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Posted: 11 years ago

All the Best Pallavi My Jaan!!😊😊👍🏼👍🏼 Exams phodkar aa aur humein achi se update de!😃😛😉

Eagerly waiting for Update! Update Pljjj 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA



OOOHHH OKK...
I BE WAITING DEAR
ALL D BEST DEAR👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

thanku shreshtha di...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

All the Best Pallavi My Jaan!!👍🏼 Exams phodkar aa aur humein achi se update de!😃😛😉

Eagerly waiting for Update! Update Pljjj 🤣

thanku nancy my jaan...🤗
i promise i ll give a phodu update whenever i ll give it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Pallavi! Vow ! UR amazing excellent! Loved every chapter of this story!
Last chapter dream sequence is awesome! You writing is addictive! I read entire story with out stopping! Can't wait for more ! update soon!👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

👏Pallavi! Vow ! UR amazing excellent! Loved every chapter of this story!

Last chapter dream sequence is awesome! You writing is addictive! I read entire story with out stopping! Can't wait for more ! update soon!👏👏👏

thanku dear...
glad u liked it...
ab kahin mat jana...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey friends...😊
i m back to share a badi wali khushkhabri...😃
yaar i got selected in the WIPRO campus drive...
yes u r guessing it right...😆
i got my first job yaar...😎
so thought of giving you guys a treat before my final exams start...😆
so here is the next update...😳
forgive the writing mistakes... 😭

Chapter 18:-

(jodha sat in front of kanha's idol...and looked at him with gratitude, devotion and dedication...her eyes got filled with tears of happiness...were continuously fixed on him...and today she could see the reflexion of his love*jalal* in kanha's face...as if he is also making her realize that her search has finally come to an end...she has found the right person...the person who could make her feel secured...a person who could make her feel completed...she could actually feel the happiness of being loved and being in love at the same time...a wide smile occurred on her rosy lips that lit up her face with glow of love...she was looking so divine...just like a flower of god's early prayer...she joined her hands and bowed her head down to thank his kanha...and prayed silently...she again looked up with a smile...gazing at his gopal without even a blink...)

Jodha:-aapki lila bhi kitni vichitra hai na kanha...kab kiske jivan me kaun sa badlav layege...koi nahi janta...chahe to ek shan me kisi ko raja se rank bana de ...aur chahe to dusre hi shan use akash ki uchaiyo tak pahucha de...ab hume hi le lijiye na...hume kaha gyat tha ke jis vyakti se hum itni ghrina karte the ke use dekhna to dur...uske bare me sunna tak hume paap ke bhanti lagta tha...ek din usi vyakti ko dekhne ke liye...unke shabdo ko sunne ke liye humara man itna vyakul ho jayega...kitne dukhi the hum jab ye vivah tay hua tha...esa lag raha tha mano humare jivan ka ant hone ja raha ho...hume kaha pata tha ke ...wo ant nahi balki humare naye jivan ka prarambh tha...

Humne kabhi swapn me bhi nahi socha tha...ke jisne ghrina karna sikhaya hai...prem ka arth bhi wohi batlayega...jisne aansu diye the ...hansna bhi wohi sikhayega...aur aaj humare liye satya bus itna hai ke hum unse prem karte hai...itna prem ke unke bina apne jivan ki kalpana kar pana bhi asambhav hai humare liye...hum aapko bata nahi sakte kanha...ke hum kitne khush hai..ke ye anubhav kitna adhbhut hai...hume samajh hi nahi aa raha..kin shabdo me aapka dhanyavad kare...

(she was laughing lightly and simultaneously crying too...she again joined her hands...)

Dhanyavad kanha...unhe humare jivan me lane ke liye...is prem ka anubhav karane ke liye...

Dhanywad kanha...dhanyawad...(she was staring at kanha's idol like she has lost all his senses...like she is sanely in love...like she is not able to express and handle the load of happiness she is going through ...so just gazing at him with gratitude in her eyes...)

*BG STARTS*

*TERI DIWANI...(KAILASH KHER)*

*preet ki lat mohe esi lagi*

*ho gayi mai matwari*

*bal bal jau apne piya ko ...*

*hey mai jau wari wari...*

(she lifted up kanha's idol in her hands...still gazing at him...whispered..."dhanywad kanha"...moti looking at her with smile and teary eyes)

*mohe sudh budh nahi rahi tan man ki*

*ye to jane duniya sari*

*bebas aur lachar firu mai*

*hari mai dil hari...hari mai SSS dil hari...*(she hugged her kanha tightly...close to her heart...laughing lightly...)

*tere naam se ji lu...tere naam se mar jau*

(she stood up hugging kanha's idol...and broke the hug...extremely happy and thanking him again and again)

*teri jaan ke sadke me kuch esa kar jau...*

*tune kya kar dala ...mar gayi mai...mit gayi mai...*

*ho ji...haan ji...ho gayi mai...*

(she started dancing in joy with kanha's idol in her hands...twirling around in the room)

*teri diwani...diwani...*

*teri diwani...diwani...*

*tune kya kar dala... mar gayi mai...mit gayi mai... *

*ho ji... haan ji...ho gayi mai...*

*teri diwani...diwani...* -2

(she jumped and danced around in happiness with kanha's idol...then put it down and held moti's hand and started dancing with her...*like we used to do in our childhood...holding each other hand and twirling in a circle...*...she was extremely happy...she was not able to handle it...she wanted to tell everyone that she is in love...she wanted to tell her love how deeply and sanely...she is in love with him...she came outside running...moti tried to hold her...but she was too fast to catch that day...as if flying in the air...as if she has got wings today...no one can stop her today from expressing her emotions...she ran through the balcony and the whole corridor...with her dupatta in her hands flying behind her head...)

