILA DIYA TUMNE HUMEIN...HAMARI HI BETI KO MAR DALA..

JAAKO RAKHE SAIYAAN ,MAAR SAKE NA KOI
BAAL NA BANKA KAR SAKE CAHE JAG BAIRI HOYE

everyone looked behind to see shaguni bai entering the royal hall,with a small ambey maa ki murti and a smile on her face...

SG-CHINTA KYUN KARTI HO MAHARANI,JAB AMBEY MAA THARE SAATH HAIN TOH THAARI JODHA KA KOI BAAL BHI BAAKA NA KAR SAKE HAI...JODHA JAHAN BHI HAI BILKUL THEEK HAI...AAJ TERE DUSHMANON KA ACCHA SAMAY HAI,KAL TERA HOGA...SAB AMBEY MAA KI KRIPA HAI..UNHI KA CHAMATKAR HAI.

a small bonus part for my readers...hope u all like it.

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