Jodha tending to Jalal: SFF(CLOSED) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the mother son interaction.
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loved mother- son interaction
finally understood her mother's love
jodha kaha hai??????//
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part12: A father's wish

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Part14: Jodha pulls Jalal's leg

Hamida looks at Jodha smiling looking at her and Jalal: Jodha, beta aap

Jodha: Ammi jaan, hum abhi aaye

Hamida: Jalal, tum kaho to hum raat bar yahan tumhare paas rukjayen

Jalal: Nahi, aami jaan, aap jake aarma kijiye. Main teek hun

Hamida hugs him: Aap apna khayal rakhiye aur aaram kijiye. Aur kuch bhi chahiye ho toh hume kehelwa bejiyega. Thik hai

Jalal nods his head. Hamida turns to leave and looks at Jalal still holding her hand tight as if he never want to let go.

Hamida: Jalal

Jalal: Kya ammi jaan

Hamida looks at him and at him holding her hand tight. Jalal leaves her hand getting concious of Jodha. Hamida ruffles his hair in happiness and kisses his forehead before leaving for the night.

Jodha laughs: Aaj lagtha hai aap so nahi payenge

Jalal: Kyun

Jodha smiles: Kyunki aapki kwaish joh aami jaan puri karne wali hai

Jalal: Kwaish?

Edited by myviewprem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Very ausome nd lovely parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
I'm loving this story more and more!! I love your writing style👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wonderful update! Please continue👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Wow this is a superb update!! I'm loving how you are handling the relationships and I love how Jalal comforts Ruks but is perceptive enough to see that she is being possessive!!👏👏👏 Your dialogues are also spot-on!! Well done and keep it up😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg omg such a nice story...plss cont soon
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hey dear update soon... and if possible plz mention in ur heading when u made an update... so that it can be known...

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