~*~ FF - AkDha in Jungle ~*~ Part 37 Updated(Pg 135)Thread 1 Closed - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Liana.Wink

You'r a ⭐️

Seriously..Amazing..I Read All The Parts In One Ago..All The Parts Were Amazing..Especially Part 1 And Part 5 Were Awesome..The Way Jodha Aided Jalal Was Beautifully Written..Congratulations..I Hope You Write Much Well..😃


But I Want You To Clear My One Doubt..Please.. 😳
I Wanted To Know..
What Did You Mean By.."
She sat near him and closed her eyes and waited peacefully for her end." 😕

And Is Jalal In Love With Jodha..Or Vise-A-Versa..?????
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And Please PM Me..From The NExt Time..I Am Going To Send You Buddy Request..And Please Write Jodha Akbar..OR Something like that as the subject so I Could easily determine Jodha Akbar Posts..Please!!!!

First of all, Thanks a ton dear for appreciating!!😊 It means lot to me.😉
And by those lines , I meant that Now when she had done the healing part, she herself was not well!! She just sat and waited for her death ... as I already mentioned she was hiding something... So surprise coming in next update!!Embarrassed
Stay Tuned!! And thanx again :D😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
loved the way jodha aided jalal
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all friends.. I am so happy to see your response..Thanks so much!! Plz do like!!😉😳😆

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Part 6 :
It was night time. Jalal was still unconsious. But Jodha still had some consciousness. It was bitter cold. And still her clothes were somewhat wet.

She saw a shivering Jalal. She herself was shivering. She tried to get up and thought of lighting a fire.

But, no, SHe couldn't get up due to extreme weakness. She tried again and she stood.

SHe collected some woods from nearby and put to them fire by rubbing 2 stones. This was extremely difficult for her.

Now, both of them could feel little warmth with the fire. Jalal had healed much. She just waited for him to wake up.
Night passed by.
It was morning. Jalal opened his eyes slowly and soothing sunrays fell on his face. He didn't feel very much pain.

Infact, as he woke up, he felt quite at peace and his wounds were healing at fast pace.

His eyes went on Jodha who was lying beside him, He smiled by seeing her sleeping peacefully.

He saw his wounds were cleaned up, and treated well. He knew this must be Jodha who did this. He felt very happy.

Suddenly, something striked his mind. He remembered the scene of the day before. He remembered that she was hiing something from him.
Immediately, he turned around to Jodha and as soon he touched her.. He was in GREAT SHOCK.

She was very cold and pale. He checked for her pulse which was almost nil. He untied her dupatta and saw her lower back..which shocked him to the core...
He saw that Her back had been brutally bruised by the tiger. The skin had been scrapped off. She had lost a lot of blood.

He understood everything..Why Jodha was trying to hide..SHe knew she would die.. WHy did she still did so much for me?

He cried bitterly seeing her in this condition. He tied dupatta again, took her in his arms,, adjusted himself and Jodha on horse
and rode the horse faster than ever towards his Mahal..His eyes glowed with fear and determination..😊😊
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Hope You like it...😆😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice writing dear👍🏼.. carry on
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
wooww!!!
poor Jodha.. hope jalal will save her...
nice update continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice part...continue soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mashallah ... SubhanAllahhh ... Loved it dear 👏
You should replace the existing Director of Jodha Akbar. Ekta Ma'am should consider you instaed of the exsiting one.!!!! TRP Asmaaan phaad degi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing part..really..loved it..Jalal is so good..I would edit this comment later.. :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG OMG Guys!! Your comments are so so precious to me.. Thanks a ton to all!! I am really happy..Gonna write amazing story now!! Plz do like them!!

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Part 7 :
Jalal and Jodha had reached the Palace. Everyone including people, ministers, Begums, Maham Anga, Hameeda Begum etc. all were shocked to see both of their states.

They saw how badly they were injured especially Jalal. They all were unaware of Jodha's injury. Ruqaiya was fuming with jealousy. Jalal held Jodha in her arms, he was still lost in a trance beyond repair.
He went straight into Jodha's chamber and ordered everyone to stay away in loud voice. His voice had anger.

He called the the Doctors and allowed Jodha's 2 Dasis to stay there. He watched Jodha's face which was so calm amd peaceful.

He had never felt such pain before. His eyes had a fear of loss. He begged for first time. He said - Humari Jodha ko bacha li jiye.
Inhe kuch nahi hona chahhiye"

Moti and Reva were surprised and focussed on how Jalal said " HUMARI JODHA" ...

They prayed to krishna to save their Jodha. Doctors cleaned her wound. They were really shocked to see that Jodha had been deeply wounded. They put the herbs and necessary medicine on her wounds. They wrapped her wound.

Jalal was watching each and every move.

Moti said - Gustakhi maaf Shahenshah lekin aapko bhi bahut aaram ki zarurat hai!
Jalal didnt say anything. He didnt want to leave Jodha even for one second. But then, He will just go and come soon so that
he can care for her better.
Jalal, before leaving room, asked the doctors about Jodha, they said It is very critical condition but they will do their 200%
to save her.

Jalal tears rolled down and he left the room.
As he moved out of room, He saw everyone standing out in Garden. They had many questions. But he didnt pay any attention.

He also saw Maham Anga, and looked at her with highly angered eyes. Maham noticed this. She was fearful.
Jalal went straight in his room. Doctors came to attend him. They examined him and applied all necessary medicines
on his wounds.
What they said after examination made Jalal even more sorry. They said - Shahenshah! Although you have a lot of injuries but we couldnt find any serious injury. All your injuries have already healed to high extent. This is nothing but Allah's blessing that your inner strength healed your injuries. We have applied some more medicines just to make you completely alright."
Shahenshah was lost in thoughts. Why did she do this? WHy she saved me when she was also dying? How can she leave me?

He freshened up and went straight into Jodha's Chamber. He saw the highly tensed faces of Doctors. Moti and Reva were crying bitterly
in a corner.

He asked with loudest voice ever - Kya hua?? Aap log aise kyun ro rahe hain?
Doctors trembled. They said - Maaf kijiyega Shahenshah! Hum Begum Jodha ko nahi bacha paye...
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Dont worry friends!! You wont be disapppointed!! I just wanted some twists!! Stay tuned!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
You made my heart skip a beat at the end ... Whhoooaaa... Whatttaaa a twist 😳 Please save my JODHA ... Won't like to witness JALAL in tears all of a sudden 😵
Waiting for another part... You are simply awesome.!!! loads of hugs and kissesss my sweetheart ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ carry on asap

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