*ishq junoon jab had se badh jaye*-2

*haste haste aashiq suli chad jaye...*

(she passed through the garden area and stopped...breathing heavily...she never felt like this before ...the air was never that cold and soothing...the sceneries of nature never gave her that much pleasure before...the world never seemed so beautiful before...it seemed like seven colors of the rainbow were filling her life with seven thousand colors of love and affection too...the nature itself was congratulating her ...Blessing her...she could feel the fragrance of various flowers around..the birds chirping and singing songs of romance...it seemed like the whole atmosphere was in love along with her...she looked up at the sky ...in every direction to receive their wishes...)

*ishq ka jadu sir chadker bole*

*khub laga do pehre raste rab khole...*

*yahi ishq di marzi hai yahi rab di marzi hai* -2

*tere bin jina kaisa...haan khudgarzi hai...*

(on the other hand ...jalal was also walking on the terrace...enjoying the calm,serene and blissful atmosphere...when suddenly a soft breeze of air touched his face gently as informing him about someone's arrival...he could feel her presence around him...he turned and looked in every direction in search of his love...and finally his eyes stopped at the sight that left him completely mesmerized...there she was...in the garden...very much visible to him...dancing with joy...laughing...playing with the butterflies...looking absolute fragile...beautiful and divine...he had so many women in his life...but never ever had he seen anyone who was so pure, so innocent like her...he just stared at her beauty with immense love in his eyes...he smirked at his luck ...as if teasing all the other men of the world...that he had found the most beautiful girl of this whole universe as his love...)

*tune kya kar dala...mar gayi mai...mit gayi mai *

*ho ji...haan ji...ho gayi mai...*

*teri diwani...diwani*

(After some time...jodha moved further towards a little fountain nearby...jalal too rushed in the same direction...actually he was following her...the only difference was that... jodha was in garden and he was on terrace...whenever she used to move...jalal quickly used to move to a location...from where he could watch her easily... ...jodha picked up a hand full of water...and threw it towards the sky as if teasing him...but it returned in no time and fell on jodha herself...she smiled playfully and patted her forehead...jalal too laughed at her innocence... .. )

(jodha was dancing her heart out...her legs were not stopping neither she felt tired even for a minute...meanwhile jalal noticed a bandi going somewhere with a plate in her hands that was full of rose petals of different colors...a plan came in his mind rapidly...he moved to that bandi and stopped her...took the plate from her hands...smiled and signaled her to leave...he turned to carry out his plan further...but couldn't find a single trace of her...he became really restless and searched in every direction...he never felt that much impatient before to see anyone...finally his eyes caught her... dancing in the garden area which was below the balcony...he felt relieved and rushed to the balcony...jodha was twirling fast in a circle when something really soft collided with her face...but she ignored that...after some time she felt that touch all over her body...she opened her eyes to find what is it?? But this turned to be the most pleasant scenario of her life.. )

*Hey mai rang rangili diwani*

*Hey mai albeli mai mastani*

*Gau bajau sabko rijhau*

*Hey mai din dharam se begani*

*Hey mai diwani mai diwani*

(it was jalal who was showering flowers on her from the balcony which were adding more charm to her beauty ultimately...unaware of it she enjoyed the pleasant shower , admiring their presence all over her and danced even more...playing with the rose petals...she finally looked up to find out about the source of it...and her eyes met jalal's...and they had an eye lock...she witnessed jalal showering flowers on her with his one hand...having a wide smile on his lips with irresistible passion in his eyes...finally the plate became empty but they were still filled with the same intensity of love towards each other...jodha ...unable to meet his passionate gaze anymore...blushed really heavily...and ran away from there...she quickly made her way out from there ...Afraid of being caught by jalal...still looking behind...but collided with someone... )


thanku friends...😊

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Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww Pallavi...its really awesome🥳🥳🥳🥳

waiting for next update😳

p.s: hy im the 1st one to command🥳🥳🥳🥳
Edited by ...hema23... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

WOowwwowoowww!!! ❤️❤️ Teri Deewani..Deewani ❤️❤️❤️ WOnderful Chapter Pallavi my sherni ❤️👏👏👏 I was in Akdha dreamland ❤️❤️ The way you write and the way to describe is seriously unique!!😳👏👏👏 I have loved this FF from the very starting, but now I feel, I am addicted to it..😳😆👏 You are just so superb! You bring in amazing creativity and songs..Amazing dialogues!👏👏All thanks to you😳 Yar...How can you write such a Master Piece? It was to0o0o0 gooodd!!👏👏👏 All the lyrics, her dancing..Jalal following her...yar..ab aur mat tadpa..un dono ki SR karwa.😳.pljj...U'll rock it I know!😳😳 Update pljjj🤣

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOwww!!!👏👏👏 You got selected at WIPRO..😳😳 Lovely my sherni...congratulations n celebrations.. Ye update dene ke liye BAHUT BADA THANKS...will read it aaram se...maza lekar..😛😛 Congo baby!
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Posted: 11 years ago
congarts that u have got selected in wipro
wonderful update thnks for pm

Edited by ayanarappa - 11 years ago

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